Alicia Daydream – Act Three (One More Branch)

I’ve you’ve been reading my stuff, you already know about my strange obsession with Alicia Western, and the fact that I’m creating an app for interactive branching storytelling (repo here). I wanted to test the solidity of my app by playing through the whole daydream sequence. This is the third act as far as I cared to go at the moment.


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You lean forward slightly, keeping your voice measured. “Dr. Marchesi, there’s another consideration. The hospital has provided excellent care for four months—that deserves recognition beyond simply covering fees.” You glance at Hypatia, who nods fractionally. “We’re prepared to make a substantial donation to Ospedale San Raffaele’s neurology department. Let’s say two hundred thousand dollars. Unrestricted funds for research, equipment, whatever you determine would be most valuable.”

Marchesi’s expression shifts—not quite shock, but close. “Mr. Ureña, that’s… extremely generous. But I can’t accept a donation in exchange for—”

“Not in exchange for anything,” Hypatia interrupts smoothly. “The donation recognizes the quality of care Roberto has received here. Separately, there’s a professional opportunity we’d like to discuss.” She taps the research folder. “When Roberto recovers—and we believe he will—his case will represent significant neurological interest. A patient who defied a persistent vegetative state diagnosis after four months of minimal brain activity. That’s publishable research, Dr. Marchesi. We’d like to offer you co-authorship on the case study.”

(Note by me: as I mentioned in the previous post, the LLM decided that “Bobby” stood for “Roberto.” Not changing it.)

Marchesi goes very still. You can see the gears turning—professional ambition warring with skepticism. “If he recovers,” he says carefully. “Which you understand is statistically—”

“Unlikely,” you finish. “We understand. But if it happens—if Roberto Western wakes up and regains function—you’ll have documented the entire case from admission through coma to recovery. Your notes, your observations, your initial diagnosis. All of it becomes part of a landmark study.” You pause. “Johns Hopkins would be the lead institution, given Dr. Chen’s involvement. But your name would be on the paper. Your hospital credited. Your contribution to neurological science recognized.”

Alicia watches Marchesi’s face, her hands white-knuckled on the portfolio. She’s barely breathing.

Marchesi picks up Bobby’s file, flips through pages of his own meticulous notes. “I’ve been documenting everything,” he says quietly. “Every test, every observation. Four months of data.” He looks up at Hypatia. “You genuinely believe he might recover?”

“I believe the research supports the possibility,” Hypatia says. “And I believe Miss Western deserves the chance to care for her brother while we find out. Even if recovery doesn’t occur—even if your initial diagnosis proves correct—you’ll have contributed to our understanding of persistent vegetative states. That has value.”

Marchesi sets down the file. His expression has changed—still cautious, but no longer closed. “The donation you mentioned. Two hundred thousand dollars. That would fund our entire research budget for three years. We could upgrade equipment, hire additional staff, expand our stroke rehabilitation program.”

“Then it’s well-spent,” you say. “We’ll arrange the transfer through the hospital’s development office. Certified funds, properly documented. No strings attached.”

“And if Roberto doesn’t recover?” Marchesi asks, looking directly at Alicia. “If six months from now, a year from now, his condition remains unchanged—what then?”

Alicia meets his eyes. “Then I’ll have cared for my brother for as long as he lived. That’s enough for me.”

Marchesi is silent for nearly a minute. The office clock ticks. Somewhere down the hall, a nurse’s shoes squeak on linoleum. Finally, he opens a drawer, pulls out a form—patient transfer authorization. “I’ll need documentation from Dr. Brennan in Mississippi confirming he’ll assume care. I’ll need proof of medical transport capability. And I’ll need Miss Western to sign acknowledgment that she’s assuming full responsibility for her brother’s ongoing treatment.”

“We have all of that,” Hypatia says, already pulling documents from her briefcase.

Marchesi begins filling out the form, his pen scratching across official hospital stationery. “The transfer can happen as early as tomorrow. I’ll need to brief the nursing staff, arrange for copies of all medical records, coordinate with the pharmacy for his medications.” He glances up. “How quickly can your transport aircraft be ready?”

“By noon tomorrow,” you say. “We can have Roberto in Mississippi by evening, local time.”

Marchesi nods slowly, signs the bottom of the form, then slides it across the desk to Alicia. “Miss Western, please read this carefully before you sign. You’re acknowledging that you’re removing your brother from hospital care against medical advice. You’re assuming all risks associated with his transfer and ongoing treatment. You understand that his prognosis remains extremely poor, and that this decision—”

“I understand,” Alicia says. She picks up the pen, signs her name in clear, steady script. “Thank you, Dr. Marchesi. For everything you’ve done for Bobby. For listening to us tonight. For giving him this chance.”

Marchesi takes the signed form, places it in Bobby’s file. “I hope you’re right, Miss Western. I hope your brother wakes up and proves me wrong. I’ll be… very pleased to write that paper with Dr. Chen if he does.” He stands, extends his hand. “I’ll have everything ready for transfer by 10 AM tomorrow. You can collect Roberto then.”

You shake his hand. Hypatia does the same. Alicia stands last, and when Marchesi takes her hand, his expression softens. “Your brother is fortunate to have you,” he says quietly. “Whatever happens, know that.”

The three of you walk out of Ospedale San Raffaele at 11:52 PM. The December air is sharp and cold. Alicia makes it to the Mercedes before her legs give out—she leans against the car door, shaking. Not crying. Just shaking with the release of tension that’s been building since October.

“We did it,” she whispers. “He’s coming home. Bobby’s coming home.”

Hypatia places a hand on her shoulder. “Ten hours from now, we’ll be back here. We’ll bring him to the mansion. To the medical bay. To you.”

You unlock the car. “There’s one more thing we need to arrange before tomorrow. The transport aircraft—we need it here, fueled, with medical staff who understand 1972 protocols on the outside and 2046 life support on the inside. Hypatia, how long will that take?”

“Three hours to retrieve the aircraft and crew from 2046, brief them on the cover story, and position them at Milan Malpensa Airport,” Hypatia says. “I’ll handle it tonight while you take Alicia back to the mansion. By the time you both wake up, everything will be ready.”

Alicia slides into the back seat of the Mercedes, still trembling. “I can’t believe Marchesi agreed. I thought—I was so sure he’d refuse, that we’d have to steal Bobby in the middle of the night like criminals.”

“He’s a scientist,” you say, starting the engine. “He evaluates evidence. We gave him evidence—and a reason to hope he might be wrong about Bobby’s prognosis. That was enough.” You pull out of the hospital parking lot, heading back toward the quiet street where you first materialized. “Now we wait ten hours. Then we bring your brother home.”

The drive back through Milan’s empty streets takes seven minutes. You park in the original spot, turn off the engine. “Ready to go back to Mississippi?”

Alicia nods. “I’m ready. I’m—I’m actually ready.”

You activate your neural interface. The Mercedes interior dissolves, replaced by the familiar composite walls of the mansion’s medical bay. The empty bed waits, calibrated to Bobby’s specifications. In ten hours, it won’t be empty anymore.

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The medical bay feels different now—no longer a sterile preparation space but a room hours away from its purpose. Alicia stands beside the empty bed, one hand resting on its edge, her fingers tracing the smooth composite surface. She’s been standing there since you materialized back from Milan, silent, absorbing the reality that in ten hours Bobby will be lying here.

You move to her side, keeping your voice low. “You should try to sleep. Tomorrow’s going to be long—the flight back, getting Bobby settled, making sure everything’s stable. You’ll need your strength.”

She doesn’t look away from the bed. “I don’t think I can sleep. Every time I close my eyes I see him—the way he looked in October, all those tubes and machines, his face so still.” Her voice catches. “What if he looks worse now? What if four more months have—”

“Marchesi’s notes said he’s stable,” you say firmly. “No deterioration. The hospital’s been taking good care of him. He’ll look the same as when you left.”

“The same as when I fled,” she corrects, and there’s bitterness in it. “I ran away, Jon. I left him there because I couldn’t stand being pressured to kill him, and I ran.”

“You protected him,” you counter. “If you’d stayed, if they’d worn you down—”

“I know.” She finally turns to face you, and her eyes are dry but haunted. “I know I did the right thing. But it doesn’t change the fact that I abandoned him in a foreign hospital for two months while I hid in Stella Maris planning to freeze to death in the woods.” She gestures at the medical bay, the mansion above. “And now I have all this. This impossible gift. And tomorrow I bring him home and I wait four months to see if he opens his eyes, and if he does—” She stops.

“If he does?” you prompt gently.

Alicia’s hands clench. “If he does, what do I tell him? ‘Hello, Bobby, you’ve been in a coma for four months, I bought a mansion with help from a time traveler, there’s an AI living in the basement, and by the way I was going to kill myself but changed my mind’?” She laughs, and it’s almost hysterical. “How do I explain any of this?”

Hypatia materializes at the entrance to the medical bay, her expression concerned. “You don’t have to explain it all at once. Bobby will wake confused, disoriented. The first days will be about physical recovery—relearning how to speak, to move. You’ll have time to introduce concepts gradually.”

“And if he thinks I’ve lost my mind?” Alicia asks. “If he thinks the time travel and the AI and the augmented reality mathematics are all delusions, that I’ve finally cracked completely?”

“Then I demonstrate time travel in front of him,” you say simply. “I disappear and reappear. I bring him objects from other eras. I show him Hypatia’s capabilities. Bobby’s a physicist—he’ll understand the evidence.”

Alicia shakes her head. “You don’t know Bobby. He’s… he was always the rational one. The one who explained things, who made sense of the world. I was the one who saw things that weren’t there, who heard music in colors, who talked to visitors no one else could see.” She looks at you. “What if he wakes up and decides I need to go back to Stella Maris? What if he thinks this whole setup is me having a psychotic break?”

The fear in her voice is real and sharp. You realize she’s not just worried about Bobby’s physical recovery—she’s terrified of his judgment. That the brother she loves, the one person who understood her, will wake up and decide she’s lost.

“Alicia,” Hypatia says quietly, “Bobby begged Jon to save you. In 2006, after decades of grief, the first thing he asked was for Jon to go back and prevent your death. He didn’t ask for wealth or power or to undo his own mistakes. He asked for you to live.” She pauses. “That’s not the request of someone who would commit you for accepting help.”

“That’s future Bobby,” Alicia whispers. “Bobby after I’m already dead, after he’s had thirty years to idealize our relationship. This Bobby—1972 Bobby—he’s the one who stopped me from kissing him twice. Who told me we couldn’t be together because we’re siblings. Who loves me but also… fears what I feel for him.”

The confession hangs in the air. You’ve known about the complexity of Alicia’s feelings for Bobby—the 2006 Bobby told you everything—but hearing her voice it directly is different.

You choose your words carefully. “Then maybe the four months before he wakes are also for you. To figure out what kind of relationship you actually want with him. Not the one you had, not the one you fantasized about—the one that’s possible now, in this timeline, with everything that’s changed.”

Alicia’s eyes search yours. “What if I don’t know what I want?”

“Then you have time to find out,” you say. “But first, you need to sleep. Because in ten hours we’re bringing Bobby home, and you need to be steady for that. Everything else—the explanations, the relationship questions, the waiting—all of it comes after.”

She’s quiet for a long moment, then nods slowly. “Will you stay? Not—not like last night, not holding me. Just… in the room. So if I wake up panicking I know this is real.”

“I’ll stay,” you confirm.

Hypatia steps forward. “I’ll be in the command center completing the aircraft arrangements. If you need anything, just call for me. I’ll hear you.” She meets Alicia’s eyes. “You’re going to get through tomorrow. And the day after. And all the days until April 27th. You’re stronger than you know.”

Alicia manages a faint smile. “I’m terrified.”

“That’s not weakness,” Hypatia says. “That’s honesty. Sleep now. Let Jon keep watch. Tomorrow you bring your brother home.”

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Hypatia nods once and dissolves—not walking away, simply ceasing to occupy the space, her particles scattering into nonexistence. The medical bay settles into silence.

Alicia stands beside Bobby’s empty bed for another minute, her hand still resting on the composite surface. Then she moves to the small chair in the corner—the one you’d positioned for overnight monitoring once Bobby arrives—and curls into it. Not lying down. Not surrendering to sleep. Just folding herself small, knees drawn up, arms wrapped around her shins.

You take up position against the wall where you can see both her and the bed. The lighting in the medical bay is soft, calibrated for patient rest, and it makes Alicia look even younger than twenty-one. Fragile in a way that has nothing to do with physical strength.

“I keep thinking about what I’ll say to him,” she murmurs after a while. “When he first opens his eyes. If he opens his eyes.” She rests her chin on her knees. “Do I tell him immediately that he’s been in a coma for four months? Or do I let him think it’s only been days, ease him into it?”

“You tell him the truth,” you say quietly. “Bobby’s not a child. He’ll want to know.”

“The truth.” She laughs, bitter and soft. “Which truth? That he crashed in Italy and I fled to Wisconsin and planned to die in the snow? That a time traveler from the future saved me and bought me a mansion and built a medical bay in the basement? That I’ve been living here for three days playing video games while he’s been braindead in Milan?” Her voice cracks. “Which part of that sounds sane, Jon?”

You don’t answer immediately. The question isn’t rhetorical—she’s genuinely asking, genuinely terrified that the story of her survival will sound like proof of her madness.

“You tell him he crashed,” you say finally. “You tell him you refused to let them end his life support. You tell him you found help—people who believed he could recover—and you brought him home. Everything else can wait until he’s stronger.”

Alicia is quiet, processing. “And if he asks about you? About Hypatia? About this place?”

“Then you tell him we’re friends. People who wanted to help. The details—the time travel, the technology—those can come later, when he’s had time to see the evidence himself.” You shift against the wall. “Bobby’s a physicist. He’ll understand proof when he sees it. But first he needs to understand that he’s safe, that you’re safe, that he’s home.”

“Home.” She tests the word like it might break in her mouth. “I’ve never really had a home. Not since Mother died. Grandmother’s house was just a place I stayed between school terms. Stella Maris was a cage with voluntary locks. This mansion—” She looks around the medical bay, at the advanced equipment, the careful preparation. “I’ve been here three days and it still doesn’t feel real. How is Bobby supposed to accept it in three seconds?”

“He won’t,” you admit. “Not at first. But he’ll see you—alive, present, taking care of him. That will be real enough to start with.”

She’s quiet again. Minutes pass. You can see her trying to settle, trying to let exhaustion take her, but her mind won’t stop circling. The fear of Bobby’s judgment, the weight of tomorrow, the impossible task of explaining her new reality to the one person whose opinion has always mattered most.

“Jon?” Her voice is very small. “What if he wakes up and he’s different? What if the crash changed him—his personality, his memories, who he is? What if I get him back but he’s not… Bobby anymore?”

The question cuts deeper than the others. It’s not about logistics or explanations—it’s about loss. The possibility that even if Bobby’s body recovers, the person she loves might be gone.

“Then you’ll love whoever he becomes,” you say. “Because that’s what love is. Not attachment to a fixed image, but commitment to a person through all their changes. Bobby might be different. He might need months to fully return to himself. But he’ll still be your brother. That doesn’t change.”

Alicia presses her face against her knees. “I’m not sure I know how to love someone without needing them to be exactly what I need them to be. I’ve spent so long imagining Bobby as my—as the one person who understands me, who sees me clearly, who doesn’t try to fix or reduce or manage me. What if the real Bobby can’t be that person? What if I’ve built him up into something he never was?”

You recognize the fear beneath the question. It’s not really about Bobby changing—it’s about Alicia confronting the gap between the relationship she’s idealized and the relationship that actually exists. The brother she loves versus the brother she’s constructed in her loneliness.

“Then you’ll find out who he actually is,” you say gently. “And you’ll decide what kind of relationship is possible with that person. Not the fantasy. The reality.” You pause. “But Alicia—that works both ways. Bobby will also have to accept who you actually are. Not his little sister frozen at fourteen. Not the mathematician he remembers from university. You, now, after everything you’ve survived. That’s going to require adjustment on his part too.”

She lifts her head, considering. “I hadn’t thought about that. That he might have his own fixed image of me that doesn’t match who I’ve become.” A faint, strained smile. “God, we’re going to be a mess when he wakes up, aren’t we?”

“Probably,” you admit. “But you’ll figure it out. One conversation at a time, one day at a time. You don’t have to solve everything in the first week.”

Alicia unfolds slightly, stretching her legs out. “I don’t know how to do this. How to wait four months. How to take care of him while he’s unconscious. How to hope without letting hope destroy me if he doesn’t wake up.” She looks at you directly. “How did you do it? Fifteen hundred years of walking through time alone, losing everyone you cared about over and over. How did you not go mad?”

The question is raw and genuine. You consider how to answer honestly without overwhelming her.

“I did go mad,” you say quietly. “Several times. I spent a century in the 8th century refusing to speak to anyone. I spent fifty years in the 1600s trying to drink myself to death, which doesn’t work when you’re functionally immortal. I’ve had periods where I believed nothing mattered, where I treated people as temporary amusements because I knew they’d be dust in a blink.” You meet her eyes. “And then I’d meet someone who reminded me why humanity is worth preserving. Why individual lives matter even if they’re brief. Why love is real even when it ends. And I’d come back to myself. Not fixed, not healed—just willing to keep going.”

Alicia absorbs this. “And Hypatia? How does she fit into that?”

“Hypatia is the first person I’ve met in fifteen hundred years who won’t leave me,” you say simply. “Because she’s not biological. She can travel with me. She chooses to stay. That changes everything—having someone who knows all of you, all your history, and still wants to be present.” You pause. “She’s not a replacement for human connection. But she’s proof that companionship is possible even in impossible circumstances.”

Alicia nods slowly. “I think I understand that. The visitors—the hallucinations—they’re not companionship, but they’re proof I’m not entirely alone inside my own head. Even if they’re just fragments of my mind, they’re company.” She hesitates. “Have you met them? The visitors? Can you see them?”

“No,” you admit. “They’re yours. But that doesn’t make them less real to you. And if they quiet down now that you have actual people around—Bobby, me, Hypatia—that’s not proof they were nothing. Just proof you needed them less.”

She considers this, then finally shifts in the chair, trying to find a position that might allow sleep. “Stay,” she says again. “Don’t leave. I need to know someone’s watching.”

“I’ll be here,” you confirm. “All night. Until we leave for Milan at nine.”

Alicia closes her eyes. Her breathing doesn’t slow into sleep—not yet—but she stops talking, stops questioning. The medical bay settles into a vigil. You against the wall, her curled in the chair, Bobby’s empty bed between you like a promise or a threat.

The hours pass slowly. Alicia doesn’t sleep—you can tell from the tension in her shoulders, the occasional shift of position, the way her breathing never fully deepens. She’s too afraid to let go, too terrified that sleep will reveal everything as delusion. So she stays conscious, hovering in the space between waking and rest, while you keep watch.

Around 4 AM, she speaks again without opening her eyes. “Thank you for not giving up on me. For believing I was worth saving even when I didn’t believe it myself.”

“You were always worth saving,” you say. “You just couldn’t see it from inside the story you were telling yourself.”

“The story where I walk into the woods and freeze.” She opens her eyes, stares at Bobby’s bed. “That story’s over now. I don’t know what the new story is yet, but at least it has more than one ending.”

The medical bay’s clock marks 4:17 AM. Five hours and forty-three minutes until you return to Milan. Five hours and forty-three minutes until Bobby Western comes home.

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You move from the wall to the chair where Alicia sits curled and tense. She doesn’t resist when you lift her gently, settling into the chair yourself and arranging her across your lap, her head against your chest. Her body is rigid at first—every muscle locked, as if relaxation itself is a threat.

“I’ve got you,” you murmur. “You’re safe. Bobby’s safe. Everything’s arranged. You can let go for a few hours.”

She makes a sound that might be a laugh or a sob. “I don’t know how to let go anymore. I’ve been holding on so tight for so long—holding on to the plan to die, then holding on to the plan to live. I don’t know what happens if I stop.”

“You sleep,” you say simply. “That’s what happens. Your body gets rest. Your mind gets quiet. And when you wake up, we go get Bobby.”

Alicia’s fingers clutch at your shirt. “What if I dream about the woods? About walking into the snow? I still dream about it sometimes—the white dress, the red sash, the cold that stops hurting after a while. What if I dream I went through with it?”

You tighten your arms around her. “Then you wake up here. In this room. In my arms. And you remember that you chose differently. That you’re alive.”

She’s quiet for a long moment, and gradually—so gradually you almost don’t notice—the tension begins to drain from her shoulders. Her breathing deepens slightly. The clock marks 4:23 AM.

“Jon?” Her voice is drowsy now, finally. “When Bobby wakes up in April… will you still be here? Or will you go back to your own time, your own life?”

The question catches you off guard. You haven’t thought that far ahead—haven’t considered what your role will be once Bobby recovers, once Alicia is stable, once the crisis has passed.

“I’ll be here as long as you need me,” you say. “Whether that’s four months or four years or forty. I don’t abandon people I care about.”

“Forty years.” She sounds almost amused. “That’s nothing to you, is it? You’ve lived fifteen hundred. Forty more is barely a blink.”

“It’s not about the duration,” you tell her. “It’s about the meaning. I’ve lived through centuries that meant nothing. And I’ve lived through days that changed everything. Time isn’t measured in years—it’s measured in moments that matter.”

Alicia shifts slightly, nestling closer. “This matters,” she whispers. “Right now. This matters.”

“Yes,” you agree. “It does.”

Her breathing slows further. The rigid alertness in her body continues to dissolve. You can feel the exact moment she crosses from waking consciousness into the edge of sleep—that boundary where the mind finally surrenders its vigilance.

The medical bay is silent except for the quiet hum of equipment on standby. Bobby’s bed waits in the soft light, ready for its purpose. Outside, December 26th is beginning to dawn—the day you’ll bring Bobby Western home.

Alicia’s hand relaxes against your chest, her fingers uncurling. Her face, pressed against you, loses the haunted tension that’s been carved into it for months. She looks young again—not fragile, but simply young. Twenty-one years old and sleeping in someone’s arms because she trusts them to keep watch.

You settle in for the vigil. Five hours until Milan. Five hours until everything changes again. But for now, in this moment, Alicia is safe and sleeping and alive. That’s enough.

The clock marks 4:47 AM when her breathing finally achieves the deep, steady rhythm of genuine rest. You don’t move. Don’t shift position. You hold her through the remaining hours of darkness, keeping the promise you made: to stay, to watch, to be present.

Around 7 AM, Hypatia materializes silently at the entrance to the medical bay. She takes in the scene—you in the chair, Alicia asleep in your arms—and nods once in approval. She doesn’t speak, doesn’t disturb. Just stands there for a moment, bearing witness, then dissolves again.

At 8:15 AM, Alicia stirs. Her eyes open slowly, confused for a moment about where she is, then focusing on your face. Recognition and relief flood her features.

“I slept,” she says, wonder in her voice. “I actually slept.”

“Almost four hours,” you confirm. “Good, deep sleep. How do you feel?”

She considers, taking inventory of her body and mind. “Steadier. Still terrified, but steadier.” She sits up slowly, reluctant to leave the safety of your arms but recognizing the need to prepare. “What time do we leave?”

“Nine o’clock. Hypatia has the aircraft positioned at a private airfield forty minutes from here. We’ll be in Milan by early afternoon local time, at the hospital by two.” You help her stand. “Do you want to eat something first? Change clothes?”

Alicia looks down at herself—still wearing the simple dress she put on yesterday morning in this same room. “I should look… I don’t know. Presentable. Like someone capable of taking care of Bobby. Not like someone who just spent the night terrified in a basement.”

Hypatia rematerializes, this time with a garment bag. “I took the liberty of retrieving appropriate clothing. Something professional but comfortable. And I’ve prepared breakfast—nothing heavy, just enough to steady you for the flight.”

Alicia accepts the bag with a nod of thanks. She looks at Bobby’s empty bed one more time, then back at you. “In two hours, he’ll be lying there. In this room. Home.” Her voice wavers. “I can’t believe it’s actually happening.”

“Believe it,” you say firmly. “We negotiated his release. Marchesi signed the authorization. The transport is ready. This is real, Alicia. Bobby’s coming home.”

She takes a shaky breath, then another. “Okay. Okay. Let me get ready. Let me—” She stops, seems to gather herself. “Let me be ready for this.”

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You guide Alicia upstairs to the dining room, where Hypatia has arranged breakfast with her characteristic precision. The table holds soft scrambled eggs, toast with butter and jam, sliced fruit, and coffee that smells like it was brewed in a café rather than a 1972 kitchen. The morning light through the tall windows is gentle, almost apologetic.

Alicia sits and stares at the food without touching it. Her hands rest on either side of the plate, fingers spread flat against the wood.

“I haven’t been to that hospital since October,” she says quietly. “Since I ran. Since they asked me to sign the papers that would end his life.” Her voice is steady but her knuckles are white. “I walked out of Bobby’s room and kept walking. Through the corridors, past the nurses’ station, out the main entrance. I didn’t pack. Didn’t say goodbye. I just left him there and flew back to the States because I couldn’t be the person who killed him.”

You pour coffee into her cup. “You weren’t running from Bobby. You were running from an impossible choice.”

“I was running from myself.” She picks up the fork, sets it down. “From the part of me that was so tired I almost said yes. That almost signed those papers just to make the waiting stop.” She looks at you directly. “Do you know what that feels like? To be so exhausted by hope that you want to surrender to despair because at least despair has an ending?”

“Yes,” you say simply. “I’ve lived through centuries where I wanted the story to be over. Where I was so tired of watching people I loved turn to dust that I stopped loving anyone at all for a while. Despair is easier than hope. It requires less courage.”

Alicia finally picks up the fork and takes a small bite of eggs. She chews mechanically, swallows. “The doctors were so certain. Marchesi, the others. They had scans, tests, documentation. They spoke about Bobby like he was already gone—like his body was just a machine still running on momentum.” Another bite. “And I couldn’t prove them wrong. I couldn’t point to anything concrete and say ‘Look, he’s still in there.’ I just knew. Or I wanted to know. Or I couldn’t bear not knowing.”

Hypatia materializes in the doorway, dressed in travel clothes—dark slacks, a wool coat, low heels. She looks like she could be Alicia’s older sister, or a young professional traveling on business. “The aircraft is ready. We should depart by nine to arrive at the hospital with comfortable margin.”

Alicia nods but doesn’t stand. She’s eating now with more focus, as if her body has remembered it needs fuel. “When we get there—when we walk into Bobby’s room—what do I say to him? He’s been in a coma for four months. He can’t hear me. But what if he can? What if some part of him knows I left and didn’t come back until now?”

“Then you tell him the truth,” you say. “That you left because you refused to end his life. That you found help. That you’re bringing him home.”

“Home.” She sets down her fork. “To a mansion he’s never seen. With technology from seventy years in the future. With a time traveler and an artificial intelligence as his sister’s companions.” A strained laugh. “He’s going to think I’ve lost my mind. He’s going to wake up and think I had a psychotic break and bought a mansion with hallucination money.”

Hypatia steps into the room. “Bobby Western is a physicist who studied at Caltech. He understands evidence. We can provide evidence—the medical bed’s capabilities, the augmented reality interface, documentation from 2046. He’ll have questions, certainly. But he’s not going to dismiss what he can see and touch and measure.”

“Unless the crash changed him,” Alicia says quietly. “Unless he wakes up different—his memories fractured, his personality altered, his ability to understand complex concepts damaged.” She looks at Hypatia. “You read his medical file. You saw the scans. What are the odds he wakes up as himself?”

Hypatia doesn’t soften the truth. “Traumatic brain injury is unpredictable. The scans show significant damage that has been healing, but healing doesn’t always mean complete restoration. He might have memory gaps. He might have changes in temperament, processing speed, emotional regulation.” She pauses. “Or he might wake up essentially unchanged, with the injury having affected only motor function during the coma state. We won’t know until he wakes.”

Alicia pushes her plate away, half the food uneaten. “I’ve been so focused on keeping him alive that I haven’t let myself think about what kind of life he’ll have. What if he wakes up and he’s trapped in a body that doesn’t work? What if he can’t race, can’t work, can’t do the things that made him Bobby?”

“Then he’ll find new things,” you say. “Or he’ll adapt the old things. People are resilient, Alicia. Especially people who have someone fighting for them.”

She stands abruptly, the chair scraping against the floor. “I need to see him. I need to stop imagining worst scenarios and just see him, touch him, confirm he’s real and we’re really bringing him home.” Her hands shake slightly. “I’m ready. Let’s go.”

You stand as well. Hypatia nods and dissolves—repositioning to the aircraft, you assume, to finalize departure preparations. Alicia walks to the window and looks out at the magnolia trees, the winter-bare garden, the morning light on frost.

“When I was fourteen,” she says without turning, “Bobby took me dancing at the Indian Rock. This honky-tonk bar in Tennessee. He had to pretend we were married because otherwise every man in the place would have started fights over me.” A faint smile. “I remember feeling so safe with him. Like as long as Bobby was there, nothing bad could touch me. Like he was the only person in the world who saw me clearly and loved what he saw.”

She turns to face you. “I don’t know if that was ever true, or if I made it true by needing it so badly. But that’s who I’ve been trying to save. That Bobby. The one who protected me. The one who understood.” Her voice drops. “What if the Bobby who wakes up isn’t that person? What if he’s someone I don’t know how to love?”

The question hangs in the air, unanswerable. You cross to her, standing close enough that she can feel your presence without being crowded.

“Then you’ll find out who he actually is,” you say gently. “And you’ll decide what’s possible with that person. But Alicia—you’re not fourteen anymore. You don’t need Bobby to protect you or complete you or be the only person who understands. You’ve survived without him. You’ve built a life, however fragile. You have choices now that you didn’t have in that honky-tonk bar.”

She looks at you for a long moment, something shifting behind her eyes. “You’re right. I’m not fourteen. I’m twenty-one and I’ve been in a psychiatric institution and I’ve planned my own death and I’ve been saved by a time traveler.” A breath. “I’m not the little sister Bobby remembers. He’s going to have to meet me again too.”

“Yes,” you confirm. “He will.”

Alicia straightens her shoulders, gathering herself. “Okay. I’m ready. Let’s bring Bobby home.”

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The private airfield is forty minutes of silence broken only by the hum of tires on winter roads. Alicia sits in the passenger seat, her hands folded in her lap with unnatural stillness, staring through the windshield at the gray December morning. You don’t try to fill the quiet. Sometimes the only gift you can give someone is not forcing them to perform composure they don’t feel.

The aircraft Hypatia has positioned looks period-appropriate from the outside—a sleek executive jet that wouldn’t raise eyebrows in 1972—but you know the interior houses life support systems and medical monitoring equipment that won’t exist for decades. Hypatia stands at the base of the stairs, dressed in her travel persona, looking every inch the professional medical coordinator.

“Everything’s prepared,” she says as you approach. “Flight time is approximately two hours. I’ve arranged for a car to meet us at the private terminal in Milan.” She looks at Alicia. “There’s a reclining seat if you want to rest during the flight.”

Alicia shakes her head. “I won’t sleep. I can’t.” She climbs the stairs without waiting for a response.

The flight is smooth, the aircraft cutting through clouds with barely a tremor. Alicia sits by the window, watching the landscape below transform from American farmland to ocean to European coastline. You sit across from her, close enough to be present but not crowding. Hypatia occupies the co-pilot position, interfacing with systems that require no human pilot but maintaining the appearance of normalcy.

“Tell me about the medical bed again,” Alicia says suddenly, not looking away from the window. “How it works. What it does.”

You explain the neural monitoring, the automated movement protocols that prevent atrophy, the way the system can detect consciousness shifts and emotional states through brain activity patterns. She listens with the focus of someone memorizing instructions for a life-or-death task.

“So when Bobby wakes up—if he wakes up—the bed will know before we do?” she asks.

“It will detect the neurological changes that precede consciousness, yes. Minutes or hours before external signs appear.” You pause. “It will give you warning. Time to prepare.”

“Time to panic, you mean.” But there’s no humor in her voice, just flat acknowledgment.

Milan appears below—the city sprawling in winter light, the Duomo’s spires visible even from altitude. The landing is smooth. The car is waiting as promised, a dark Mercedes that looks expensive but not ostentatious. The drive to Ospedale San Raffaele takes twenty minutes through midday traffic.

Alicia’s breathing changes as the hospital comes into view. Shorter. Shallower. Her hands grip the edge of the seat.

“I can’t do this,” she says suddenly. “I can’t walk back in there. I can’t see him like that again—the tubes, the machines, the way he looks like Bobby but isn’t Bobby, just a body being kept alive by technology.”

You reach across and cover her hand with yours. “You can. Because this time you’re not walking in to say goodbye. You’re walking in to take him home.”

She stares at your hand on hers, then nods once, sharp and decisive. “Okay. Okay. Let’s do this before I lose my nerve.”

The hospital’s main entrance is exactly as you remember from two nights ago—the same security guard at the desk, the same antiseptic smell, the same fluorescent lighting that makes everyone look slightly ill. Hypatia leads the way with confident familiarity, navigating corridors with the ease of someone who has memorized the layout. Alicia walks between you and Hypatia, her spine rigid, her face carefully blank.

The elevator ride to the third floor is eternal. The neurology wing is quiet—visiting hours, a few families speaking in hushed Italian, nurses moving with practiced efficiency. Room 307 is at the end of the corridor, the door partially open.

Alicia stops three feet from the threshold. You can see her throat working, her hands clenched into fists. Hypatia waits without prompting, understanding that this moment can’t be rushed.

“He’s in there,” Alicia whispers. “Right now. Bobby is right there.” She doesn’t move.

“Yes,” you confirm quietly. “He is.”

She takes one step. Another. Reaches the doorway and stops again, her hand on the frame as if she needs physical support. You move up beside her, close enough that she knows you’re there.

The room is small and clinical. Medical equipment crowds the space—monitors displaying vital signs, an IV stand, a ventilator breathing for the patient with mechanical precision. And in the bed, pale and still and impossibly fragile-looking, is Bobby Western.

He looks nothing like the photographs you’ve seen—not the young racer Alicia remembers, not the weathered exile from 2006. This Bobby is suspended in between, his face slack with unconsciousness, his dark hair longer than he probably wore it, a breathing tube obscuring his features. The monitors show steady heartbeat, stable oxygen levels, brain activity that the doctors have been reading as futile persistence rather than healing potential.

Alicia makes a sound—something between a sob and a gasp—and stumbles into the room. She doesn’t go to the bed immediately. Instead she stands in the middle of the floor, staring at her brother as if she’s seeing a ghost.

“Bobby,” she says, and her voice breaks on his name. “Bobby, I’m here. I came back. I’m so sorry I left but I’m here now and we’re taking you home.”

The monitors continue their steady rhythm. Bobby doesn’t move, doesn’t respond, gives no sign he can hear her. Alicia takes another step toward the bed, then another, until she’s standing right beside him. Her hand hovers over his, trembling, before she finally touches him—fingers on the back of his hand, gentle as if he might break.

“You’re so thin,” she whispers. “They haven’t been feeding you properly. Your hands are cold.” She looks back at you, her face stricken. “Why are his hands cold? Is that normal? Is something wrong?”

“Poor circulation from immobility,” Hypatia says gently, moving to check the monitors. “His vitals are stable. Everything is functioning as expected for his condition.”

Alicia turns back to Bobby, her hand still on his. “I bought you a house, Bobby. A beautiful house with a garden and sunlight and a room where you can recover properly. Jon and Hypatia are going to help us. They have equipment that can monitor you better than this hospital ever could.” She’s crying now, tears streaming down her face. “You just have to keep holding on. Just a few more months. April twenty-seventh. That’s when you wake up. Jon told me. He came from the future and he told me you wake up, so you have to. You have to prove him right.”

She leans down, her forehead nearly touching Bobby’s shoulder, her voice dropping to a whisper you can barely hear. “I need you, Bobby. I know that’s selfish. I know I should want you to wake up for your own sake, not mine. But I need you. I’ve needed you since I was twelve years old and Mom died and the world broke open. You’re the only person who ever made sense. The only person I could talk to. The only person I loved who loved me back without conditions or questions or fear.”

The monitors continue their rhythm. The ventilator breathes. Bobby remains motionless, his face slack, his body a vessel waiting for its occupant to return.

You move to the other side of the bed, giving Alicia space but maintaining presence. Hypatia stands near the door, ready to alert if staff approach.

“We have the transfer authorization,” you say quietly. “Marchesi signed it. The transport is arranged. We can take him whenever you’re ready.”

Alicia straightens slowly, wiping her face with the back of her hand. She looks at Bobby for a long moment, then at you. “I’m ready. Let’s bring him home before I fall apart completely.”

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You step into the corridor and approach the nearest nurses’ station, where a middle-aged nurse in a crisp white uniform is updating patient charts. She looks up as you approach, her expression shifting to mild concern—visitors asking questions always mean extra work.

“Buongiorno,” you say, your Italian flawless from decades spent in various centuries of the peninsula’s history. “We’re here for the transfer of Roberto Western from room 307. Dr. Marchesi authorized it yesterday evening. We need to coordinate the preparation for transport.”

The nurse frowns, flipping through papers. “Transfer? I don’t have any notes about—” She stops, finding something. “Ah, yes. Here. Authorized last night, very late. Transport scheduled for ten o’clock.” She checks her watch. “That’s in twenty-five minutes. You’re cutting it close.”

“We’re aware,” Hypatia says smoothly, materializing beside you with a leather portfolio. “I’m Dr. Chen, the coordinating neurologist. We have all the necessary documentation. What do we need to do to prepare the patient for safe transport?”

The nurse’s skepticism softens slightly at Hypatia’s professional demeanor. “The ventilator needs to be switched to a portable unit. IV lines secured for movement. Patient repositioned on the transport board. You have your own medical equipment?”

“State of the art,” Hypatia confirms. “The aircraft is equipped with full life support. We’ll need approximately fifteen minutes for the transfer procedure itself.”

The nurse nods, making notes. “I’ll get Dr. Marchesi. He’ll want to oversee this personally, given the circumstances.” She picks up the phone, speaking rapid Italian.

You return to room 307. Alicia hasn’t moved from Bobby’s bedside. She’s holding his hand now with both of hers, speaking to him in a low murmur you can’t quite make out. Her face is blotchy from crying but her voice is steady.

“They’re preparing everything,” you tell her. “Twenty minutes and we can take him home.”

She nods without looking up. “I’m telling him about the mansion. About the magnolia trees. About how his room has windows that face east so he’ll wake up with sunlight.” A pause. “I don’t know if he can hear me. But I can’t stop talking. If I stop talking I’ll start screaming.”

Dr. Marchesi arrives within five minutes, looking more rested than when you saw him two nights ago but still carrying the weight of a man who hasn’t fully processed an unexpected decision. He nods to you, to Hypatia, then moves to check Bobby’s monitors with practiced efficiency.

“Vitals are stable,” he says in accented English. “No changes since last night. The portable ventilator is being prepared. You understand the risks of transport? Any complication, any deterioration, and you may not reach appropriate medical care in time.”

“We understand,” Alicia says, her voice sharp. “And we have appropriate medical care. Better than appropriate.”

Marchesi’s jaw tightens but he doesn’t argue. “Very well. Nurse Rossini will coordinate with your team. I’ll observe to ensure proper procedure.” He looks at Bobby, something complicated crossing his face. “I hope I’m wrong about his prognosis. Truly. But if I’m right—if he doesn’t wake—you’ll have the comfort of knowing you tried everything.”

Alicia’s hands tighten on Bobby’s. “He’ll wake. April twenty-seventh. Mark your calendar.”

Marchesi says nothing, but you see the pity in his eyes. The certainty that this young woman is setting herself up for devastating disappointment. He doesn’t know what you know. He can’t imagine what you’ve seen.

The next fifteen minutes are controlled chaos. Two nurses wheel in equipment—a portable ventilator, a transfer board, additional IV stands. Hypatia moves with them, her medical knowledge perfect, her hands steady as she helps transition Bobby from the hospital’s ventilator to the portable unit. The machine hisses and clicks, taking over the rhythm of breathing.

Alicia has to step back to give them room. She stands against the wall, arms wrapped around herself, watching every movement with fierce attention as if she could keep Bobby alive through sheer force of will.

“Heart rate steady,” one nurse reports. “Oxygen saturation ninety-eight percent. No distress.”

They slide Bobby onto the transfer board with practiced care, supporting his head, securing the lines. He looks impossibly fragile—a collection of tubes and monitors and pale skin, more medical equipment than person. But his chest rises and falls with mechanical precision. His heart beats. He persists.

“We’re ready,” Hypatia says, looking at you. “The aircraft is ten minutes away. We can move him to the ambulance entrance.”

Marchesi signs a final form, his handwriting tight and controlled. “The authorization is complete. He’s officially discharged into your care.” He looks at Alicia. “I wish you luck, Miss Western. I genuinely do.”

Alicia doesn’t thank him. She just nods once, then moves back to Bobby’s side as they begin wheeling the bed toward the door. Her hand finds his again, holding on as if she could anchor him to consciousness through touch alone.

The corridor seems longer on the way out. Other patients, other families, other stories of illness and hope and despair. The elevator is large enough for the bed and equipment. The descent feels like falling.

The ambulance entrance is at the back of the hospital, away from the main entrance. The Mercedes is there, and beyond it, a medical transport vehicle that Hypatia has arranged—period appropriate exterior, future technology interior. The December air is cold, sharp, real.

They load Bobby into the transport with efficient care. Hypatia climbs in with him, immediately interfacing with the monitoring systems. You help Alicia into the passenger section, where she can sit beside her brother but stay out of the way of the equipment.

The transport pulls away from Ospedale San Raffaele. Through the window, you see Marchesi standing at the ambulance entrance, watching. He raises one hand in something between a wave and a benediction, then turns and walks back inside.

Alicia is crying again, silently, her hand still gripping Bobby’s. “We did it,” she whispers. “We actually did it. We’re taking him home.”

The drive to the airfield takes thirty minutes through Milan traffic. Bobby’s vitals remain stable. The portable ventilator performs flawlessly. Hypatia monitors everything with the attention of someone who has computed a thousand possible complications and is ready for each one.

At the airfield, the aircraft waits with its stairs extended. The transfer is smooth—bed, equipment, Bobby, all moved with practiced care into the medical bay that Hypatia has prepared. The space is larger than it should be, the equipment more sophisticated, but everything is positioned to look plausible if anyone glances inside.

Alicia straps herself into the seat beside Bobby’s bed. She hasn’t let go of his hand since they left the hospital. You take the seat across from her, close enough to be present.

Hypatia moves to the cockpit. The engines engage with a low hum. The aircraft taxies, accelerates, lifts. Milan falls away below, becoming a map, then a memory.

Alicia looks at you, her face exhausted and fierce and grateful and terrified all at once. “How long until we’re home?”

“Two hours,” you tell her. “Maybe less. Hypatia’s flying.”

She nods and turns back to Bobby, her thumb moving in small circles on the back of his hand. “Two hours,” she repeats. “Then he’ll be in his room. In his bed. Where he belongs.”

The flight is smooth. The monitors show steady rhythms. Bobby breathes with mechanical assistance, his face peaceful in unconsciousness. Alicia talks to him—about the mansion, about the garden, about the mathematical equipment waiting for her, about April twenty-seventh and the future beyond it. She talks until her voice goes hoarse, then keeps talking anyway.

You watch her watching him, and you think about all the ways people try to hold on to each other across impossible distances. Time. Space. Consciousness itself. The architecture of connection built from hope and stubbornness and love that refuses to acknowledge defeat.

Land appears below—the American coastline, then farmland, then the familiar shape of Mississippi. The descent begins. Alicia’s grip on Bobby tightens.

“Almost home,” she whispers to him. “Almost home, Bobby. Just hold on a little longer.”

The landing is gentle. The airfield is private, isolated. The transport vehicle Hypatia arranged is waiting—another anonymous medical van that will draw no attention on rural roads. The transfer from aircraft to vehicle is efficient. Bobby never stops breathing. The monitors never falter.

The drive to the mansion takes forty minutes through winter countryside. Alicia sits in the back with Bobby, still holding his hand, still talking. You sit up front with Hypatia, who is driving with one hand while her other hand rests on the dashboard, interfacing with systems you can’t see.

“The medical bay is ready,” Hypatia says quietly. “The bed is calibrated to his baseline from the hospital records. Neural monitoring is active. Everything is prepared.”

The mansion appears—white columns, magnolia trees, the home Alicia chose. The van pulls around to the side entrance, where the basement access is hidden behind landscaping. Hypatia has arranged it so Bobby can be brought directly to the medical bay without navigating stairs.

The transfer is the last one. Bed, equipment, Bobby, all moved with infinite care down the ramp Hypatia has installed, through the reinforced door, into the command center that didn’t exist four days ago. The medical bay is warm, well-lit, serene. The bed from 2046 waits, its surface already configured to Bobby’s dimensions.

They move him from the transport bed to the medical bed with practiced synchronization. Hypatia connects the monitoring systems, transitions the ventilator, checks every line and tube and connection. The bed accepts Bobby’s weight and immediately begins its work—subtle movements to prevent pressure sores, neural sensors reading brain activity, displays showing data that won’t be understood by conventional medicine for decades.

Alicia stands at the foot of the bed, watching. Her face is gray with exhaustion. She’s been awake for more than twenty hours, most of them spent in a state of controlled terror. But she’s smiling—a small, fragile, genuine smile.

“He’s home,” she says. “Bobby’s home.”

The monitors show steady vitals. The bed hums softly, a sound like distant music. Bobby lies still and pale and impossibly precious in his sister’s eyes.

You move to stand beside Alicia. She leans against you without thinking about it, her weight settling as if she’s finally allowing herself to feel how tired she is.

“What happens now?” she asks.

“Now you rest,” you say. “Bobby is safe. The bed will monitor him. Hypatia will alert us to any changes. You’ve done everything you needed to do. Now you let yourself breathe.”

She looks up at you, her eyes red-rimmed and exhausted. “I don’t know how to rest. I don’t remember what that feels like.”

“Then we’ll teach you,” Hypatia says from where she’s adjusting the final settings. “One day at a time. One hour at a time. However long it takes.”

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You put your hand on Alicia’s shoulder, firm but gentle. “Upstairs,” you say. “Your bed. You need actual sleep, not another vigil.”

She stiffens. “I can’t leave him. Not yet. What if something happens—”

“Then Hypatia and I will come get you immediately.” You turn her to face you, meeting her eyes. “Alicia. You’ve been awake for more than twenty hours. You held his hand through two countries and an ocean. You brought him home. Now you need to let yourself rest or you’ll collapse.”

Her jaw sets in that stubborn line you’ve come to recognize. “I’ll rest here. I can sleep in the chair—”

“No.” Hypatia’s voice is kind but absolute. “Your body needs horizontal rest in a proper bed. The medical bay needs to remain sterile and uncluttered. And frankly, you need space from the monitoring equipment. This room is designed for patient care, not for family members to exhaust themselves keeping vigil.”

Alicia looks between you and Hypatia, then back at Bobby. The bed hums softly, displays showing neural patterns in colors she probably doesn’t understand yet. “What if he wakes up and I’m not here?”

“He won’t wake tonight,” you say gently. “And if by some miracle he does, you’ll be the first person we bring to him. But Alicia—he’s not going to wake for months. You know this. Hypatia and I can monitor him. We can interpret the data. You need to sleep.”

She’s wavering. You can see it in the way her shoulders sag, the way her eyes keep losing focus. Pure adrenaline has been holding her upright for hours and it’s finally depleting.

“I don’t want to be alone,” she says quietly. “If I go upstairs alone I’ll just lie there thinking about everything that could go wrong.”

You exchange a glance with Hypatia. “I’ll walk you up,” you offer. “Make sure you’re settled. Then I’ll come back down here.”

Alicia nods slowly. She moves to Bobby’s bedside one more time, touching his hand. “I’ll be right upstairs,” she tells him. “Jon and Hypatia are going to watch over you. I’ll see you in the morning.” She leans down and kisses his forehead, her lips barely brushing his skin. “Sleep well, Bobby.”

The walk upstairs feels longer than it should. Alicia moves like someone underwater, each step requiring conscious effort. The mansion is quiet around you—no staff, no witnesses, just the two of you climbing toward the residential wing.

Her bedroom is the master suite on the ground floor east wing, the one with morning light and large windows. The bed is made with linens from 2046—soft beyond anything 1972 can produce, temperature-regulating, designed for comfort. You’d prepared it yesterday while she was in the simulation.

Alicia stands in the doorway, staring at the bed as if it’s a foreign object. “I don’t remember the last time I slept in a real bed,” she says. “Stella Maris had those institutional things. Before that… I don’t know. Months.”

“This one’s yours,” you tell her. “For as long as you want it.”

She moves to the bed slowly, sits on the edge. Tests the mattress with one hand. “It’s soft.” She sounds almost suspicious.

“It’s supposed to be.” You pull back the covers. “Lie down. I’ll stay until you’re settled.”

She complies with the mechanical obedience of someone too tired to argue. Lies back against the pillows, still fully dressed in the dark wool dress she wore to Milan. Her eyes are already half-closed.

“Jon,” she says as you pull the covers over her. “Thank you. For everything. For believing Bobby would wake. For believing I was worth saving. For not giving up when I was ready to walk into the woods.”

Your throat tightens. “You were always worth it, Alicia. Always.”

She’s asleep before you finish speaking, her breathing evening out into the deep rhythm of true exhaustion. You watch her for a moment—this brilliant, broken, fierce young woman who chose to keep living when every part of her wanted to stop. Her face in sleep looks impossibly young, the lines of tension smoothing away.

You turn off the bedside lamp and leave the door slightly ajar so you’ll hear if she calls out. Then you make your way back down to the basement command center.

Hypatia is standing before the medical bay’s main display, her eyes tracking data streams that update in real time. Bobby lies motionless in the bed, his chest rising and falling with mechanical precision. The ventilator hisses softly. The neural monitors paint complex patterns across multiple screens.

“How is he?” you ask, moving to stand beside her.

“Stable,” Hypatia says. “Vitals are excellent. The bed has already begun the movement protocols—micro-adjustments to prevent pressure sores and muscle atrophy. His body is responding well.” She gestures to one of the screens. “This is the interesting part.”

The display shows what looks like a topographical map rendered in shifting colors—peaks and valleys of electrical activity, patterns that pulse and flow like living things. “Neural activity,” Hypatia explains. “This is Bobby’s consciousness, or what remains of it during the coma. The bed’s sensors are far more sophisticated than anything 1972 medicine can produce. They can detect not just activity levels but patterns that correlate with emotional states.”

You study the display. “What is he feeling?”

“That’s the fascinating question.” Hypatia zooms in on a section of the map where colors swirl in complex eddies. “The patterns suggest awareness at some level—not conscious thought as we understand it, but something. The bed’s AI has been analyzing the data since we installed him. It’s detecting emotional signatures.”

She pulls up another screen, this one showing a timeline with color-coded bands. “Here’s what we’re seeing. Baseline anxiety—that’s the amber band, present almost constantly. It correlates with the stress response his body is experiencing from the trauma and the coma state itself. But look here—” She points to irregular spikes of deep blue. “These appeared when Alicia was talking to him. At the hospital. In the transport. Just now when she said goodnight.”

“What does blue mean?”

“The system interprets it as recognition. Connection. Something in his neural patterns responds to her voice, her presence. He can’t wake, can’t respond, but some part of him knows she’s there.” Hypatia’s voice carries a note of wonder. “It’s not consciousness. It’s something more primitive. The brain stem, the limbic system—the parts that handle attachment and safety and love. Those parts are still active. They’re still reaching for her.”

You feel something catch in your chest. “So when she talks to him, he hears her?”

“Hears is probably the wrong word. Perceives might be better. His auditory cortex shows activity when she speaks, but it’s not processing language the way a conscious mind would. It’s more like… recognition of a familiar pattern. The sound of her voice is encoded so deeply in his neural architecture that even in this state, it registers as important. As safe.” Hypatia looks at you. “She’s his anchor. Even now.”

You study the displays in silence for a long moment. Bobby’s face is peaceful in the bed’s soft lighting, giving no external sign of the complex processes happening beneath his skull. “Can you predict when he’ll wake?”

“Not with precision.” Hypatia calls up another set of data—graphs showing gradual upward trends. “But I can track the healing. Brain swelling is decreasing. Neural pathways that were damaged are beginning to show signs of reorganization—the brain routing around injury, finding new connections. It’s slow. Glacial. But it’s happening.”

“April twenty-seventh,” you say. “That’s what Bobby told me in 2006. He said he woke up on April twenty-seventh, 1973.”

“Four months from now.” Hypatia nods. “The trajectory I’m seeing is consistent with that timeline. Barring complications, his neural recovery should reach a threshold sometime in mid-to-late April where consciousness becomes possible again.” She pauses. “But Jon—when he wakes, we don’t know what he’ll be like. Brain injuries are unpredictable. He might be exactly who he was before the crash. Or he might be… different.”

“Alicia knows that,” you say. “She’s terrified of it.”

“She should be.” Hypatia’s voice is gentle but honest. “The Bobby who wakes might not be the Bobby she remembers. He might not be the Bobby who understood her, who made her feel less alone. He might be confused, damaged, fundamentally altered. And she’ll have to love him anyway—or learn to let him go.”

You turn away from the displays to look at Hypatia directly. “What do you think will happen? When he wakes?”

She’s quiet for a moment, her gray eyes thoughtful. “I think he’ll remember her. I think the connection I’m seeing in these neural patterns is too deep to be erased by trauma. But I don’t know if he’ll be able to be what she needs. The kind of love she has for him—it’s enormous. Consuming. It needs someone who can hold that weight without breaking under it. The Bobby from before the crash could barely manage it. The Bobby who wakes… we’ll have to see.”

The medical bay is quiet except for the soft sounds of machinery. The bed continues its work, moving Bobby in micro-increments, monitoring every function, keeping him alive and healing while the months tick down toward April.

“She’s going to spend the next four months in a state of suspended terror,” you say. “Waiting for him to wake. Hoping he’ll be himself. Fearing he won’t.”

“Yes,” Hypatia agrees. “Unless we give her something else to focus on. The mathematics interface. Projects. Experiences that remind her she exists as more than just Bobby’s sister.” She looks at the ceiling, toward where Alicia sleeps. “She needs to build a life that can stand on its own. So that when Bobby wakes—whatever he’s like—she isn’t entirely dependent on him for her sense of self.”

You nod slowly. It’s the work of the next four months. Not just keeping Bobby alive and healing, but helping Alicia discover who she is when she’s not defined entirely by her love for her brother.

The displays continue their quiet work, painting Bobby’s consciousness in colors and patterns. The deep blue spikes have faded now that Alicia is gone, settling back into the baseline amber of coma-state anxiety. But they were there. They were real. Some part of him knows she exists, even in the dark.

“I’ll take first watch,” you tell Hypatia. “You should rest too, if you want. Or work on other projects.”

“I don’t require sleep,” she reminds you with a slight smile. “But I’ll give you space. I have some calculations to run about the mathematics interface—I want to design some custom exercises for Alicia based on the work she was doing before Stella Maris. Something to ease her back into the flow state.” She pauses at the doorway. “Call me if anything changes. Even the smallest shift in his neural patterns.”

“I will.”

She leaves, and you’re alone with Bobby Western’s sleeping form and the machines that breathe for him and the monitors that paint his mind in colors he’ll never see. You settle into the chair Alicia refused, the one positioned where you can watch both the patient and the displays.

Four months. That’s what stands between this moment and the day Bobby opens his eyes. Four months of vigil and waiting and helping Alicia build a life strong enough to survive whatever comes next.

You’ve lived through centuries. You can handle four months.

The bed hums. The ventilator breathes. The displays paint their patterns. And somewhere above you, Alicia sleeps in a real bed for the first time in longer than she can remember, trusting you to keep watch over the brother she loves more than her own life.

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You sit in the chair beside Bobby’s bed, watching the neural displays paint their quiet patterns. The amber baseline anxiety. The occasional flicker of activity that might mean nothing or might mean everything. The bed continues its work—micro-movements, monitoring, the patient care that will sustain him through four months of waiting.

But Alicia won’t spend those months only waiting. She needs more than vigil and hope. She needs the things that made her feel alive before grief and visitors and institutional walls narrowed her world to a single fixed point.

You activate your neural interface, reaching across time to 2046. Hypatia responds immediately, her presence a warm clarity in your mind.

“I need you to do something,” you tell her. “Something that can’t wait until morning.”

“I’m listening.”

“Alicia needs her music back. Not just any violin—she needs an instrument that feels like coming home. Her Stradivarius is in storage somewhere, but I want to give her something else. Something impossible.” You pause, forming the idea fully before speaking it. “Go to Cremona. 1710. Find Antonio Stradivari’s workshop. Acquire one of his instruments fresh from his hands—before time and use have changed it. Before it becomes a museum piece or an investment. I want Alicia to have a violin that still remembers being made.”

Hypatia’s response carries a note of delighted interest. “You want me to steal from Stradivari himself?”

“I want you to buy from him. Pay him well enough that he can take a month off and do nothing but perfect his craft. Make it a transaction he’ll remember fondly.” You look at Bobby’s sleeping form. “Alicia gave away everything before Stella Maris. Her possessions, her connections, her future. I want to give her back the thing she loves second-most in the world. The thing that might help her remember she exists as more than Bobby’s sister.”

“Understood.” There’s a pause while Hypatia calculates. “I’ll need four hours. Travel to 1710, locate the workshop, negotiate the purchase, return to 2046 to brief the retrieval team, then bring it back to 1972. I’ll also need to acquire period-appropriate bow, rosin, and case—Stradivari’s workshop standards, not modern reproductions.”

“Take whatever time you need. Just have it ready before she wakes.”

“Consider it done.”

The connection fades. You’re alone again with Bobby and the machines. The clock on the wall reads 1:17 AM. December 27th, 1972. Alicia has been asleep for just over two hours.

You settle deeper into the chair, your eyes moving between Bobby’s face and the neural displays. The patterns are stable. Healing continues at its glacial pace. The brain routes around damage, finds new pathways, reorganizes itself with the stubborn persistence of biological systems that refuse to surrender.

The deep blue spikes that appeared when Alicia spoke to him—those fascinate you. Recognition. Connection. Some primitive part of his neural architecture that knows her presence matters, even when consciousness itself is absent. You’ve seen many things across fifteen centuries, but the architecture of love—the way it encodes itself so deeply that even brain damage can’t fully erase it—that still moves you.

Time passes. The medical bay is warm, quiet, serene. The bed hums. The ventilator breathes. The displays paint their patterns in colors that won’t be understood by conventional medicine for decades.

At 3:42 AM, you feel Hypatia’s presence again through the neural interface. “I’m back,” she says. “The transaction went smoothly. Stradivari was surprised but pleased—I paid him three times his asking price and told him it was for a young woman of extraordinary talent who would honor his work. He chose the instrument himself from his current inventory. A violin completed just last month. He says it has a voice like clear water over stone.”

“Where are you?”

“In the treasury room. I didn’t want to materialize in the medical bay and risk disturbing the equipment. Should I bring it to you, or wait until Alicia wakes?”

“Bring it now. I want to see it.”

Minutes later, Hypatia enters the medical bay carrying a wooden case that looks simultaneously ancient and brand new. The wood is dark, polished, unmarked by time or use. She sets it on the desk and opens it with careful reverence.

The violin inside is extraordinary. The varnish glows amber-gold in the medical bay’s lighting, the grain of the wood visible beneath like veins beneath skin. The instrument looks alive—not metaphorically, but actually alive, as if it’s still breathing the air of Stradivari’s workshop. There are no scratches, no wear marks, no evidence of the centuries it should have survived. It exists in a state of perfect newness that will never come again once time begins to touch it.

“He made this in December 1710,” Hypatia says quietly. “Three hundred and sixty-two years before this moment, in a workshop that smelled of wood shavings and varnish. He told me it was one of his finest recent works—the proportions exact, the wood selection perfect. He was proud of it.”

You reach out, not quite touching the instrument. “And you paid him well?”

“Very well. Enough that he looked at me like I might be mad, then accepted before I could change my mind.” She smiles slightly. “He asked me to tell the young woman that the violin will sing for her if she treats it with respect and love. He said his instruments know the difference between players who understand them and players who only want to possess them.”

“Alicia will understand it,” you say with certainty. “She understands beauty at a level most people can’t access.”

Hypatia closes the case gently. “Where should I put it? Her bedroom?”

“The music room. The one on the second floor with the good acoustics.” You’d noticed it during your initial survey of the mansion—a parlor with high ceilings and hardwood floors that would resonate beautifully. “Set it up there with everything she needs. When she wakes, I’ll tell her it’s waiting.”

“And the augmented reality mathematics interface?”

“Keep that in the basement for now. Let her find the violin first. Let her remember that part of herself before we introduce the tools that will change how she thinks about mathematics.” You look at Bobby’s sleeping form. “She needs to remember she’s more than her grief and her love for him. Music might be the way back to that.”

Hypatia nods and leaves with the case. You hear her footsteps ascending the stairs, then silence.

The medical bay returns to its quiet rhythms. Bobby breathes. The monitors display their data. The bed performs its subtle choreography of care.

At 5:23 AM, you hear movement upstairs. Footsteps—hesitant at first, then more purposeful. Alicia is awake. You’d expected her to sleep longer, but grief and anxiety don’t respect the body’s need for rest.

She appears in the doorway of the medical bay minutes later, wearing the same dark wool dress from yesterday, her hair uncombed, her face creased from the pillow. She looks rumpled and young and worried.

“I woke up and didn’t know where I was,” she says. “Then I remembered. Everything.” Her eyes go immediately to Bobby. “Is he okay?”

“He’s fine. Stable. No changes.” You gesture to the displays. “The bed is monitoring everything. His vitals are excellent.”

She moves to Bobby’s bedside, touching his hand. The neural displays immediately show a spike of deep blue—recognition, connection, the primitive response to her presence. She doesn’t notice the screens, too focused on her brother’s face.

“I slept,” she says, sounding almost surprised. “Actually slept. I don’t remember dreaming.” She looks at you. “How long have you been down here?”

“All night. Someone needed to keep watch.”

“You should sleep too. You can’t just—” She stops, seeming to remember that you’re not bound by normal human limitations. “Right. Time traveler. You probably don’t need sleep the way normal people do.”

“I need it eventually. But I’m fine for now.” You stand, stretching muscles that have been still for hours. “Alicia, there’s something upstairs I want to show you. Something that arrived while you were sleeping.”

She frowns, suspicious. “What kind of something?”

“The kind that can’t be explained. The kind you need to see.” You offer your hand. “Come with me. Bobby will be fine for ten minutes.”

She hesitates, her hand still on Bobby’s. Then she nods and follows you out of the medical bay, up the stairs, through the mansion’s quiet corridors. Dawn is beginning to show through the windows—pale gray light that will eventually become morning.

You lead her to the second-floor music room. The door is closed. You open it and step aside, letting her enter first.

The room is beautiful in the dawn light—high ceilings, hardwood floors, windows that face east. And on a stand in the center of the room, perfectly positioned, perfectly lit: the violin case from Stradivari’s workshop.

Alicia stops in the doorway, frozen. Her eyes fix on the case. “What is that?”

“Open it and see.”

She moves forward slowly, like someone approaching something that might vanish if startled. Her hands shake slightly as she opens the case. The violin gleams in its bed of velvet, perfect and new and three hundred sixty-two years old.

Alicia makes a sound—half gasp, half sob. Her fingers hover over the instrument without touching it. “This is a Stradivarius,” she whispers. “This is—Jon, this can’t be—”

“It’s from Antonio Stradivari’s workshop. December 1710. Hypatia acquired it last night. Paid him well and brought it back for you.” You watch her face, seeing the disbelief and wonder and something like pain. “He said to tell you it will sing for you if you treat it with respect and love.”

Her hands are shaking harder now. She lifts the violin from the case with infinite care, holding it as if it might shatter. The wood is warm in the morning light. The varnish glows. The instrument looks alive in her hands.

“I gave away my violin,” she says, her voice breaking. “Before Stella Maris. I gave away everything. I didn’t think I’d need—” She stops, pressing her lips together hard. “I didn’t think I’d be alive long enough to play again.”

“You are alive. And you will play again.” You gesture to the room. “This space is yours. The acoustics are excellent. Everything you need is here—bow, rosin, music stand. Whenever you’re ready.”

She cradles the violin against her chest, her eyes closed. Tears slip down her cheeks. “I don’t remember how to play. I haven’t touched an instrument in months. My fingers—”

“Will remember. Muscle memory doesn’t vanish that quickly. And you have time. Four months until Bobby wakes. Time to remember who you are beyond grief and waiting.” You move to stand beside her. “You told me once that mathematics and music were sacred homelands. You need both of them, Alicia. Not just one.”

She opens her eyes, looking at the violin in her hands. “Why are you doing this? All of this? The mansion, the technology, Bobby, now this—why do you care so much?”

“Because Bobby asked me to. Because you deserve to live. Because I’ve walked through fifteen centuries alone and I know what isolation does to brilliant minds.” You meet her eyes. “And because I want to see what you become when you’re not spending all your energy trying to die.”

She’s quiet for a long moment, holding the violin. Then she sets it carefully back in its case and turns to face you fully. “I need to go back downstairs. To Bobby. I can’t—I can’t play right now. But I will. Soon. I promise.”

“That’s enough.” You close the case gently. “The violin will be here whenever you’re ready. No pressure. No expectations. Just the possibility.”

She nods and heads for the door, then stops and looks back. “Thank you. For the violin. For everything. For believing I could be more than the person who was going to freeze to death in the woods.”

“You were always more than that, Alicia.”

She leaves, her footsteps quick on the stairs, returning to Bobby’s bedside where she feels safest. You stay in the music room for a moment, looking at the violin case in the growing dawn light.

Four months. That’s what you have. Four months to help Alicia remember she’s a mathematician, a musician, a person with interests and passions beyond her brother. Four months to build a foundation strong enough to survive whatever version of Bobby wakes in April.

The violin waits, patient and perfect. When she’s ready, it will sing for her. Until then, it’s enough that it exists—a promise of beauty, a reminder of who she was and who she might become again.


That’ll be it for this run of the Alicia scenario. It hasn’t finished naturally; in fact, we were still in the first beat of the third act. But I’ve vastly improved my app’s architecture in a way that would have produced this story differently, so I want to test out other stuff.

One More Branch #1

Two nights ago I endured the kind of insomnia that forces you to roll around in bed under a barrage of intrusive thoughts, but also receiving some compelling ideas from the girl in the basement. And a new idea excited me immediately. In case you’ve been following my blog, which likely only a couple of people worldwide do at the most, you may have read recent posts about a project about evolving board games. Well, I’m growing out of it already. Don’t know what to tell you. Thankfully we’re in the era of Codex and Claude Code, and you can program whole new apps in a couple of days, which is what I’ve done for the new one.

In summary: as a kid I loved those “Choose Your Own Adventure” books. I devoured them. I resent the fact that I lent one to a guy I ended up hating, and I never saw that book again; it was my favorite of those kinds of books, too (it was about a guy, a knight or something, exploring a vast subterranean complex of caves. I don’t remember much of it other than he fought monsters and at the end there was a gorilla. I never found out the title of that book again). We’re in the era of large language models that can write better than 99% of writers, so why not task it with producing such interactive branching stories in a structured manner?

Well, it’s done. Here’s the repository: https://github.com/joeloverbeck/one-more-branch . You give the system a character concept, some worldbuilding details, the tone/genre, and it creates the first page of narrative, with 2-4 meaningful, distinct choices at the end. You click one, and the corresponding page gets generated. If you restart, you can navigate already explored branches without generating anything, but any new branches will be generated and stored. I have let the AI decide when branches end. Haven’t seen that yet.

There’s currently an issue: I store information about the characters involved, the canon facts about them, globally. And I found out that the information can bleed from branch to branch when I didn’t mean it; for example, in one branch a character gave the other a map or something to that effect, and it was registered globally, which would have contaminated new branches. Such issues are the kinds that you routinely fix while working on an app. It will involve distinguishing between global canon facts about characters and state changes involving characters.

Anyway, I present you some branches of a test narrative. You can click the choices that have been explored, and they will lead you to the appropriate header, like in one of those “Choose Your Own Adventure” books but automatically. Other branches haven’t been explored so they aren’t clickable.


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The Drowned Serpent tavern reeks of canal-water and desperation, which means the crowd is perfect. You are Vespera Nightwhisper—at least, that’s the name you’re wearing tonight—and you’ve been working this room for two hours, your hybrid lute-viol singing melodies that make dock workers weep into their ale while their coin purses grow lighter. Your whiskers twitch slightly as you modulate your voice into something breathy and inviting, finishing a ballad about star-crossed lovers. The amber-gold eye catches firelight while the ice-blue one tracks the room’s exits. Your tail sways in time with the final chord. The applause comes with the satisfying clink of copper and silver hitting your open instrument case. But it’s all… fine. Competent. Safe. The music isn’t reaching that place you need it to reach—that breakthrough you can taste but can’t fucking touch.

You’re prowling through the crowd afterward, ears decorated with silver charms catching the lamplight, when a hooded figure intercepts you near the bar. Beaver-folk, you note instantly—the broad flat tail is unmistakable beneath the cloak. His breathing is shallow, panicked. Prey behavior.

“You’re the bard, mmh?” His voice cracks. “The one who takes… contracts?”

Your whiskers perk forward with interest. He slides a leather pouch across the bar—it clinks heavily. Gold, not copper.

“My business partner, Greaves. He’s been… changed. Cursed item from a dredger haul. The Ash-Seal company says it’ll take two weeks to dispatch someone, but he’s—” The beaver-folk’s voice drops to a whisper. “—he’s killing people at night. Doesn’t remember it come morning. I need someone who can track him, stop him, and keep it quiet before the constables get involved.” His eyes are desperate, searching your face. “They say you don’t flinch.”

You can already hear it—the chord progression that would capture this moment. Minor key, building tension, the way his breath hitches like a string about to snap. Part of you is cataloging his tells: the way he won’t meet your heterochromatic gaze, how his fingers drum against the bar—guilt rhythm, not just fear. He knows something he’s not saying. The other part of you feels that familiar clarity starting to crystallize. Danger. Blood. The prospect of something that matters. Your hand rests casually on your theatrical rapier’s pommel.

What do you do?


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The beaver-folk’s whiskers flatten against his muzzle. “You want to see it? The thing that’s turning my partner into—” He cuts himself off, glances around the tavern. Too many ears. “Not here. Come.”

You follow him out into Brinewick’s fog-thick night, your tail swishing with anticipation. The canals reflect lamplight in fractured gold as he leads you through three twisting streets to a cramped warehouse office that smells of timber and wet fur. He bolts the door behind you.

From a locked chest beneath his desk, he produces a wooden box wrapped in chains. Your whiskers twitch involuntarily—even through the wood and iron, you can feel something wrong radiating from it. Not sound, exactly. More like the absence of sound, a void where music should be.

“Greaves pulled this from a canal dredge two weeks ago,” the beaver-folk says, his paws shaking as he sets it on the desk. “Thought it was just an old mirror. Looked into it once. Just once. Now every night when the moon rises, he… changes. Becomes something else. Hunts.”

He unwraps the chains with the care of someone handling a venomous snake. Inside the box: a hand mirror, its silver surface tarnished black except for veins of sickly green that pulse with their own light. Your heterochromatic eyes widen—the amber one burns, the blue one goes cold. The reflection it shows isn’t the room. It’s something moving. Writhing.

Your fingers hover over your lute-viol’s case. Part of your brain is already cataloging this—the way the green light pulses in 6/8 time, the subsonic hum that makes your teeth ache. But another part, the part that stays sharp when blood starts flowing, is calculating. This isn’t just a curse. This is a weapon. And the beaver-folk’s breathing has changed—faster now, excited beneath the fear.

“The music of the curse,” you murmur, and your voice has gone flat, dangerous. The cute affect has vanished entirely. “Interesting phrase for someone who just needs his partner stopped, mmh?”

The beaver-folk’s tail twitches. “I don’t—”

“You’re lying.” Your whiskers are arrow-straight, reading every microexpression. “Your breathing shifted when you opened that box. Not fear. Anticipation. So let’s try this again, and this time don’t waste my fucking time: what do you actually want?”

What do you do?


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The beaver-folk’s pupils dilate. His breathing shifts—shallow now, caught. You watch his paws clench and unclench against the desk edge, claws scraping wood. He’s calculating whether to lie, and you can see the exact moment he realizes you’ll know.

“Smart cat,” he mutters, and his voice drops the desperate merchant routine entirely. What’s left is sharper. Hungrier. “Fine. Yes. Greaves needs to be stopped—that part’s true. But the mirror…” His eyes flick to the pulsing green light, and there’s reverence there. Want. “Do you know what Ash-Seal pays for functional cursed items? Not the broken ones they have to dispose of. The ones that still work.”

Your tail goes still. “You want to sell it.”

“I want to profit from two weeks of my business partner trying to eat dock workers, yes.” He leans forward, and now you can smell it—not just fear, but excitement, the musk of someone who’s found an angle. “But here’s the problem. Ash-Seal won’t pay premium unless they can verify it’s functional and contained. Which means I need someone who can demonstrate control. Someone who can look into it, trigger the transformation, and prove they can handle what comes after.”

The mirror pulses. Six beats. Rest. Six beats. Your mind is already turning it into a waltz in a minor key, something that would sound beautiful if it weren’t so wrong.

“You want me to become the monster,” you say, and your voice is flat as a blade. “To prove it works.”

“I want you to show you can survive it.” His whiskers twitch—he’s lying about something, but not about the core truth. “You’re a bard who fights. You’ve got discipline, control. If anyone can look into that thing and come back unchanged—or at least, come back in control—it’s someone like you. Do that, help me negotiate with Ash-Seal, and I’ll split the sale. Sixty-forty.”

Your amber eye burns. Your blue eye stays ice-cold. Part of you—the part that chases the crystalline clarity that comes after violence—is already wondering what kind of music would pour out of you if you let that curse in. What you could compose if you survived it. The rest of you knows this is the kind of choice that draws a line you can’t uncross.

The beaver-folk mistakes your silence for negotiation. “Seventy-thirty. Final offer. And I’ll throw in information about where Greaves hunts tonight. You can stop him, play hero for the constables, build your reputation. Then we do the demonstration for Ash-Seal tomorrow. Everyone wins.”

Your fingers drift to your rapier’s pommel. The mirror keeps pulsing. Six beats. Rest. Six beats. Like a heartbeat. Like a song you haven’t written yet.


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You lean in close enough that your whiskers nearly brush his cheek, letting your tail curl around his wrist where it rests on the bar. The beaver-folk goes rigid—prey instinct warring with something else. Good.

“Mmh, they say a lot of things about me,” you purr, tracing one claw along the edge of the coin pouch without opening it. “But ‘cheap’ isn’t one of them, sweetness.” Your heterochromatic eyes lock onto his—amber-gold and ice-blue pinning him in place. You can read him like sheet music: the way his breath catches, pupils dilating despite the fear-scent rolling off him. Desperate, yes. But there’s something else underneath. Anticipation?

“Triple,” you say, voice dropping into that register that makes people forget how to negotiate. “Your partner’s killing people, you need discretion, and you need someone who won’t run screaming when things get messy.” You let your fingers walk up his forearm. “That’s specialty work, darling. Premium rates.”

He swallows hard. “I—I don’t have that kind of—”

“Mrow, don’t lie to me.” Your whiskers flatten slightly, just enough to shift from seductive to dangerous. “You’re not coming to a tavern bard with a cursed-item problem because you’re poor. You’re coming because you need this handled quietly, and quiet costs.” You tilt your head, studying the micro-expressions dancing across his face. “So either you pay what I’m worth, or I walk, and you explain to the constables why you waited two weeks while bodies piled up.”

The beaver-folk’s breathing changes—faster, shallower. But he’s not breaking. He’s… calculating. Your ears swivel forward.

“Seventy-thirty,” he says suddenly.

“What?”

“The mirror—the cursed item. It’s functional. Controllable, in a sense.” His voice gains confidence, which sets your whiskers twitching. “Ash-Seal pays premium for items they can study and demonstrate. We contain it, prove what it does, I sell it to them. Seventy-thirty split. You get thirty percent.”

Your mind catalogs this instantly: He’s not trying to destroy the curse. He’s trying to profit from it. And he needs you to—what? Demonstrate it? Contain Greaves while he still transforms? The chord progression in your head shifts to something darker, more complex.

“You want me to help you sell the thing that’s turning your partner into a killer.” You don’t phrase it as a question. “While he’s still useful as proof of concept.”

The beaver-folk meets your eyes. “Greaves doesn’t remember anyway. And the money would set us both up for years. I know where he hunts. I know the pattern. We just need… documentation. Containment. Someone who can handle the dangerous part.”

Your tail lashes once. The dangerous part. The part where you’d be close to something curse-twisted and violent, where blood would likely spill, where that crystalline clarity might finally arrive and the music you’ve been chasing would bloom perfect and terrible in your skull.

Your whiskers are already trembling with something that isn’t quite fear.

What do you do?


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You pull back like he’s venomous, tail snapping away from his wrist. The predatory warmth drains from your expression, leaving something colder, clearer. “No.”

The beaver-folk blinks. “What?”

“No.” You stand, smoothing your tail fur with one hand—the nervous gesture betraying what your voice doesn’t. “I’ve crossed lines, sweetness. Plenty of them. But this?” Your whiskers flatten completely. “You’re not trying to stop your partner. You’re trying to profit off him. Off the people he’s killed.” The words taste wrong in your mouth, and that wrongness is what decides it. “That’s too fucking twisted even for me.”

You can see the calculation die in his eyes, replaced by panic. “Wait—you can’t—”

“Watch me.” You’re already moving, slinging your lute case over your shoulder. The rapier’s weight at your hip feels necessary, grounding. Your mind is racing, converting the situation into rhythm—6/8 time, the mirror’s pulse, the pattern of a trap you almost walked into. The melody forming is discordant, unfinished, and it makes your chest tight.

The night air hits you as you push through the tavern door. Brinewick’s canal-smell wraps around you—brine and rot and fish. The constabulary station is three blocks west, near the merchant district. You know because you’ve made a point of knowing where law enforcement operates in every city you work.

Your ears swivel back. The beaver-folk hasn’t followed. Smart. But now you’re walking toward the constables with a story about cursed mirrors and nighttime killings, and you’re a traveling bard with a reputation for not flinching at violence. They might listen. They might arrest you for wasting their time. They might already know about the bodies and wonder why you know details.

Your whiskers twitch. The smart play would’ve been taking the contract, documenting everything, then selling both the mirror and the evidence. Control the narrative. Instead you’re about to hand your leverage to people who don’t owe you anything.

But the alternative was becoming part of something that made your skin crawl, and apparently you still have limits. Who knew?

The constabulary station’s lamplight glows ahead. You can see two constables outside—a tall human woman and a tortoise-folk man, both armed. This is the moment. Once you walk up those steps and start talking, you’re committed. No take-backs, no negotiations, no performance that lets you slip away clean.

Unless you don’t. Unless you find Greaves yourself first, before the beaver-folk can move the mirror or disappear. Unless you handle this your way—not for profit, but because someone should, and the constables are slow and the bodies are real.


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You slide onto the bar stool beside him, close enough that your tail brushes his leg—calculated intimacy, the kind that makes people spill secrets. “I’m listening, mrow,” you purr, letting your voice do that thing where it sounds like an invitation and a threat at the same time. Your whiskers angle forward, reading the micro-tensions in his posture. “But I need details. When did this start? What does he become? Where does he hunt?” Your clawed finger taps the bar in rhythm—already your mind is converting his panic into tempo.

The beaver-folk glances around nervously before leaning closer. His breath smells like fear and wood shavings. “Two weeks ago. Greaves bought a dredger haul—mostly junk, rusted tools, broken pottery. But there was a mirror.” His voice drops further. “Ornate thing, silver frame with strange engravings. He looked into it once, just once, and that night…” He swallows hard. “He came back covered in blood. Didn’t remember leaving the warehouse. Said he’d slept through the night.”

“And the pattern?” you press, your ice-blue eye fixed on his face while your amber one tracks the tavern’s crowd. Your tail coils around the stool leg—anchoring yourself while your mind races ahead to chord structures, to the way terror sounds when you pluck it just right.

“Every night since. Always between midnight and dawn. He goes to the canal district—the old warehouse rows near Southwick Bridge. Three bodies so far that I know of.” The beaver-folk’s paws tremble as he slides a folded paper across to you. “This is where we store the timber. The mirror’s there, locked in my office. I… I haven’t destroyed it because—” He hesitates, and something flickers across his face. Not just fear. Anticipation? “—because Ash-Seal pays premium prices for functional cursed items. If you can prove it works, prove it can be controlled or contained, we split the sale. Seventy-thirty, your favor.”

There it is. The real melody beneath the desperate harmony. He wants to profit from this. Your whiskers twitch—not quite a lie, but not quite honest either. “Show me the mirror first,” you say, your voice dropping the sultry performance into something flat and surgical. “Then tell me everything about how Greaves hunts. Does he track by scent? By sound? Does he remember his victims come morning, or is it complete blackout?” Your claws drum against the bar—six-eight time, you note distantly. Everything is music if you listen right.

The beaver-folk nods rapidly. “Complete blackout. He wakes up in his bed, no memory of leaving. But there’s always blood under his claws, dirt on his feet. And the mirror—” His voice catches. “—it glows. Sickly green light, pulsing like a heartbeat when the sun goes down.”

Your breath catches. Not from fear—from recognition. That’s the rhythm you’ve been chasing. The one that arrives right after violence, right after the kill, when everything becomes crystalline and clear. You can already hear it: the pulse of cursed light translating into bass notes, the transformation into a crescendo, the hunt into a bridge that builds and builds until—

You realize you’ve been silent too long. The beaver-folk is staring at you, uncertainty creeping into his expression. Your whiskers flatten slightly as you force yourself back into the moment. “The warehouse,” you say simply. “Take me there. I want to see this mirror before I commit to anything.”

What do you do?


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You lean back slightly, letting your heterochromatic gaze bore into him—amber and ice reading every microexpression. Your whiskers flatten just enough to signal you’re not buying the full story. “Seventy-thirty sounds lovely, mrow,” you say, voice silk over razors, “but I don’t commit to hunting cursed problems without seeing what I’m actually dealing with.” Your tail uncurls from the stool, tip flicking in that particular pattern that means you’re calculating angles. “Tonight. I watch the transformation from a safe distance. See what your partner becomes, how the curse actually works, whether this is a containment job or a mercy killing.”

The beaver-folk’s whiskers twitch—there, that tells you he was hoping you’d just take his word for it. “That’s… reasonable,” he admits slowly. “But if Greaves catches your scent while he’s changed, I don’t know what he’ll do. The transformation makes him… wrong. Predator-wrong. His eyes go black, his teeth sharpen, and he moves like something that learned to hunt before it learned to think.”

“I can handle myself,” you say flatly, though your mind is already composing—6/8 rhythm, that green pulse he mentioned, the way terror sounds different when the monster used to be someone you knew. “Where exactly should I position myself? Rooftop? Alley? I need sightlines and escape routes.”

He pulls out a second scrap of paper, sketching quick lines with a charcoal nub. “The warehouse district near Southwick Bridge. There’s a three-story grain storage building with a flat roof—here.” He marks an X. “You’ll see the timber yard from there, and the route Greaves takes toward the old canals. He leaves around midnight, returns just before dawn.” His paw hesitates over the sketch. “The mirror stays in my office. It glows when the curse activates—sickly green light, pulses like a heartbeat. You’ll know when it starts.”

Your ears swivel forward. That rhythm again. Your fingers itch for your lute’s strings. “And you’ll be where during all this?”

“Safe in my quarters, door barred, pretending I don’t hear him leave.” The beaver-folk’s voice cracks slightly. “Same as every night for two weeks.”

You study him a moment longer—the way his shoulders hunch, the slight tremor in his webbed fingers, the calculating gleam buried under the fear. He’s not just desperate. He’s invested. This curse is worth money to him, and you’re the instrument he’s hoping will make it profitable. Fine. You can work with that. You’ve been worse things than someone’s profitable tool.

“Midnight, then,” you say, sliding off the stool with feline grace. “I’ll be on that roof. And beaver?” You lean close enough that your whiskers nearly brush his cheek. “If you’re lying about any detail that gets me killed, I’ll haunt you so thoroughly you’ll beg for whatever Greaves does to his victims. Understood, mrow?”

He nods quickly, and you catch the genuine fear there—good. You take the sketched map and the warehouse address, tucking both into your hidden pockets. The night air outside will be cold, and you have hours to kill before midnight. Your lute case feels heavy on your shoulder, and part of you wants to find a quiet corner to play, to chase that 6/8 rhythm that’s been circling your mind since he mentioned the mirror’s pulse. But another part—the part that keeps you breathing in dangerous cities—knows you should prepare. Scout the location in daylight. Check your medical kit. Maybe sharpen your rapier. Or you could visit the constabulary, see what they know about the bodies. Information is leverage, and leverage is survival.

The Drowned Serpent’s door swings shut behind you as you step into Brinewick’s lamp-lit streets, the canal-smell thick in the air, your mind already three moves ahead.

Post-mortem for Custody of the Rot

If you’re reading these words without having read the story mentioned in the title, don’t be a fucking moronski; read it first.

I assume you’ve read some of my previous posts on my ongoing fantasy cycle, so you may remember that I’m producing these stories in tandem with improvements to my app, named Living Narrative Engine. It’s a browser-based system for playing scenarios like immersive sims, RPGs, etc. I’m compelled by the mutual pulls of adding more features to my engine and experiencing new scenarios; sometimes I come up with the scenario first, sometimes with the mechanics. That has my brain on a constant “solve this puzzle” mode, which is the ideal way to live for me.

Anyway, the following scenarios involving a brave bunch of dredgers in a fantasy world, tasked with extracting a dangerous arcane artifact from some gods-forsaken hole, will require me to develop the following new mechanics:

  1. Lighting mechanics. Currently, every location is considered constantly lit. Given that we’re going underground and that the narrative itself requires using lanterns, I have to implement mechanics for recognizing when a location is naturally dark, and whether there are light sources active. There are other mechanics providing information about the location and actors in it, so from now on, when a location is naturally dark and nobody has switched on a flashlight, we have to block offering descriptions of the location and other actors in it, and instead display text like “You can’t see shit.”
  2. Once lighting mechanics exist, we need actions for lighting up and snuffing out lanterns and lantern-like entities. By far the easiest part.
  3. Currently, when an actor speaks in a location, the speech is only received by actors in that location. At the same time, I consider an entity a location when it has defined exits. Now we find ourselves in a situation in which we have a thirty-feet-long underground corridor separated by grates. That would make each segment between grates a location (which would be correct, given the boundary), but an actor could step from a boundary into the next and suddenly not hear a character on the other side of a grate’s bars. Obviously idiotic. So I need to implement a mechanical system for declaring “if an actor speaks here, the voice will be heard in these other places too.” That will need to extent to actions too: if you have eyes, you can see someone scratching his ass on the other side of bars.
  4. No other scenario has featured water sources that could play a part. And by play a part I mean that actors could get in or fall in, exit them, struggle in the water, and drown. I really don’t want to see my characters drowning, but that’s part of the stakes, so the mechanics need to exist. Given that water sources tend to be connected to other locations and not through the regular exits, I will need some way of allowing “I’m in the water, so I want to swim upstream or downstream to a connected stretch of this water source.” This whole water system will be arduous.
  5. Line-tending mechanics. Until I started researching matters for this story, I doubt that the notion of line-tending had ever entered my mind. Now we need mechanics for: 1) making an owned rope available to others. 2) Clipping and unclipping oneself from the available rope. 3) pulling on the rope to draw back someone clipped that’s wandering away. 4) possibly other cool line-tending-related mechanics. I can see line-tending reappearing in future scenarios such as traditional dungeon delves (for example, to avoid falling in Moria-like environments). Admittedly, though, this whole thing is quite niche.
  6. Blocker-breaking mechanics. Basically: this door is bar-based, so this allows a hacksaw to hack through the bars. I don’t want to make it a single action, but a progressive one (e.g. if you succeed once, it only progresses a step toward completion).
  7. Mechanics related to mind control. To even use those actions, I will need to create a new type of actor for the scenarios: a dungeon master of sorts. Basically a human player that’s not accessible to others, as if it were invisible, but that can act on present actors. I would give that dungeon master for this run the can_mind_control component, then allow actions such as putting people into trances, making them walk off, dive into water, etc. This means that there would need to be opposite actions, with the victims fighting to snap out of the trance. It will be fun to find out what happens when the scenario plays out. In the future, this dungeon master could be controlled by a large language model without excessive difficulty: for example, feeding it what’s happened in the story so far, what are the general notions about what should happen, and giving it actions such as “spawn a hundred murder dragons.”

That’s all that comes to mind now regarding the mechanics to add.

About the story: so far, it seems I want magic to be treated in this fantasy world as if it were toxic material. That’s not a decision I’ve made about worldbuilding, but a natural consequence of the stories I’ve felt like telling. I actually don’t believe in the kind of worldbuilding in which you come up with imaginary words for the warts on an invented race’s ass. I’m all about use and tools. My mind always goes for “what can I build with this.” I’m very rarely interested in a subject if I can’t see myself creating a system out of it. It also doesn’t help that due to autism, abstractions tend to slip through my fingers, so I need to feel like I’m sensing something to understand it.

In a way, I wanted to create a story about specialists working through a problem that needs to be solved. Jorren Weir, Kestrel Brune, Saffi Two-Tides, Pitch… these people don’t have superpowers. Most of them are glad they can keep a job. There is no grand evil here, just people’s self-interest. I want them to do well so that they can return home at the end of the ordeal. But given that we’re dealing with chance-based tests, that’s not a guarantee. And that tension alone makes it exciting for me to experience these scenarios.

As usual, if you’re enjoying these stories, then great. Otherwise, fuck off.

Custody of the Rot (Short Story)

The mansion’s front door fights back, then the servant yanks it wider and nods. I’m past him, boots on gravel, cutting for the service yard.

The yard’s a wedge of hard-used ground trapped between the east wing and the boundary fence—packed gravel, deep wagon ruts, built to take mud and keep moving. Our cart sits in the thick of it, and the crew’s gathered there: Pitch in his blast bib, Saffi in her dive jacket, Kestrel’s tall frame, and Hobb Rusk standing off to the side in that kiln-black Ash-Seal coat.

Past the fence, the canal runs parallel and close, separated by a narrow strip of towpath. The water’s wrong: tar-black, sluggish, filmed with a dull sheen that catches lamplight in greasy swirls. The smell reaches us in waves—sour rot with metal underneath, like wet iron left in a bucket too long.

I stop at a distance, far enough to address my crew as a group. I meet their eyes one by one: Pitch, Saffi, Kestrel.

Then I sigh. Lower my head.

My tail starts thumping against the gravel—slow, rhythmic. Old habit. I raise my gaze again, and something hardens in me.

“Alright, crew. Client’s one Lady Eira Quenreach. I had only heard of her. Now I wish it had remained that way. Had you followed me inside that trap room, there would have been far more shouting. Short version—we’re screwed. Long version—Lady was renovating her underground galleries when they dislodged an ancient artifact in a silted culvert. Messed with the seal or the ward or whatever. It started leaking that rot that has blackened the waters and made them stink something awful.”

I jerk my chin toward the canal.

“As you can see, it’s spreading far out of the estate. They reckon in two days the rot’ll be in range of the city inspectors. Of course Quenreach wants us to get rid of the artifact before someone sniffs her way. And the artifact won’t stop spewing that black shit, which means it’ll eventually ruin Brinewick’s whole canal network unless we stop it. Somehow that ain’t the worst of it.”

The silence stretches. Morning fog drifts between us, and the canal churns wrong behind the fence—thick, sluggish, a sound like something rotting from the inside out.

Kestrel laughs. Sharp. Involuntary. The sound cuts through the fog and dies fast.

I rub the fur of my brow, then meet their eyes again.

“The construction workers who approached the artifact reported pressure headaches. Fell into trance states. Got mind-wormed—intrusive compulsions toward moving water. Two workers drowned. Afterwards, all the workers quit. Some took at least a couple of the grate keys with them. A fuck-you on their way out, maybe.”

I shake my head.

“A mind-controller ancient artifact that risks rotting the whole canal network’s water. Which of course includes Brinewick’s drinking supplies. Lady Quenreach should have kissed our boots for coming down here to fix this quick.”

My jaw tightens.

“Instead, she handed me a contract that says the moment we touch that artifact, custody falls on us. Including responsibility for further contamination and deaths. And if the inspectors trace the mess back to the source and want to squeeze money out of anyone responsible, we’re supposed to pay for the protected parties’ losses—which would include the whole of Brinewick, as if we shat the ancient turd ourselves. Of course, by ‘we’ I mean me and our bossman back at headquarters. Nothing legal’s going to barrel down your way.”

I draw a breath. Let it out.

“Guess I’ve gotten through all the setup. This is the part where I tell each of you—Saffi, Pitch, Kestrel—that if you want to walk, you walk. Truth is, though, I don’t think this can be done without any of you.”

Kestrel laughs again—another sharp burst, then another, each one cutting out fast like her throat’s choking them off. Her eyes dart from me to Pitch to Saffi to the canal and back, that worried look deepening across her muzzle while her mouth keeps trying to laugh.

I turn my hands palm-up toward the sky, then drop them and force myself to meet each of their eyes one by one.

“Yeah, it was a lot to take in for me too. Let’s hear it, folks. What do you decide? I promise to shield you from any legal consequences—I’m the only one who signed, and if push comes to shove, I’ll claim I worked alone—but we’re risking more than legal here. Whoever’s staying, we gotta know soon, because we must move straight to logistics. Every minute counts.”

Pitch stands there in his blast bib, expression unreadable. Saffi’s golden eyes are hooded, slits tracking between me and the others.

Kestrel turns her head toward them both, then back to me. A broad smile spreads across her muzzle. She laughs.

“Yeah, I’m in. Not walking on this one, Jorren. You need muscle for hauling, pinning, or dragging someone out of a trance state before they drown themselves? That’s what I do.”

Another involuntary laugh bursts out of her.

“Besides, if that rot hits the drinking water and people start dying, that’s on all of us if we could’ve stopped it and didn’t. So count me in. Let’s hear the logistics.”

A sigh of relief escapes me before I can stop it.

“Don’t know how glad I am to have you by my side in this rotten mess, Kestrel.”

I turn my gaze to Pitch and Saffi.

“We got at least two old ironwork grates to crack open because their keys have flown. I’m talking thirty feet from access point to the half-collapsed culvert where the artifact is entombed, so we’ll need expert handling of bolt cutters or handsaws while mind-worms push into our brains. That’s where you’d come in, Pitch. And Saffi, intrusive compulsions toward diving into rotted flows means we need a line tender. The best in the business. The rope-meister. Not guilting you—just stating facts. We pull that artifact out of the water or soon enough Brinewick’s going to be drinking rot.”

Pitch meets my eyes directly. His voice comes out flat and certain.

“I’m in. Ironwork cracked and grates breached while mind-worms push into our heads? That’s demolition work under pressure, and that’s what I do. The rot’s real, the timeline’s real, and if we don’t stop it Brinewick’s drinking supply goes septic. So fuck the paperwork. I’ll handle the breaches. You’ve got your demolition specialist.”

Saffi’s tail curls once, then goes still. She speaks.

“You need a line tender who can read wrongness through rope before it becomes visible. Someone who won’t freeze when mind-worms start pushing compulsions. The artifact’s already killed two people. So yeah. I’ll handle the line work. You’ve got your rope-meister.”

The relief hits hard.

I catch movement in my periphery—Hobb Rusk stepping closer, circling around the crew’s loose cluster to position himself near our group. Still in that meticulous Ash-Seal coat, still silent, but the proximity signals engagement. Not commitment, though.

I thump my tail against the gravel once, decisively. The sound cuts through the fog and settles something in me. My face shifts—the worry-frown giving way to the harder focus I get when I’m mapping logistics.

“About thirty feet from access point to flooded section that contains our half-collapsed silted culvert and the buried artifact. Can’t wade straight to it—at least two grates we don’t have keys for. We get through the grates first. Then we dig the artifact out, slow and careful. Client believes it’s currently sealed, so we can’t risk cracking that with a quick extraction.”

I crouch down, fingers tracing an absent map in the gravel while I think it through.

“The sealed version of the artifact is already rotting the canal network and killing people, so we don’t want to know what the exposed version can do.”

The line draws itself in my head: access point to first grate to second grate to artifact location. Thirty feet of blind work underground.

“Zero visibility in those underground tunnels. Lanterns are a must.” I turn my head toward the cart. “We brought a couple. Alright, so we illuminate our steps from the access point to the grates. Imagine we’re cutting through the locked grates when mind-fuckery worms its way into our brains, telling us to dive into the canal waters. Need to be clipped to a rope, with Saffi as the anchor on the back. Anyone strays, sharp pull. These mind-compulsions don’t sound like the kind of worm you can squash easily, because construction workers just walked into a drowning—any of us starts looking loopy and tries to unclip themselves from the line, we need strength to restrain them. That’s where you’ll come in, Kestrel.”

Pitch heads toward the dredgers’ cart, his stocky frame cutting through the fog. He reaches for the bolt cutters, testing their weight and grip with practiced hands.

“I’ll take point on the grate breaches. Bolt cutters for primary cuts, hacksaw for backup if the ironwork’s thicker than expected.”

Pitch grabs the bolt cutters fully, the metal catching what little light pushes through the dawn.

“Thirty-year-old grates, no keys, zero visibility, mind-worms pushing drowning compulsions—yeah, I can work with that. Just need to know: are we cutting clean to preserve the infrastructure, or are we cracking them fast and dirty to hit the timeline? Because those are different approaches, and I need to know which one we’re buying before I start planning the cuts.”

I straighten up from the crouch, and that’s when I notice the newt-folk liaison, Hobb Rusk, standing to my side. Close—touching distance. That kiln-black coat, the ash-gray collar standing crisp despite the fog. Those large round eyes fixed on me, waiting. He’s positioned himself to hear my answer to Pitch, but he ain’t dressed for tunnels and he sure as hell ain’t volunteering to come down with us.

I meet his eyes briefly.

“Thank you for paying attention to our logistics, Master Rusk, even though I won’t even bother asking if you’re coming down to contain the artifact at the extraction point. You ain’t even dressed for it. But all we need is your magic box and a thorough destruction of the ancient terror so we can all cart back to our lives.”

I turn to face our sapper directly.

“Pitch, don’t know where you got that thing about grates being thirty years old. The way the Lady and her right-hand man sounded, the infrastructure down there is ‘ancestors-old.’ Maybe a couple hundreds of years old. Ironwork that age may be easier to saw through. Regarding infrastructure, this ain’t a ‘blow shit up’ situation, I’m afraid to disappoint. Silted culvert containing the entombed artifact is already half-collapsed—a blast may send down slabs of stone onto the artifact’s seal, then all hell’s broke loose. Lady Quenreach agrees to ruining them locked grates, just not to the point of collapsing the tunnels and fucking us all.”

Pitch moves back toward the cart and grabs the hacksaw, testing the blade tension with his thumb. His voice comes out measured.

“Ancestors-old ironwork. Right. That’s brittle, oxidized differently than modern stock—fails at different stress points. Makes the cuts trickier but maybe faster if I read the weaknesses right.”

He slides the hacksaw into his belt loop alongside the bolt cutters.

“Got primary and backup. No explosives, no structural collapse risk. Just precise cuts through old iron while mind-worms crawl into our skulls.”

A burst of wild laughter from Kestrel punctuates Pitch’s resolution. She stays quiet otherwise, that worried look still carved deep across her muzzle even as her mouth twitches toward another laugh.

Saffi moves to the cart and takes one of the hooded oil lanterns, the motion efficient and practiced.

“Alright,” I say, “both phases seem separated to me—first, clear our path to the flooded section where the artifact waits buried under two feet of contaminated water. Once we’re done with that, we head back up, leave the bolt cutters and hacksaws and whatnot, then pick up the planks and trenching shovels and block-and-tackle for the by-the-book extraction. We will enter with Pitch on point, the four of us clipped, rope-meister on the back as anchor. Let’s think perils—bad water that’s also a lure. One of us may pause, stare at the flow, step in, stop fighting to get out. Being clipped should help.”

I approach the cart to browse through the remaining tools. My hand scratches at my chin.

“Might wanna bring the throw line… but we’d have to hope the person who walked into the water wants to catch it. Rest of the risks come when we reach the silted culvert—I’m talking zero visibility sludge, confined space hazards. Two feet of water over uneven rubble is ankle-breaking terrain. Will need planks for that. And of course: crack the seal, and everyone loses.”

Saffi moves to the cart and takes a coil of long rope, looping it over her shoulder.

“Logistics of the first extraction phase look fine,” I say. “Now, worst case scenarios—imagine Saffi’s tending to the line when she suddenly decides the rotted waters look sweet enough for a dive, and we find our diver underwater in waters she shouldn’t dive in. Or what if the first one to look loopy is our gentle giant Kestrel, but nobody’s strong enough to restrain her? What if Pitch’s cutting through a grate only for his hands to drop the tools, then for him to jump pantless and ass-first into that liquid darkness? Any ideas?”

Kestrel lets out a succession of laughs that manage to sound both compulsive and nervous.

“C’mon, folks,” I say. “I’m thinking our most reasonable contingency plan is ‘don’t get mind-wormed.’ Anyone clever enough to come up with something better to do once someone’s eyes go blank?”

Pitch moves toward the cart again, reaching for one of the remaining hooded oil lanterns.

“Need light to read the ironwork properly. Can’t assess cuts or oxidation patterns in the dark.”

He takes the lantern, metal catching dull morning light through the fog.

I rub the fur of my forehead, working through the problem.

“Let me think about this… Two construction workers drowned. Plenty reported the mental compulsions but didn’t jump into the water. We need a taste of how those mind-worms actually feel like. A probe of sorts. Once we go down there—clipped of course—for the first phase, the moment one of us gets mind-wormed and starts hearing words in their head that don’t belong to them, we hurry them back up to the surface, or at least out of the access point. See how long it takes for the mind-worm to go away. Which we know it does because the affected workers all fled.”

“Alright, worst-case scenarios,” Kestrel says. “Here’s what I’m thinking—we can’t stop the mind-worm from hitting, but we can make it harder to act on. First: multiple clips on the line. Not just one carabiner—two, maybe three per person. That way if someone’s brain tells them to unhook and dive, they’ve got to fumble through extra metal while we’re yanking them back. Buys us seconds, maybe more.”

She shifts her weight, that worried look still carved deep across her muzzle even as another involuntary laugh bursts out.

“Second: watchers. We pair up—one person works, one person watches. Pitch cuts the grate, I watch his eyes. Saffi tends line, Jorren watches her. The moment someone goes blank-eyed or starts staring at the water too long, the watcher yells and we haul them out of the access point, back to the surface, see how long it takes for the compulsion to fade. Third, and this is the uncomfortable part—if the worm hits me and I decide I want that water, rope tension and crew strength might not be enough to stop me. So we need a fallback: Saffi’s line-work has to be strong enough to drag dead weight, and the rest of you need to be ready to pile on if I start moving toward the canal. Same goes for anyone else who gets wormed hard. We can’t prevent it, Jorren. But we can plan for the aftermath. Make it harder to drown ourselves even when our brains are telling us it’s the right call. Not a great plan. But it’s the only one I’ve got that’s honest about the risk.”

“Brilliant, Kestrel. Multiple clips. Pair up. I think that’s as good as it’s going to get for our first extraction phase.”

I turn my head to look up at the Ash-Seal liaison. Hobb Rusk’s standing there in that meticulous kiln-black coat, large round eyes fixed somewhere between me and the crew. He’s been listening this whole time—close enough to hear every word of our contingency planning, silent enough that I almost forgot he was there.

“Master Rusk, what exactly do you need from us? We’ve worked with other Ash-Sealers in the past but not in these fucked-up circumstances. What constraints are you relying on so you can contain the artifact in your box and pulverize it, or whatever the hell you tight-lipped fuckers do?”

Hobb’s eyes shift to meet mine directly. There’s a pause, like he’s organizing his answer into the specific order he wants. His hands stay at his sides, webbed fingers motionless. Then he speaks.

“I need the artifact intact and sealed when you hand it to me. If the seal’s cracked—if you drop it, if stone slabs crush it during excavation, if someone gets mind-wormed and drags it through contaminated water—the containment process changes completely. A sealed artifact goes into the box with standard ward protocols and salt geometry calibration. An actively leaking artifact requires layered suppression, extended calibration time, and significantly higher risk of containment failure. So your extraction needs to be precise enough that what you bring me is still structurally intact, even if it’s covered in sludge. Beyond that, I need workspace—clean ground, adequate humidity for the box’s adhesion wards, and enough light to verify seal integrity before I start the containment sequence. If you can’t provide that at the extraction site, we bring the artifact back here to the service yard before I touch it. And timeline: sealed artifact, maybe an hour for full containment. Cracked artifact, could be three to six hours depending on how bad the leak is, and I can’t guarantee success if the damage is severe enough.”

His lipless mouth compresses into a thin line.

“So the short version is this—bring me what you promised Lady Quenreach you’d extract, don’t fuck up the seal during the dig, and give me the workspace I need to do my job properly. Do that, and we’re fine. Crack it and hand me a disaster, and the timeline you’re working with collapses completely.”

I nod at Hobb Rusk, processing his parameters.

“Got it—clean ground, adequate humidity, enough light. Perfect arguments to stay topside instead of crawling through contaminated tunnels with us. Alright, we’ll bring the ancient, sludgy turd straight to your hands, and hope we don’t ruin the package along the way.”

I look around at the opulent estate grounds—manicured gardens, precisely trimmed hedges, wide gravel paths that probably cost more than my year’s wages.

“As for providing you with a good enough workspace…” I gesture at the space around us. “If the open air won’t do, we can talk to the steward. Man’s an amphibian too—maybe you two will reminisce about your family tree as you save the day.”

My tail thumps against the gravel twice. I turn to face my crew. Pitch stands there in his blast bib, bolt cutters and hacksaw collected, lantern in hand. His expression’s unreadable—that demolition-specialist look that doesn’t give away whether he’s got questions or he’s just waiting for me to finish talking. Saffi’s got her rope coiled over one shoulder and her lantern ready, golden eyes tracking between me and the others with that hooded, calculating look she gets when she’s reading group dynamics.

“Folks,” I say, “unless you’ve got some last-minute objections, let’s gear up. Nobody’s dying today. Otherwise I’ll be forced to drag you out of whatever afterlife you believe in, and that’d ruin my afternoon.”

THE END

Blackwater Contract (Short Story)

A servant closes the door from outside without so much as a nod. Through the narrowing gap I catch a last glimpse of the foggy canal landing, the estate fence lost somewhere in the mist, before the latch clicks.

Inside, the vestibule’s churning with movement. Servants in uniform—animal-folk and humans both—scrubbing floors, rushing through with laundry. Frantic enough that something went wrong recently.

I stand on the mat by the threshold, waiting for someone to receive me. They flow past like I’m furniture.

“Hey,” I call out. “I’m with the dredgers. I was told to meet the employer here.”

Not a glance. A servant with a bucket doesn’t even break stride.

I thump my tail on the pristine tiles.

“Folks,” I say, keeping level. “Your canal water’s gone bad. That Lady of yours should come meet me as soon as possible.”

That breaks through. A human woman glances my way, then hurries toward the double doors at the far end of the hall. She swings one open and disappears inside.

Moments later she’s back out, and a toad-folk man in a tar-black waxed oversmock follows her into the hall. He makes straight for me.

I nod as he reaches me.

“I’m guessing you ain’t the Lady. I’m Jorren Weir, dredgers’ crew leader.” I hook my thumb back toward the estate grounds. “I saw you have a serious problem with your canal waters. Flow’s tar-black, rotten-looking, and it stinks something awful. This ain’t a simple spill situation, given you hired us dredgers.”

“You’ve got the right read, Weir. It’s not a spill—it’s sealed work gone wrong, and the Lady’s waiting to brief you herself.” He gestures with one padded hand toward an interior doorway, already turning. “This way. She’ll explain the contract terms and the site conditions. I’ll be handling your crew’s logistics once you’ve seen what we’re dealing with.”

He’s moving before he finishes speaking. I follow him through a short corridor and into a sitting room.

Upholstered chairs in pale colors, low table stacked with papers, muted lighting. A white-furred ermine-folk woman sits in one of the chairs, dressed in layers of ivory and pearl-gray, document in her gloved hands.

The toad-folk man moves to the second chair and settles into it, easy and practiced, angling so he’s facing both the lady and the empty third seat.

“Mr. Weir, this is Lady Eira Quenreach.” He nods toward the ermine-folk woman. “My Lady, Jorren Weir, crew leader.”

He gestures with one padded hand toward the third chair.

“The contract’s ready for your review, Weir, but the Lady will want to walk you through the site conditions first. What you saw from the canal edge is the surface problem—the sealed work’s below, and it’s nastier than a simple extraction.”

“Guess I’m sitting down.”

The chair’s more comfortable than I’m used to. Once I’m squared away, I address them both.

“Our boss was awfully cagey about this job. Even requested an Ash-Seal liaison to handle artifact destruction on-site.” I gesture toward the window, the canal beyond. “The rot on the waters tells me this is some shitty business. Never seen a cursed item taint our waters like that. Straight talk—what are we pulling up?”

Lady Quenreach extends the contract toward me—smooth, deliberate motion, held at an angle that reads as courteous rather than urgent. Her voice stays soft, measured.

“Mr. Weir. I appreciate your directness.”

The document passes from her gloved fingers to mine. Heavy.

“What you’re being asked to extract is a sealed artifact—very old, pre-estate construction, entombed in a silted culvert. We don’t know what it is.” She pauses, letting that settle. “What we do know is that it’s been leaching corruption into the canal water since it was dislodged during excavation work two days ago.”

I flip the contract open, scanning the first page while she talks.

“The workers who handled it reported pressure headaches, intrusive compulsions toward moving water, and trance states. Two drowned. The rest quit.”

My eyes flick up from the page.

“The site is partially flooded,” she continues, gray eyes level, tone factual. “The access routes are tight, and some of the grate keys are missing. You’ll need people who can work in bad water without losing focus, and you’ll need your Ash-Seal liaison on-site for destruction. That document establishes that you’re claiming the artifact under salvage and quarantine protocol. What it also establishes is that the artifact’s origin point is documented as somewhere in the broader canal network—not specifically here.” Her voice remains calm, almost gentle. “If inspectors trace the taint, your records will reflect that. The terms are there. Read them, and then we’ll discuss site access and compensation.”

I scratch the fur on my chin. Two drowned. A lure in the water. That’s new. Something this nasty needs to be dragged away from our canal waters as soon as possible.

First, though, I’ll read through this legal text of hers, see what fine print they’ve included.

“There’s always some, right?” I say, settling the contract flat across my lap.

The room goes quiet. I read through the standard clauses—salvage rights, quarantine authority, non-disclosure about site origin. All expected. Then I hit the section that makes my jaw tighten.

I lower the contract carefully to my lap, keeping my gaze on the text for a moment before I raise my eyes to both of them. I feel the frown pulling at my muzzle.

“Quite the one-sided contract, ain’t it?” I say, calm.

Lady Quenreach’s expression doesn’t shift. The toad-folk man stays still.

“I understand a legal document handing us off a cursed item,” I continue, “and requiring us not to tell that we found it in a noble’s estate. Standard stuff—nobody wants the stink to trace back to them, and most of the cursed shit’s been there for gods know how long, so the landowners aren’t at fault.”

I lift the contract, angling it so they can see I’m reading straight from the page.

“But what’s this crap?” I read aloud: “‘The moment a dredger touches the artifact, custody, disposal authority, and responsibility shift to the dredgers, including responsibility for contamination, downstream spread, injuries/deaths, and any public hazard that follows.’ Fuck, and this part—’If inspectors investigate, if fines happen, if scandal erupts—the dredgers must defend and pay for the protected parties’ losses.'”

I lower the contract again, meeting their eyes.

“So, it ain’t enough that we’re here to risk our necks in your canal, we’re also meant to eat the shit your artifact is already spewing?”

The silence stretches. Lady Quenreach’s face stays calm, her hands motionless in her lap. She lets my objection sit there in the air for a measured breath before she responds.

“You’re right, Mr. Weir. It is one-sided.” Her voice stays soft, but there’s something underneath it now. Thread of steel. “Because the artifact is already spewing, as you said. The contamination isn’t waiting for signatures—it’s spreading through the canal network right now, whether you take this contract or leave it. What this document does is formalize what’s already true: the moment you extract it, you’re the ones handling a quarantine-class object. That’s not me imposing liability—that’s waterways code. Cursed artifacts don’t stay clean just because the paperwork’s polite. If inspectors trace the taint and you’re standing there with no contract, no documented salvage claim, and no legal authority to have moved it—what does that look like? It looks like dredgers who freelanced a removal without protocol and made the problem worse. This contract is what makes your work legitimate. It establishes that you claimed it under salvage and quarantine authority, that you’re coordinating with an Ash-Seal liaison for proper destruction, and that you handled it by the book. The terms are harsh because the artifact is harsh. But they’re also what keeps you from being the ones blamed for amateur handling.”

Her voice softens just slightly.

“I need it gone, you need the pay and the proof your crew can do this kind of work, and the canal network needs it out of the water before the rot reaches Brinewick’s drinking supplies. The terms don’t change. But you can sign knowing that walking away doesn’t make the liability disappear—it just leaves it unassigned, and unassigned liability has a way of landing on whoever was closest when the disaster got worse.”

I shift in the chair, feeling the upholstery creak under me. I keep my voice level—calm, but firm enough that they hear I’m not bending just because the setting’s nice.

“Lady Quenreach, I respect your position as a noble of the realm, but let me tell you—I know the waterways code better than the bastards who wrote it. You wanna test me on that? Section twelve, subsection four. Salvage claim transfers on recovery, not on your say-so. Get it straight—we pull your trash out of the water. That don’t make us trash. Not river scum picking through garbage. We touch the occult shit so you don’t have to. Just because we’re built for water don’t mean we’re built to die in it for your convenience.”

The toad-folk man stays perfectly still in his chair. Lady Quenreach’s expression doesn’t shift.

“Thing is,” I continue, “we both know you can’t find another crew in time to risk their necks in that canal. Not when the rot’s spreading bad enough it’ll ruin the water system of our great city in a couple of days. That’ll affect far worse than your reputation, milady. So we can’t in good conscience leave your canal clogged with whatever ancient turd’s lodged down there.”

Silence settles over the room—the deliberate kind, where someone’s letting your words breathe before they respond. Lady Quenreach’s hands stay folded in her lap, her gray eyes steady on mine.

Then she speaks. Measured, almost thoughtful.

“You’re absolutely right, Mr. Weir. You’re not river scum. You’re professionals. That’s exactly why I called you. And you’re right that I can’t find another crew—not one that can handle contaminated salvage on this timeline, not one with an Ash-Seal liaison already coordinated, and not one whose boss understands that quarantine-class artifacts don’t wait for polite negotiation. But let’s be clear about what’s actually happening here. That artifact is already spewing its poison into the canal network. Whether you sign this contract or walk out that door, the taint is spreading. If it reaches Brinewick’s water supply—and it will, if no one extracts it—inspectors will come. They will trace it upstream. They will demand to know who knew, who delayed, and who refused to act.”

She leans forward slightly.

“If you walk away, they will find out professional dredgers were offered legitimate salvage work under quarantine protocol, were told about the contamination risk, and even though they had an Ash-Seal liaison ready to coordinate destruction, they refused. And when the disaster gets worse, when people start asking why no one acted, your boss’s reputation suffers. Not because you did the work badly. Because you didn’t do it at all.”

I tsk.

“Tough one, aren’t you?” I lean back in the chair. “I’ll bring my crew down there and get rid of the artifact. This ain’t about your fancy reputation or mine any longer—it’s about my little one not needing to drink rotten water thanks to whatever cursed piece of occult crap some ancient imbecile buried in your land.”

I pull my pencil from the vest pocket. Chewed at one end, but the graphite’s still good. My eyes catch the quill sitting on the coffee table between us—proper writing instrument, the noble kind.

I hold up my pencil.

“Is a dredger’s pencil good enough to sign, or do I need to use your quill as well?”

“Your pencil is perfectly acceptable, Mr. Weir. The contract’s binding either way. Sign wherever you’re most comfortable—margin, footer, wherever your crew protocol requires. If you want witness marks, Mr. Siltwell can countersign as landowner’s agent.”

Her gray eyes stay steady on mine.

“Once it’s signed, we’ll walk through site access, key inventories, and liaison coordination. The faster your crew can begin extraction, the better for everyone.”

I rest the contract on my thigh and sign using the pencil. When I straighten, my gaze sweeps from Lady Quenreach to the toad-folk man—Siltwell. The frown’s still pulling at my muzzle.

“Done,” I say. “All the dredgers’ crew responsibility now.”

Siltwell leans forward just enough that the room’s weight shifts with him. His tone stays practical.

“Good. Now we move to site access and coordination.”

I watch him settle into it. The quiet third chair’s gone—he’s running the show now, and the Lady’s sitting back to let him.

“The artifact’s lodged in a silted culvert beneath the east wing,” he continues. “Partially flooded, tight access routes, and some of the grate keys are missing because the workers who quit took them when they left. I’m working on recovering those keys, but in the meantime I’ll need to know your crew size, your equipment load, and whether your Ash-Seal liaison needs separate access or works embedded with your dredgers. You’ll report findings through me, I’ll handle access schedules and keep staff clear. The faster we can map crew movements and equipment staging, the faster you can begin work, and the faster that thing’s out of the water. What’s your crew’s standard operating procedure for contaminated salvage sites, and what do you need from me to make the first descent safe?”

I pull out my notebook—dog-eared, water-stained, pages crinkled from getting soaked and dried too many times. Flip it open to a clean page.

“Alright,” I say, pencil already moving. “You’re the key toad-man. Keymaster.”

I catch the faintest twitch at the corner of his mouth—not quite a smile, but close enough.

“We’re four dredgers, counting me. I wouldn’t count on the Ash-Seal fucker to venture into trouble with us—he hasn’t decided yet, as he wanted to know the details, but I’m guessing he’ll wait by the cart with his containment box for us to show up muddied and dragging the problem to him.”

I jot down a quick note about staging area, then look back up.

“My people are outside, waiting. Regarding standard operating procedure, need to know what tools to bring. Those missing keys, we don’t have time to wait for them. Will bolt cutters and saws do? Brought them with us, no problem carrying them. Just need to know if you can handle ruined grates.”

“Bolt cutters and saws will work—the grates are old ironwork, not secured against professional tools, and I’d rather you cut through than wait for keys that might not come back in time.”

I tap the pencil against the notebook.

“Also, artifact’s lodged in a silted culvert? Does it need to be dug up?”

Siltwell leans forward again, keeping that practical focus locked in.

“The artifact’s lodged in a collapsed culvert section, partially submerged in about two feet of contaminated water—silted channel, tight access, and yes, you’ll need to dig or dredge around it to get clean extraction leverage without cracking whatever’s keeping it sealed right now. Your four dredgers can stage from the east courtyard. I’ll have it cleared and your cart positioned there so your Ash-Seal liaison has clean line-of-sight to containment without needing to descend. I’ll walk you through the access route myself once we’re done here: down through the service stair, through the lower gallery, then into the construction zone where the culvert’s exposed. The flooded section’s maybe thirty feet from the access point, tight enough that your people will be working in close quarters with bad air and worse water.”

I raise my eyes to Siltwell, and let the look settle into something grave.

“Bossman had us bring muscle,” I say. “Are we dealing with beasties down there—the rabid or transformed kind—or does this artifact of yours just ruin our canal waters and mind-control people?”

“No beasties so far—no transformations, no rabid-kind threats, just the mental compulsion pull and the water rot. The workers who drowned walked in on their own, or slipped and didn’t fight to get back out, and the ones who got close reported headaches and intrusive whispers telling them to touch the flow or step into the channel. But I can’t promise the flooded zone’s safe from escalation. We don’t know what happens if someone stays submerged too long near the artifact, and contaminated sites have a way of getting worse once you start moving things. Your muscle’s a smart call—bring them, keep them close, and if anyone on your crew starts hearing whispers or staring at the water too long, pull them back topside immediately and don’t let them argue. The artifact’s not attacking people directly, but it’s pulling them in, and that’s dangerous enough when you’re working in tight quarters with bad air and two feet of tainted water underfoot. Treat it like the threat could escalate the moment you start extraction, and we’ll both sleep better once it’s in your Ash-Seal liaison’s containment box.”

“Alright,” I say. “Don’t need nothing more. I’ll get my crew up-to-date with this gods-awful shitshow, then flag down one of your servants when we’re ready.”

THE END

Perfect in the Ashes (Short Story)

Aldous’ kitchen sits in warm, dim light. Rough plaster walls, heavy timber beams, stone floor with salt worked into the cracks. Plain table against the left wall, two clay jugs on top. Tall cabinet on the far wall—open shelf with glass bottles.

We file in. Still wearing the chicken fight.

Bertram’s temple is stained with dried blood—chicken peck and self-inflicted pipe strike both. Aldous has tongues of dried blood down his arm. Vespera walks like her ass is on fire. Rill’s work tunic shows a bloom of blood at the chest.

Bertram plods to a stool, one hand over his temple like that’ll help. Sits down heavy.

“I don’t know about you folks, but I’ve had enough of chickens for a lifetime. I don’t even want to eat one for revenge.”

Vespera settles onto another stool with a careful wince, trying to keep weight off the wounded cheek.

“Alright, everyone survived the Great Chicken Apocalypse, but we’re all leaking in various places. Bertram, your temple looks like you lost a fight with your own pipe—which, to be fair, you did. Aldous, that arm needs cleaning. And Rill…” Her ears flick toward the girl. “…that’s a lot of blood soaking through. We should probably handle these wounds before they decide to get interesting in the bad way, meow.”

Can’t treat what’s got chicken shit in it.

“Need to clean these wounds.” I look at Aldous. “You keep vinegar in that cabinet?”

I cross to the cabinet, pull down a stoppered bottle from the shelf.

“Right,” Rill says. “Let’s get this done.”

She strips her work tunic off smooth, no hesitation. The chest wounds are visible now—punctures where the beaks found the soft spots, red and raw.

Aldous reaches for one of the clay jugs on the table, lifts it.

“There’s cider here if anyone wants it. Not much, but it’s clean.”

Bertram reaches for the other jug—the mead. Brings it to his nose. Sniff test. His eyes narrow when he lowers it. Pain flash.

“I’m glad you don’t mind if we help ourselves to your alcohol, friend.” He looks down at the salt worked into the floor cracks, even under the table. “And I must say, I owe you my apologies. I thought you were just eccentric. No harm in it. Gods know men like us who live alone for a long time get that way. But what made those chickens move… wasn’t whatever passes for mind in poultry.”

Vespera winces getting off her stool, approaches the wash basin.

“Melissa’s got the vinegar, but we need to rinse first—blood and gods-know-what needs to come off before disinfectant touches it.” She looks at Rill. “Come here. That chest wound took the worst of it, and you’re not doing anyone favors by pretending it’s fine. Let me clean it before Melissa works her vinegar magic.”

Rill crosses to the basin. Vespera works the cloth, methodical, gets the blood and chicken-shit off. The wounds look cleaner. Raw, but clean.

I move to Bertram with the vinegar jar. Head wounds bleed dramatic but they’re usually shallow. He’s coherent—all good signs.

“This is going to sting. Don’t jerk your head back.”

I tip the jar, let the vinegar soak into the wound. His fist goes white against the table edge. He bites his lip hard enough I can see the pressure, breathing through his nose to keep the expletives down.

I work it clean, watch for deeper damage signs. Pupils look normal. No confusion beyond the pain response. Shallow cut, like I thought.

Rill’s trying to treat her own chest wound now that Vespera rinsed it. Hands steady—adrenaline or stubbornness, hard to tell with her. She may have watched enough patchwork to know the theory. Clean, close, cover. Practice is different than theory. Her hands fumble the angle. Can’t see what she’s doing properly, can’t apply even pressure. The wound edges don’t meet right.

Aldous strips off his quilted jerkin. The bantam got his arm during extraction—shallow, but from a possessed bird. He’s standing there like he forgot he had his own wound until everyone else started getting treated.

Bertram takes a long pull from the mead jug, lowers it slow.

“Maybe I shouldn’t want to know, Aldous, but…” He looks at the potter. “You said whatever got into your chickens came from buried pottery. An ‘entity,’ you called it. What damnable thing did we just fight that found itself in our town?”

Vespera leans forward, ears swiveling toward Aldous.

“You’ve been hosting while bleeding, Aldous. Very hospitable, but let me take a look at that arm while you explain.” She gestures toward his wounded limb. “Sleeve needs to come up.”

Aldous is already moving to the basin. Rolls up the blood-stained sleeve on his left arm.

I move to Rill with the vinegar jar.

“Your turn. This’ll hurt worse than the rinse.”

She doesn’t blink. Just waits.

I tip the jar. Vinegar hits the punctures.

Her jaw locks hard. Fists clench. Breathing goes shallow and controlled, knuckles white against the burn. But she doesn’t jerk back, doesn’t make a sound. Just holds there while the vinegar works through raw tissue.

First serious wound she’s taken. From something that wanted to kill her. She’s not moving. Good.

Aldous starts rinsing his wound at the basin, water over the shallow bite.

“The entity came from something I buried. Eight years ago—piece of pottery from a failed firing. I thought burial would contain it. I was wrong.” His voice stays steady despite the sting. “The shard must have strengthened over time, reached out to the nearest living thing. By the time I dug it up and destroyed it properly, the corruption had already transferred into the hens. Living bodies anchor entities better than ceramic.”

He strips off his work shirt for better access to the wound.

“What you fought was something that shouldn’t exist—a contamination that moved from dead material into living hosts. That’s why extraction was necessary instead of slaughter. The birds weren’t the threat. They were just occupied.”

Bertram sets the mead jug back on the table. Then he looks at Aldous—long, grave stare.

“From a failed firing… eight years ago?” His voice drops. “You can’t mention ‘eight years ago’ and expect me not to know what that implies, my friend.” He rubs his temple where the wound is. Winces. “Did this entity have something to do with that sweet, studious apprentice of yours? What was her name…” Squints like recall’s harder with the head wound. “Mara, wasn’t it? First time you’ve referred to that year. Ever since.”

Vespera’s ears snap forward.

“Aldous, let me take a look at that arm while you tell us about Mara.” Her tone’s careful. “That kind of connection deserves the full story, meow.”

Bertram glances at her.

“I can see the bloodied hole in your breeches over your shapely ass right where that demon buried its beak, miss. Maybe you should let yourself be helped.”

Aldous’ arm needs disinfectant. Rinsed, exposed, accessible. Then closure. The wound’s not trivial—bantam peck, deeper than it looks. Blood loss makes people stupid. Infection risk is real. Vinegar will burn but he’s kept talking through worse today.

“Aldous. Hold still. Your turn.”

I move to him. Tip the vinegar over the wound, let it soak deep.

His jaw locks. Teeth grind—I can see the muscle flex. Fists clench white, breathing sharp through his nose. He holds still.

When I finish, he reaches for linen strips from the cabinet. Starts wrapping the wound himself. Hands steady despite the burn-ache.

“Yes. The entity came from Mara’s death.” First wrap secured. “Eight years ago I tried a ritual from a grimoire fragment I’d bought. Thought I was being careful, thought I understood the variables. I was wrong.” Another wrap. “The firing went catastrophically wrong and she died in the kiln fire. What came out of that kiln, other than burned shards, was my first functional containment vessel, sitting perfect in the ashes while she bled out on my workshop floor.”

He ties off the bandage. Small knot.

“So yes, Bertram—what you just helped me extract from those chickens has everything to do with my apprentice. Most of what I know about craft-based containment, I learned from the night she died.”

Bertram looks down at his lap. Lifts the clay jug to his lips, takes a longer gulp. Wipes his mouth with the back of his hand.

“That poor girl.” The edges of his eyes wrinkle. “Maybe I should say that… these things are not to be played around with. Whatever ‘entities’ exist out there that can be brought over through mysterious grimoires. But I guess… it happens. Despite our best intentions, life takes away the ones we care about.” He pauses. “Such a bright smile she had, that one.”

Vespera shifts her weight, ears flicking back.

“Right. Guess it’s my turn.”

She reaches back, works the torn breeches down over her ass. The wound’s exposed now—puncture, red, angry.

Bertram, seated behind her, makes a contemplative sound.

“Oh my. I can’t say I’ve seen many cat-folk butts in my long life, but yours is quite lovely, miss.”

Although Vespera’s tail twitches, she doesn’t turn around.

Last one needing disinfectant. Ass wounds are awkward but not complicated—muscle tissue, decent blood supply, low infection risk if treated properly. Vinegar will sting worse on tender flesh.

I cross to her with the jar.

“Vespera. This is going to burn.”

I tip it over the wound. Her spine goes rigid. Full-body shiver, tail jerking stiff. She sucks air through her teeth, claws flexing against the table edge. Holds still.

Rill’s trying to close her chest wound again. Hands working the angle, trying to bring the edges together. Can’t see what she’s doing. Fumbles the pressure. Won’t hold.

Aldous approaches her, methodical.

“Your wound’s been prepped correctly—rinsed and disinfected. Let me try to close it properly before infection sets in.” His voice stays level. “My medicine skill isn’t excellent, but the rooster got you helping with my problem. I owe you at least the attempt.”

Rill nods. He kneels beside her. Examines the punctures over her heart—copper-backed rooster hit the same spot twice. He reaches for linen strips, works the edges together carefully.

He tries to seat the cloth, then tries again. It slips. He pulls back, jaw tight, strips loose in his hands.

Bertram straightens. Sets the mead jug down on the table—solid thunk. Reaches behind his apron, extracts his pipe. He examines it like he’s checking for damage from the temple strike. Takes a long look at Rill.

“Kid, you did good. You went with us into that ambush. Kept holding tight to those chickens despite the bloom of blood in your chest. Despite the fact that you weren’t strong enough to prevent those feathered devils from escaping your grip. You’ve got grit is what I mean.”

He pauses. The pipe stays unlit in his fingers.

“Still… don’t know if that’s a good thing. There are worse things out there than possessed chickens, if you’re still willing to put your life on the line. Threadscar didn’t get her nickname from mopping floors, I’m guessing.”

Vespera shifts her weight, reaches down for the pooled breeches at her feet.

“Right, well. Can’t have a serious conversation about dead apprentices and entity corruption while my ass is hanging out. Not the aesthetic I was going for.”

She picks them up. Starts working them back over her hips, careful around the treated wound.

Rill’s chest wound is prepped—rinsed, disinfected, exposed. Both Aldous and Rill tried to close it already. Both failed. My turn. Rill’s young. Healthy tissue, good blood supply. Should respond well.

“Stay still. I’m closing this properly.”

I kneel and examine the punctures—rooster hit the same spot twice, over the heart. Worst wound of the group. Edges clean from the vinegar, good blood supply, no compromise visible.

I press the edges together—firm, even—and hold them while I seat the linen strip. Tension right, coverage right. I secure it and test the hold.

The bleeding’s checked, but nobody relaxes.

Aldous moves toward one of the empty wooden stools. Sits down careful, mindful of the arm wound.

“You all came here because I posted at the Registry about possessed chickens, and you stayed through an extraction that turned into a small battle.” His voice stays level. “I owe you more than cider. If anyone needs rest before heading back to town, the space is yours.”

Bertram produces a match, strikes his pipe. Flame catches. He lights the tobacco and takes a slow draw.

Smoke curls up. He’s watching Vespera work the vinegar-treated wound through the tear in her breeches.

“As for you, miss cat, I’m picturing a young life whole with fresh taverns in which to play, adventures to partake in.” Another puff. “Don’t know what brought you to our little nowhere-town, but I hope we didn’t make too bad of an impression on you. Possessed poultry and all.”

Vespera glances back toward the treated area.

“Melissa already handled the vinegar part—which hurt like absolute hell, by the way—so the wound’s disinfected. Let me see first if I can close this rooster wound properly.”

My hands are done. Now I watch.

Bertram’s managing his own pain—mead first, now pipe. Self-administered. Vespera’s struggling to handle her own closure attempt. Rill’s quiet, processing the first real wound she’s taken.

They’re talking about Mara again. Heavy conversation. Not my terrain. I patch bodies. I don’t patch guilt.

Bertram’s good at the social space. He reads people the way I read blood. I’ll watch for delayed shock. Infection signs. Anyone who destabilizes. That’s what I’m trained for.

The rest of it—the sharing, the bonding over tragedy—that’s their work.

THE END

That Feathered Bastard (Short Story)

Plank walls stained deep brown, low ceiling beamed with simple timbers, two stubby roost bars mounted like a ladder on the left wall. Centered at the back sits a narrow shelf unit divided into three nesting cubbies. The floor’s covered in flattened straw and wood shavings, uneven underfoot, with two shallow bowls set directly on it. Morning light struggles through the wire-mesh opening. Corners stay shadowed; wood grain shows deep and dark. Burnt clay coats my throat with every breath.

We’re all inside now—Bertram, Aldous, “Threadscar” Melissa, Rill, and me, crowded into this glorified chicken prison. Five birds occupy the gloom: a black pullet with a crooked neck making tiny ceramic clicks from her beak, dust clinging to her pinfeathers like kiln sweepings. A copper-backed rooster with an impressive tail immediately positions himself between us and the other chickens, broad chest out like he’s got a chance. A buff hen with a startlingly pale face pecks the same exact spot in the litter, obsessive and drooping. A tiny slate-blue bantam circles the back corner.

And at the center: the speckled hen. Large, holding unnaturally still, staring straight ahead despite five humans invading her space.

The coop door scrapes shut, but the latch doesn’t catch. A finger-width gap of light. Bertram glances back at it, then scans the interior, jaw tight.

“This chicken coop of yours is way gloomier than it has any right to be,” he says.

Aldous moves closer, containment vessel cradled like glass.

“The gloom’s not aesthetic, Bertram. It’s symptomatic. The burnt-clay smell, the dim light, the way the roosting bars look wrong even though nothing’s physically changed—that’s all bleed-through from what’s anchored in the flock. Vespera, we’re starting with the speckled hen. I need you to position her exactly one handspan from the vessel’s opening when I give the word.”

The black pullet recenters its crooked neck with a sharp twitch. Click, click, click from the beak.

Melissa shifts beside me, moving into position without crowding my space. Support stance—sparring distance. Close enough to intervene.

The buff hen moves slowly across the litter, drooping like she’s sick, letting out soft clucks with a dry rasp underneath.

I move toward the speckled hen, keeping my movements fluid and deliberate. That clean focus I get before violence kicks in—except this time it’s aggressive chicken handling for occult pottery.

“I’ll hold her steady when you’re ready, Aldous,” I say, closing the distance smoothly. “Just tell me when to position her.”

The speckled hen holds that unnatural stillness, staring ahead while a milky film slides across her eyes—a second lid, slow and wrong.

Then, she jerks sideways, whole body yanked like an invisible wire pulled her. Her head swivels with mechanical precision, scanning. Seeking a target.

The hen’s eyes lock onto Melissa, and I catch the detail I missed before: concentric rings in the iris, like growth rings in cut wood. The gaze holds. Something passes between the hen and the veteran. Pressure drop before a storm.

Melissa doesn’t flinch. Her jaw sets, eyes narrowing, and whatever spiritual rot the hen’s pushing at her hits resistance. The veteran stands her ground.

The copper-backed rooster explodes into motion. Plants himself beside the speckled hen. His beak opens. Burnt clay rolls out on his breath—I taste it.

Then he lunges at Rill. The rooster jumps, surprisingly high for something that size, and drives his beak straight into Rill’s torso. Right over her heart. The impact lands wet and precise.

Rill staggers back. Her face registers the pain in a tight grimace, but her eyes stay locked on the rooster. Combat-ready despite the blood starting to seep through her linen tunic.

The black pullet’s making excited clicks now, rapid-fire ceramic taps that echo off the coop walls.

The slate-blue bantam explodes from the back corner, tiny legs churning through litter. She launches herself at Melissa, but the veteran sidesteps clean. The bantam’s beak snaps shut on empty air.

The buff hen, who’s been pecking obsessively at the same spot this whole time, suddenly lifts her head. Looks around like she’s just waking up. Then something clicks behind those pale eyes and she snaps alert.

She charges Bertram. The buff hen lunges with more speed than her drooping posture suggested possible, beak aimed at his face. Bertram throws his hands up, stumbling back—the hen overshoots, loses her balance completely, and hits the ground in a tumble of dusty feathers.

Bertram’s got his pipe out now, pulled from under his apron, gripped like a club.

“This was an ambush!” He edges closer to the fallen bird, keeping the pipe raised. “I guess the saying is true—no plan survives contact with the enemy!”

He drops down, gets his hands on the buff hen before she can right herself, and pins her. She thrashes but he’s got weight and leverage.

Aldous moves immediately. Not rushed—methodical. He crosses to Bertram and the restrained hen with the containment vessel still cradled carefully, his eyes already assessing angles and positioning.

“Bertram, keep holding her. I’m going to help her upright, and then we’re doing the extraction immediately while you’ve got her restrained. This is the best chance we’ll get.”

He sets the vessel down carefully, then gets his hands under the buff hen’s body. They wrestle the buff hen upright, Bertram maintaining his grip while Aldous adjusts her position with almost ritualistic precision.

Melissa lunges forward, going for the copper-backed rooster—the biggest active threat now that Bertram has the buff restrained. But the coop erupts into chaos of wings and movement. The speckled hen jerks sideways exactly as Melissa commits, the rooster pivots, and suddenly they’ve traded positions in that split-second scramble.

Melissa’s hands close around the speckled hen. She pins the wings tight against the bird’s body with both hands, adjusting her grip with practiced efficiency.

“Got her instead.” Melissa’s voice cuts through the noise, steady. “Aldous, proceed with your extraction. I’ll hold this one.”

The speckled hen thrashes, and that wrongness radiating from her intensifies. I can feel it like heat off sun-baked stone.

The rooster’s loose. He’s already drawn blood. Melissa’s got the primary anchor, Bertram’s locked down the buff—I need to handle this copper-backed bastard.

I move toward him, smooth and deliberate. I go in like I would in a clinch—hands sure, wings pinned, no room for him to spin. Mrow, let’s see if restraining a possessed chicken gives me the same edge as actual combat.

The rooster sees me coming. His head snaps toward me, tailfeathers flaring, and he sidesteps with surprising speed. I adjust my angle, reach for him, but he evades. Clean pivot, low to the ground, and he’s out of range before my hands close on feathers.

Rill, blood seeping through her tunic where the rooster pierced her, lunges forward. She’s going for him with both hands extended, trying to pin his wings the way Melissa demonstrated with the speckled hen.

The copper-backed rooster twists away from her too, wings beating hard. Rill’s hands grasp at empty air, and the rooster plants himself three feet back, chest out, guarding the space between us and Melissa’s captive.

The speckled hen’s thrashing intensifies. Melissa’s got solid grip, wings pinned tight, but the hen twists with unnatural strength, and the veteran’s hands slip just enough. The hen wrenches free, tumbling to the litter in an explosion of dust and burnt-clay stench.

The copper-backed rooster sees it. His head snaps toward the escaped hen, and then he’s airborne, launching himself straight at Melissa with focused rage. He drives his beak into her torso, right over the ribs. The impact makes a dull thud against her leather cuirass. Melissa doesn’t even flinch.

Movement from the shadows. The slate-blue bantam rushes out, tiny and fast, making a beeline for Bertram. She launches herself at him, beak aimed for exposed skin, but Bertram shifts his weight without losing his grip on the buff hen. The bantam’s strike goes wide, her beak snapping shut on empty air.

The buff hen thrashes harder, clucking with that raspy edge, losing feathers as she strains against Bertram’s hold. He pins her tighter. She can’t break free.

The tanner keeps his eyes narrowed, head angled to the side like he’s expecting another strike.

“Aldous,” he says, steady despite the bantam circling for another pass, “I would appreciate if you extracted whatever you need to extract out of this one, my friend.”

Aldous positions the vessel one handspan from the buff hen’s head. Hands steady despite the burnt-clay choke.

“Bertram, she’s going to thrash when the extraction engages. Don’t let go, don’t adjust your grip. The gradient forms along geometric lines and any movement breaks the pattern.” His eyes sweep the coop without moving his head. “Eyes away from the opening. I’m starting now.”

He shifts the vessel’s opening closer to the hen’s face. The buff hen starts shuddering immediately—not normal thrashing but something deeper, tremors running through her entire body. A prolonged screech escapes her throat, high and wrong.

The struggle lasts seconds but feels stretched. The hen convulses, Bertram holds firm, Aldous keeps the vessel positioned with mathematical precision—and then it’s done. The buff hen goes limp in Bertram’s grip, the wrongness bleeding out of her. Whatever corruption was anchored in that bird, it’s in the vessel now.

Melissa crosses the distance to the speckled hen in three strides. She gets her hands around the bird before she can scramble away—pins the wings against the body with both hands.

The hen thrashes, making garbled sounds that don’t belong in any chicken’s throat, but the Melissa’s grip holds.

The copper-backed rooster is still the biggest threat. I’m free to handle him.

I lunge forward, hands extended to grab him before he can attack anyone else. The rooster pivots. I reach for him, but my boot catches something in the litter, uneven wood shavings or straw, and my ankle rolls. I’m going down fast, hands grasping at empty air as the ground rushes up.

I hit the floor hard. Dust and burnt clay smell explode around me. The impact knocks the breath halfway out of my lungs.

The rooster, three feet away, broad chest puffed and tailfeathers flared, clucks territorial. His head swivels, sizing up opponents.

To my right, Rill lunges forward, going for the rooster with both hands extended. She’s trying to pin his wings against his body the way Melissa showed us. The rooster twists away from her. He’s out of range before her hands close on feathers. Rill doesn’t hesitate. She goes after him again.

The rooster launches himself at her. He flies straight for her chest—same heart region where her tunic’s already bloodstained. His beak drives into her flesh with unnatural accuracy, piercing through the linen again. I hear the wet impact even from the ground.

Rill staggers but doesn’t go down. Her jaw sets tight against the pain.

The kink-necked black pullet is suddenly right there, five feet from my face. Her crooked neck cants hard to the left, and she locks eyes with me.

Click, click, click. Sharp ceramic sounds from her beak, rapid-fire and wrong.

Pressure blooms behind my eyes—cold, invasive. I brace, and it slides off like rain on stone. The pullet backs away, clicks slowing.

From the back corner—the slate-blue bantam rushes out. She launches herself at Aldous, beak aimed for exposed skin. Aldous sidesteps without looking at her directly. The bantam lands in the dust.

The buff hen shakes her head in Bertram’s grip, confused, trying weakly to free herself. The extraction pulled the wrongness out, left her just a regular chicken trying to escape a human’s hold. Bertram struggles to scramble to his feet.

“Everyone still alive?” He glances around the coop. “What feathered demon are we handling next?”

He spots me on the ground, and his eyebrows go up. He rushes over, reaches down, grabs me by the front of my shirt even though that hand is still holding his pipe. The buff hen squawks indignantly under his arm.

“Floor ain’t made of catnip as far as I know, miss. Get up.”

He hauls me to my feet with more force than finesse. I find my balance, dust and wood shavings clinging to my clothes.

Aldous crosses to Melissa and the speckled hen, vessel cradled carefully, eyes already calculating angles.

He positions the containment vessel exactly one handspan from the hen’s head, where those growth-ring eyes show whatever corruption runs deepest. His hands stay steady despite the chaos still churning around us.

“Melissa, hold her firm—this is the primary vector.” His voice cuts through the burnt-clay stench without rising in volume. “The extraction will fight harder than the buff hen’s did. Don’t adjust your grip no matter how she thrashes. Eyes away. I’m extracting now.”

The speckled hen’s body goes rigid in Melissa’s grip. Then she screeches—garbled, wrong, a sound that would require vocal cords no chicken should possess. The screech scrapes against the inside of my skull like metal on glass.

Her body spasms. Not the panicked thrashing of a restrained bird—something stronger than her frame should allow. Wings strain with unnatural force. The veteran’s grip holds, tension cording through her scarred forearms.

The struggle stretches. The hen convulses, that screech rising and falling in waves that make my teeth ache. Aldous keeps the vessel positioned steady as a fixture.

Then it’s done. The wrongness bleeds out of the hen like heat dissipating into cold air. She goes limp in Melissa’s grip. Just a bird now. The burnt-clay smell doesn’t fade but the pressure it carried, that invasive spiritual rot, collapses. Melissa releases her; the hen settles onto the straw-covered floor, docile.

Melissa straightens, turns toward the copper-backed rooster who’s still loose and aggressive, chest puffed and tailfeathers flared.

I lunge for him again, movements sharp and controlled, aiming to pin his wings before he can strike. But the rooster jumps, and I’m grasping at empty air as he lands three feet away. My hands close on nothing.

The speckled hen, clean now, picks her way through the scattered bodies and debris. She avoids Rill, sidesteps Aldous’ boots, and heads straight for the coop’s entrance.

The copper-backed rooster’s head swivels, tracking movement across the coop. His eyes settle on me. That barrel chest puffs wider, hackles flaring rust-red in the dim light, and I can see the exact moment he chooses his target.

He charges. Talons churning through litter, wings half-spread for balance. I sidestep. He adjusts mid-charge, but I pivot. His beak snaps on empty air. Momentum carries him past me in a flurry of copper feathers and burnt-clay stench.

The kink-necked black pullet locks eyes with Melissa. Click, click, click. That spiritual pressure builds again. Melissa’s jaw sets, eyes narrowing. The pressure shatters. The pullet backs away.

The slate-blue bantam explodes from the shadows. Tiny legs pump through the litter as she launches herself at Bertram with surprising height. Her beak drives straight into his head—I hear the impact piercing skin.

Bertram’s hands fly to his skull, still gripping that pipe. He swings it up reflexively and cracks himself in the temple with his own weapon.

“Agh! You feathered cunt!” He releases the buff hen—she drops from under his arm, flapping indignantly to the floor—and presses both hands to his bleeding scalp. “I felt the vibration right through my gray matter!”

The buff hen shakes herself, confused and free, then waddles away.

Aldous moves. That same methodical precision he showed during the extractions, but faster now—crossing the distance to the copper-backed rooster. Not waiting for someone else to handle it.

“Hold still,” he says, reaching for the rooster with both hands angled to pin wings tight against body. “I’m not giving anyone an excuse to kill you when extraction is still possible!”

The rooster twists, wings snapping, and Aldous’ hands close on empty air. The bird plants himself three feet back, chest out, eyeing Aldous with focused aggression.

“Third time’s the charm, you feathered bastard,” I say, closing the distance fast. “Hold still so Aldous can fix you!”

I lunge at the rooster. He sidesteps—my boot catches the litter and I’m down again, dust and burnt clay exploding around me.

Rill’s shifting her attention away from the rooster. Her eyes lock onto the kink-necked black pullet instead, the one who tried to corrupt both me and Melissa with that ceramic-click gaze. She’s done chasing the copper-backed demon.

She lunges at the black pullet with both hands angled to pin its wings tight against its twisted body. The pullet’s neck cants hard to the left, beak opening for another click—but Rill’s already got her. Hands close around the bird, wings pressed flush to her sides before she can cast that corrupting gaze again.

Near the coop entrance, the large speckled hen settles into a corner. She watches the chaos with what looks like concern, head tilting like she can’t figure out why everyone’s so worked up.

The copper-backed rooster jumps, hits the wall with both talons, rebounds off the planks with surprising force, then swoops down on Aldous. Wings spread wide for the dive, beak aimed straight for his chest. The rooster pecks hard—I hear the impact against Aldous’ quilted jerkin, the dull thud of beak hitting padded fabric. The jerkin holds.

The black pullet in Rill’s grip thrashes harder, neck twitching violently, beak clicking against Rill’s hands. She’s trying to free herself with unnatural strength for something that size.

The pullet wrenches free from Rill’s hold, tumbling to the litter in an explosion of dust and that burnt-clay stench. Her crooked neck recenters with a sharp twitch—click, click—and she backs away fast, putting distance between herself and Rill’s hands.

The slate-blue bantam rushes out again from the shadows, tiny legs churning. She launches herself at Aldous, who’s still recovering from the rooster’s chest strike. The bantam’s beak drives into his exposed left arm with surgical precision. I hear the wet sound of piercing flesh.

Aldous grimaces but doesn’t cry out. Blood wells up where the bantam’s beak punctured skin.

The white-faced buff hen spots the coop door. It’s cracked open, light from the yard spilling through the gap. She clucks indignantly, ruffles her pale feathers, then waddles straight for freedom. Pushes through the opening and disappears into Aldous’ yard, leaving the coop behind.

Bertram’s got one hand pressed to his bleeding head where the bantam struck earlier. His eyes sweep the coop floor, searching. Then he spots the slate-blue bantam circling near Aldous’ feet, and his expression tightens.

He lifts his pipe-hand, the carved wood gripped tight despite the blood running down his temple.

“You accursed bunch of misbehaving poultry!”

He throws the pipe hard. It hits the slate-blue bantam square in her torso, enough force to send her tumbling through the litter. She rolls once, then scrambles upright, shaking herself with a chirp.

Aldous is approaching me, quick but controlled despite the blood sliding down his arm. He extends a hand down.

“Up—now. Rooster’s still active. I need your hands functional, not eating straw.”

I grab his hand and he hauls me to my feet. Pulled up again. Mortifying.

Melissa’s already moving, eyes locked on the kink-necked black pullet who’s been circling and clicking since she broke free from Rill’s grip. The veteran’s hands are angled low to pin the pullet’s glossy-black wings tight against her twisted body before she can cast another corrupting gaze.

She’s got her; the pullet thrashes, clicks muffled. But Melissa holds firm.

We’re bleeding for every inch, and I’m still dead weight. Rill’s chest wound seeps through her tunic. Bertram’s holding his head. Aldous’ arm drips.

The rooster’s still loose, barrel chest puffed and guarding his position like he owns this coop. And maybe he does.

The slate-blue bantam is tiny, wounded from Bertram’s thrown pipe. Better odds than the rooster. Smaller target, less dangerous, already hurting. I need to actually succeed at something.

The burnt clay smell coating my nostrils, the straw compressed under my boots, the chaos of wings and bodies and blood. This is what I’m good at. Violence with purpose. The bantam. Pin her tiny wings.

Mrow, fourth time’s the charm.

I move toward the slate-blue bantam, hands angled to grab her before she can dart back into the shadows or attack someone else.

The bantam sees me coming. She jumps—tiny legs pump hard—and twists mid-air. My hands close on empty air where she was a split-second ago. She lands three feet away, shakes her wounded body, and circles toward the shadows.

Movement beside me—Rill lunges at the bantam with both hands extended, going for the same target I just whiffed on. Her chest wound’s still bleeding but her eyes are locked on that tiny slate-blue body with focused determination.

The bantam jumps again. Rill’s hands grasp at feathers. She’s got contact, fingers closing around one wing, but the bantam thrashes hard and Rill’s footing shifts wrong in the litter. She’s going down, hands losing grip as her knees hit the straw-covered floor. The bantam wrenches free and darts away in a blur of slate-blue feathers.

Near the coop entrance, the large speckled hen takes a final look at the chaos. Then she turns and waddles straight through the cracked door, following the white-faced buff hen out into the yard. Two regular chickens escaping the violence.

I’m tracking the bantam’s movement as she circles back toward the shadows, when something massive and copper-backed fills my peripheral vision.

The rooster lunges at me. Lower. He drives his beak straight into my right ass cheek.

Pain explodes sharp and piercing. I feel the beak punch through fabric, through skin, driving deep enough to make everything clench involuntarily.

“Fuck!”

The rooster pulls back, beak dripping, and plants himself three feet away. Chest puffed.

My ass is on fire.

THE END


Check out this video I generated about this short. I hadn’t laughed that hard in a good while.

Salt Lines (Short Story)

We reach 12 Kiln Lane after mid-morning. The house sits alone at the path’s end—low, old, thatch sagging. Stone lifts pale plaster, patched and hairline-cracked. No ornament. Just a heavy door set deep, dark-paned windows, terracotta jars crowding the step. The place is sealed—simple, sturdy, watchful.

A man kneels before it, hunched over a pottery jar, drawing careful marks on the clay. Must be Aldous. Slim, pale under clay dust. Short dirty-blonde hair, sleep-hollowed hazel eyes. Stained work clothes, reinforced knees, scarred hands rougher than the jar. The smell of kiln smoke and wet clay drifts over even from here.

Bertram steps forward, pipe in hand.

“Aldous, my good man! I’m glad to say that I can finally lift your spirits about the chicken problem.” He gestures at me. “You see, this exotic out-of-towner, Vespera’s the name, decided to take on your request to deal with your misbehaving poultry. I also got our local warrior Threadscar to help. Oh, and there’s this stray teenager we picked up along the way. So fret not, Aldous, about your poultry situation! This posse of killers will make short work of it all. Then we could all head to town and drink ourselves stupid in celebration.”

The moment Bertram says posse of killers and make short work, something tightens in Aldous’ expression. Worry.

He stands, brushes clay dust off his trousers with deliberate care.

“Bertram, I appreciate you bringing help. Truly. But this isn’t a culling. It’s an extraction.” He gestures toward the back of the property. “The infected birds are quarantined in the coop. Locked. It stays that way until we have a plan that doesn’t start with knives. Come to the yard—I’ll show you the setup and explain what needs to happen.”

He turns and walks toward the yard without waiting for acknowledgment. Melissa follows immediately. She moves like she trusts her own eyes. Bertram ambles after them, curious but unhurried.

I’m still standing at the front of the house like I missed the cue.

“Right behind you, Aldous,” I call, following with easy, prowling steps. “Let’s see what’s got you so spooked about your poultry, meow. I’m very interested in hearing about this ‘extraction’ you have in mind.”

The yard opens up behind the house—a wide stretch of grass marked with geometric patterns in thick salt lines. Twelve chickens peck and cluck like nothing’s wrong. On the far edge sits the coop: simple wooden frame, wire mesh opening into darkness that smells sharp and acrid. Burnt clay.

I catch movement—Rill, hurrying to catch up. She doesn’t want to be left behind.

Bertram wanders in, pipe still in hand, surveying the setup with mild curiosity. Aldous doesn’t acknowledge him. He walks straight toward me instead—close, closer than conversational distance—and drops his voice low.

“You took the contract, so you get the explanation first.” He gestures toward the wire mesh coop. “Those five birds in there are infected with something that came from buried ceramic. Not folklore. Not temperament. An actual entity that’s anchored biologically now. I have a containment vessel that can trap it if we extract properly, but the process will provoke violent resistance from the host. I need someone who can restrain a flailing chicken without panicking, without improvising cruelty, and without deciding that killing is ‘simpler.'” His hand moves to the leather thong around his neck. “The key to that coop stays around my neck until I’m standing there with the vessel, the geometry is stable, and everyone understands this is a procedure with rules. Can you work under those terms?”

He isn’t testing my strength. He’s testing my restraint.

My eyes—one ice-blue, one amber, both steady—meet his.

“I can work under those terms. Restraint. No shortcuts. You keep the key.” I flick an ear; the silver hoops catch light. “I’ve held plenty of things that didn’t want to be held, Aldous. Show me the geometry. Explain the procedure. I’ll follow your lead on this—it’s your vessel, your birds, your entity. I’m here to make sure it goes into the container instead of into someone’s throat.”

Melissa edges in to listen; Rill hovers behind her, intent.

Bertram wanders over to where Aldous and I stand. A few free-roaming chickens trail after him, pecking casually at his boots.

“Aldous.” His eyes narrow as he rubs his forehead slowly. He tilts his pipe to drop ash onto the grass, then slides it behind his apron. His gaze moves to the precise geometric patterns drawn in salt. “All these years I’ve known you, I’ve supported you on your artistic projects, but… this is a bit too much, don’t you think?”

The chickens keep pecking. One investigates Bertram’s heel with stubborn curiosity.

“That request at the Registry said…” Bertram continues. “How did you word it again? That the chickens were possessed by the spirit of your mother-in-law? I’ve never even known you to be married, but besides, you also said you wanted the chickens gone.” He gestures toward the coop. “What the hell is this now about birds getting infected with something that came from buried ceramic? What’s this ‘entity’ you speak of that lives in pottery? Are you sure you haven’t gone off the deep end, my friend?”

Aldous turns from me to face Bertram directly. His voice stays measured.

“The posting said ‘mother-in-law’ because I needed help fast without advertising a ward breach at the Registry where anyone could overhear. You know how gossip travels in Mudbrook.” He gestures toward the coop. “As for ‘gone’—smell that? Burnt clay. From chickens. That’s not normal, Bertram. You work with organic materials daily; you know what decay smells like versus what corruption smells like. This is the latter. I didn’t invent the geometric patterns for decoration—they’re containment boundaries that have kept twelve birds safe out here while five infected ones stay locked inside.” His eyes meet Bertram’s. “You’ve known me long enough to know I don’t do things without reason. I’m asking for procedural help, not validation. Vespera’s agreed to the terms. If you’re here to assist, I’ll explain the full extraction process. If you’re here to diagnose my mental state, you can wait by the fence.”

Bertram shifts his weight.

“You sound quite convinced, I admit, but… I mean, you misrepresented your request to Copperplate at the Registry. If he catches wind of this, he’ll spend a whole afternoon with his quill to the books.”

I let them have it. Bertram’s doubt. Aldous’ control. If the potter’s delusional, he’s functionally delusional.

Bertram nods, but his eyes stay worried.

“Sure, I know you to be a master craftsman at your particular trade. I value all the pots you sold me. They’re sturdy, and those drawings you make on them are quite nice.” He pauses. “It’s just… you’ve never been the same since the kiln explosion. Even you should be able to admit that.”

Bertram glances toward Melissa and Rill. “Anyway, you think there’s some ‘entity’ thing inside your chickens, then sure, let’s deal with it. So… you want the muscle here to help you contain your possessed chickens in that vessel? I mean, I guess you could squeeze a chicken into it if you pressed hard enough, but it will hardly take five. And they wouldn’t survive either.”

Aldous pulls the containment vessel from his satchel—glazed ceramic, intricate patterns catching the morning light. He holds it out toward the tanner.

“The vessel isn’t for the chickens, Bertram. It’s for what’s inside them.” His voice stays calm, precise. “Look at the glaze composition—cobalt oxide with salt-fired stoneware, fired at cone ten for structural integrity. The geometry etched into the surface creates a spiritual anchor. When we perform the extraction properly, the entity transfers from the biological host into the ceramic matrix.”

Aldous extends the vessel closer. “The chickens survive. The threat gets contained. That’s the difference between my work and what you’re imagining. This is craft, not butchery. Feel the weight of it if you don’t believe me.”

Bertram takes it. His hands turn it over slowly, examining the glaze patterns, the etched geometry, testing the weight.

“I’ve never known a better potter than you, Aldous. I recognize great craftsmanship. But when I spend hours making saddles, belts, boots… I don’t expect them to catch ‘entities.’ Whatever an ‘entity’ may mean in this occasion.”

He passes the vessel to me. Cool ceramic settles into my feline hands—heavier than expected, dense with that structural integrity Aldous mentioned. Bertram holds Aldous’ gaze through the potter’s glasses.

“You posted the request, and your chickens are in trouble. You’re in charge here. If you believe we should sing a chant or something while holding your chickens, I’m nobody to argue.”

Aldous doesn’t rise to it. He turns his full attention to me instead, steps closer so he’s addressing me directly rather than the whole group.

“Look at the etching along the rim—that’s the anchor geometry. When we extract, the entity will resist leaving the biological host. The patterns create a spiritual gradient, a pressure differential that pulls it toward the ceramic matrix instead of dispersing or jumping to another living thing.”

He points to specific glaze marks without touching the vessel.

“The extraction happens in stages. First, we isolate the primary vector—the large speckled hen. I’ll position the vessel near her head while you restrain her wings and body. The geometry does the heavy work, but she’ll thrash violently when it starts. Your job is to keep her contained without breaking bones or letting her escape the salt boundary I’ll draw around us. Once the entity transfers into the vessel, I seal it immediately. The other four birds should stabilize once the primary anchor is severed.”

His hazel eyes meet mine—ice-blue and amber both steady.

“Questions before we go to the coop?” the potter adds.

I turn the vessel in my hands, studying the etched geometry along the rim. I trace the glaze beside the etching, careful not to cross it.

“Where exactly do my hands go on her so I’m not blocking the anchor when she thrashes?” I meet Aldous’ eyes. “The other four—are they linked to her, or just infected? And timing—do you start the extraction the moment I have her secured, or should I watch for a signal?”

Behind me, Melissa stands positioned where she can hear clearly. Observing the procedural briefing. Calculating failure points and emergency responses without interrupting. The teenage girl is closer to Melissa than to us, absorbing every word with quiet intensity.

Aldous doesn’t pause. He pulls the leather thong over his head—key catching morning light—and moves toward the coop door.

“Proximity matters. The vessel needs to be within a handspan of her head for the gradient to engage properly. Your hands go on her wings first, folded tight against her body, then secure her legs so she can’t kick or claw when the thrashing starts. I position the vessel near her beak, angled so the anchor geometry faces her directly.”

He fits the key into the padlock.

“The networked effect—it’s more like removing the source infection. The speckled hen is the primary anchor. The other four birds are secondary hosts, tethered to her. Once we sever the primary connection, the entity loses its strongest foothold and the symptoms should resolve in the others within hours.”

Click. The lock opens.

Behind me, Bertram’s voice drops low, directed at Melissa.

“I’m guessing you’ve dealt with weirdness before. Gods know what you’ve had to kill through your mercenary work.” Brief pause. “But doesn’t this feel… This feels off to you too, right?”

Aldous lifts the padlock free. The burnt-clay smell punches out.

“Timing: I start the extraction the moment you have her secured and I’ve drawn the salt boundary around us.” He looks at me. “No signal to watch for—you’ll know when it starts because she’ll fight like she’s being burned alive. Keep her contained. Don’t let go. Don’t break the salt line. The geometry does the rest.”

“Feels off, yeah.” Melissa’s response comes flat. “But Aldous just opened the door. I’m going in.”

She moves past and steps through the coop entrance into darkness.

THE END

The Girl From the North Road (Short Story)

Three people. A middle-aged man, probably a local, looks like a tanner from the stains on his hands. Some kind of feline woman, exotic, dangerous-looking in a way that makes my spine straighten. And Melissa. “Threadscar” Melissa. Right here.

The tanner watches me approach. I can feel his eyes tracking me, probably taking in the sweat, the stick, the way my grip tightens when I get within speaking distance of Melissa.

“Who’s this kid?” he says. “I don’t recall seeing her in town. A girl friend of yours, Threadscar?”

The words hang there. Girl friend. Like I’m here for tea and gossip.

Melissa’s voice comes flat.

“She’s the girl from the north road. Watches me train. Not a friend. She follows.”

The words hit clean. Not harsh, just… factual. She isn’t telling me to leave, but she isn’t claiming me either. She follows. Like I’m a stray that keeps showing up at her door.

Movement to my left. The feline approaches with casual grace, tail swishing behind her. Her eyes are different colors, and they flick between me and Melissa like she’s cataloging something.

“Well well, meow. A girl who follows a warrior. What’s your name, kitten? And what’s with the stick?”

Great. Now I’m being patronized by someone who looks like she walked out of a story I couldn’t afford to hear the end of. But the question’s direct enough, so I answer it the same way.

“Rill. My name’s Rill. The stick’s a broom handle—wrapped so I don’t splinter my hands to hell. It’s what I’ve got, so it’s what I use.”

The tanner taps ash off his pipe, amusement pulling at the corners of his mouth.

“Do you make a habit of sweeping the outskirts of town with a headless broom handle?” His gaze shifts to Melissa. “You have a curious admirer, Threadscar.”

Threadscar. The name clicks into place.

She doesn’t step in. Doesn’t tell them I’m wasting time. Just stands there, expression flat, like she’s watching something unfold that she hasn’t decided matters yet.

The feline woman moves closer. Her hand reaches out before I can decide whether to pull back, and she pats me on the head—light, almost playful. A gesture you’d give a stray that showed up on your doorstep.

“You’ve got guts, I’ll give you that,” she says. “Most kids your age would’ve stayed home with a broom that still had bristles.” Her mismatched eyes study me. “Mrow, so what are you hoping to learn from our friend here? How to turn household objects into weapons, or something more… mmh… specific?”

I want to shove her hand off. Want to snarl. But that would prove I’m exactly what she thinks I am—a kid who can’t take a light touch without losing my shit. So I don’t.

She asked what I’m hoping to learn. That’s real. That’s a question with weight.

“Something specific. I’ve been copying from a distance for six months—watching Melissa train, trying to figure out what the hell I’m doing wrong. But I don’t know the basics. Stance, guard, footwork, the stuff you need before anything else makes sense. I want someone to teach me that. Not wave me off or tell me I’m too young or that I should go home and help my family. I want real instruction.” I lift the wrapped broom handle slightly. “The kind that turns this into something that works.”

The tanner exhales slowly, shaking his head.

“Can’t help but admire your determination, kid, but that stick looks like it’d break the moment you whacked a wolf’s head.” He glances at Threadscar, who’s been silent, just watching. “Local guard’ll give you training. Threadscar’s not the sociable type.”

Like I’m here begging for scraps.

The feline moves before I can respond. She slings an arm casually around Melissa’s shoulders, pulling her close with the kind of ease that says they know each other—or at least that the feline woman doesn’t give a damn if they don’t. Her tail curls lazily behind her.

“Months of watching from a distance with a headless broom, mrow?” Her mismatched eyes lock onto me, studying. “That’s not importuning, Bertram—that’s commitment. Most people give up after a week when nobody hands them what they want. You’ve been grinding alone for half a year.” She tilts her head, and I feel like she’s reading lines I didn’t know I’d written. “So here’s my question, kitten—what made you start? What happened six months ago that made you pick up that stick and decide you needed to learn how to hurt things?”

I meet the feline woman’s eyes.

“Six months ago, I saw her.” I nod toward Melissa without looking away from the exotic animal-person. “I was on a supply run to Mudbrook—dawn, cold, nobody around—and I saw her training by herself. No audience. No performance. No wasted motion. And she had scars—real ones, the kind that say ‘I have done things and survived them.’ I looked at her and I thought: that’s what freedom looks like. Not hoping someone notices you. Not waiting for permission. Just capability so undeniable that the world has to make room.”

I pause. Breathe. Don’t flinch.

“I went home that day and realized I didn’t have that. I was just… tasks. Endless tasks. Fifth priority for food, first priority for ‘Rill, do this.’ I could see my whole future: marry local, help run the waystation, disappear into the wallpaper. So I wrapped a broom handle in cloth because I didn’t have anything else, and I started showing up where she trains. Copying. Guessing. Probably doing it all wrong. But at least I was doing something. At least I wasn’t standing still.”

Bertram puffs on his pipe, something like appreciation in the slow exhale.

“Your folks run the waystation from the north road?” His voice comes careful. “You may be ditching a stable life for the opportunity to die bloody and broken in a ditch somewhere. That’s assuming nobody stole your dignity first. This world is more cruel than you’d think at your age… and it takes from you whatever it pleases, whenever it pleases.”

Melissa’s been still this whole time—watching, flat expression, giving nothing. But now she moves—shrugs off the feline woman’s arm and pulls me close against her side. Solid and real. My pulse kicks up.

Something flickers across that exotic woman’s face, too fast to catch. Then she steps back, tail swishing as she creates space.

“Mmh. I think you two have something to discuss without me hanging off your shoulder, meow.” Her mismatched eyes flick between us. “I’ll be right here. Watching. Learning. You know. Bard things.”

I step out from under Melissa’s arm and drop to my knees.

Hard ground. The broom handle rests across my thighs. Back straight, gaze level.

Bertram’s pipe lowers slowly.

“This kid seems to be made of stern stuff,” he says. His gaze shifts to Threadscar. “Too bad about her slim frame and the broom handle—but if you’d consider a disciple at any point, you could do much worse than this dedicated admirer.” He pauses. “That said, we all think we can take anything with the right attitude… until you get a mace to the face.”

Melissa’s expression stays flat. The silence stretches—that feline woman watching, the millrace rushing steady.

I stand. Not backing off—just refusing to stay collapsed at her feet like I’ve already given up on being her equal someday. I knelt to show respect. I stand to show I mean to become something worth teaching.

That silence—it’s doing something. Either making a decision or unmaking one.

Bertram’s eyebrows pull together. His gaze shifts from the feline woman to Melissa, to me, then back.

“Has… anything been resolved? I feel like something important has passed over my head.”

The feline woman’s eyes flick to him, then settle back on Melissa and me. Her tail curls lazily.

“Mmh, Bertram…” A slight smirk touches her mouth. “I think something important just happened. But whether it’s been resolved?” She glances at Melissa. “Not my story to tell.”

Standing here empty-handed feels incomplete. I extend the wrapped broom handle toward Melissa, holding it out with both hands.

“This is what I’ve had,” I say. “Six months of guessing with this thing. If you’re willing to teach me—actually teach me—then I want to start with real fundamentals. Not copying advanced forms I don’t understand. Not pretending I know what I’m doing. Just… the basics. Stance. Guard. Footwork. The stuff that makes everything else possible.”

I keep the broom handle extended. Voice steady. No begging.

“Take it. Look at it. See what I’ve been trying to learn from. And if you think I’m worth teaching, then show me how to do it right.”

Bertram lights his pipe, the flame briefly illuminating his face.

“This kid’s got heart,” he says around the stem, “but a poor sense of timing.” He exhales smoke. “We weren’t in the vicinity just for a stroll. Our fluffy cat-folk bard here—” He nods toward the feline woman. “—had taken a request to deal with some demonic poultry, and Threadscar, as our local veteran, had decided to act as backup. I’m just along for the ride.”

Demonic poultry.

Melissa takes the wrapped broom handle from my hands. Her grip shifts it through small, controlled motions—testing weight distribution, checking the balance point, examining how the cloth sits, whether the wrapping will hold or slip under pressure. Like she’s reading something I didn’t know I’d written.

“Six months with this.” Melissa’s voice comes flat. “The wrapping’s competent. You understood the problem—splinters, grip failure—and solved it functionally. Weight’s forward-heavy. That’s the handle design, not your mistake. Balance point’s here.”

She taps a spot roughly two-thirds down the shaft.

“You’ve been training with a weapon that fights you on every swing. That builds bad habits fast, but it also means you’re strong enough to compensate without knowing you’re doing it.”

She flexes the handle slightly, testing for structural integrity.

“It’ll snap if you block anything metal with commitment. You know that already or you wouldn’t be here asking for real instruction.”

First time anyone’s acknowledged it as real. My throat tightens. I don’t let it show.

Melissa turns the wrapped handle over one more time, flexes it slightly, then stops. Her gaze shifts from the broom handle to me, flat and assessing. Then she extends her longsword toward me, hilt-first, blade angled safely to the side.

“Here.” Her voice stays flat. “Hold this. Feel the difference. Weight, balance, how it sits in your hand. That’s what you’ve been trying to learn with a stick that fights you.”

I stare at the hilt. Battle-scarred leather wrapping, crossguard showing wear at the edges, the kind of weapon that’s seen actual use. She’s handing it to me.

“If you’re serious about real instruction,” Melissa continues, “you need to understand what you’re aiming for.” Her eyes lock onto mine. “Don’t swing it. Don’t test it. Just hold it and tell me what you notice.”

I take the longsword. Both hands wrap around the hilt. The weight settles—balanced. Centered. My hands are shaking.

I look up to meet Melissa’s flat gaze.

“It doesn’t fight me. The balance is clean. Centered. The broom handle pulls forward every swing—I have to compensate just to keep it under control. This?” I flex my grip slightly. “This feels like it’s waiting for instruction instead of dragging me around. The weight’s real, but distributed so I can use it instead of wrestle it.”

Bertram’s voice comes out more serious than usual.

“The tool of a trade few are prepared for, kid.” He taps his pipe, gaze steady on the longsword. “You’re holding in your hand metal that’s drunk the blood of many.”

Melissa extends her hand. I give the longsword back hilt-first, controlled, the way she handed it to me. She takes it with the same efficiency, then reaches for the wrapped broom handle still resting against her side.

“You’ve felt the difference now.” She extends the broom handle toward me, matter-of-fact. “This is yours.”

I take it. My work. Six months wrapped in cloth.

“You want real instruction. Stance, guard, footwork. Fine. But I don’t teach in a vacuum.” Her gaze shifts briefly to Bertram, then back to me. “We’ve got a job. Possessed chickens, north road. Vespera’s contract. I’m backup.”

A pause. She continues.

“Come along. Watch. See how movement works when stakes are real. You stay back. Don’t interfere. You observe—but this time you see the whole picture, not just me alone in a field. After the job, if you still want formal training, we’ll start with basics. That’s the offer. Decide if you’re coming.”

The feline woman—Vespera—adjusts the case slung across her back, tail swishing decisively. She starts walking without waiting for an answer.

“Well then. Melissa made her offer, Rill’s got her decision to make, and we’ve got possessed poultry waiting for us at 12 Kiln Lane. Meow, I don’t know about the rest of you, but I’d rather not keep a vengeful mother-in-law’s malevolent chicken waiting too long.” She throws a look back over her shoulder, mismatched eyes sharp. “Coming, or are we going to stand around the millrace discussing pedagogical philosophy until the damn birds organize a coup?”

“I’m coming.”

THE END

Fine Print & Featherbones (Short Story)

I step out of the Municipal Aid Registry—converted barn, old hay, bureaucratic optimism—into bright morning sun. Pleasant warmth for Mudbrook-on-the-Bend. My instrument case rides familiar weight against my back, dual blades settled at my hips.

Two people are approaching down the street. I recognize Bertram from earlier, and beside him—

Mrow. Interesting.

The woman beside him looks carved from scar tissue and sword practice. Longsword at her back, carried with enough casual competence to be part of her body. Threadscar, if Bertram’s earlier mention was accurate.

“Hey, what did I tell you,” Bertram says, addressing his companion but pitching it loud enough for me to hear. “A cat folk in the flesh. Isn’t she the darnest thing. Look at those whiskers.” He gestures in my direction like I’m a particularly fascinating market oddity. “Anyway, she’s got herself a mess with Aldous’ devilish chickens.”

My tail swishes once. Performing has its uses.

Threadscar’s gaze tracks over me—methodical, not curious. Weapons, instrument case, stance. Reading me like a contract with fine print. No wasted movement, no hurry. Just measuring.

When she finally speaks, her voice is controlled.

“You’re the one who took the chicken job.”

They have closed the distance now. Combat scars catch the light on her skin, small tells in how she holds herself. Someone who’s survived things that kill most people.

I smooth my whiskers briefly. Should I feel annoyed? I didn’t ask for help. But mostly I’m interested. That kind of survival leaves stories, and I collect those. Tactically speaking, if the “possessed poultry” turns out to be something wearing feathers ironically, having someone competent with a blade isn’t the worst idea.

And if things do get interesting, if there’s actual danger instead of just aggressive birds—

I shut down that thread before it can finish. Professional courtesy first.

“Mrow, that’s me. Vespera Nightwhisper, at your service.” I gesture vaguely toward the Registry behind me. “Seventeen birds, one allegedly possessed by a vengeful mother-in-law. Could be demonic poultry, could be grief and roosters. Either way, should be…” My heterochromatic eyes—amber and ice-blue—fix on her with genuine curiosity. “Educational.”

I tilt my head slightly, ears swiveling forward. “Bertram mentioned you. ‘Threadscar,’ right? He thought I might need backup.” Whiskers twitch. “What do you think? Do I look like I need saving from poultry, or are you just bored enough to see where this goes?”

Bertram produces a pipe from somewhere under his apron, tamping tobacco with practiced fingers. He lights it with a match, the narrow end settling at the corner of his mouth as smoke curls up. His eyes move between us like he’s watching theater.

“A way with words on this one, huh? That’s a bard for you, I guess.”

My attention is on Threadscar, because she’s the one who matters here.

She meets my mismatched eyes without blinking. No flinch, no fascination. Her voice comes out flat, professional.

“You don’t look like you need saving. You look like you haven’t worked this region before and don’t know what ‘possessed’ means out here yet. Could be theater. Could be something that bites back harder than you’re expecting.”

Her gaze flicks to my weapons—brief, cataloging—then back to my face. Filing information. Like she’s building a dossier in real-time.

“I’m not bored,” Threadscar adds. “I’m between contracts and Bertram thought the job might be more than one person should handle alone. If you want backup, I’ll assess the situation and act accordingly. If you don’t, I’ll find other work. Your call.”

Your call. No posturing, no pretense of saving the exotic newcomer. Just capability offered without strings. I respect that. More than respect it—I like it. This is someone who thinks in terms of practical outcomes, not spectacle. Someone who’s survived by being useful, not by being loud.

I pull the posted notice from my belt pouch and extend it toward her.

“Here. Read it yourself and decide if it’s worth your time.” My heterochromatic eyes fix on her, genuine curiosity sharpening the usual performance. “Bertram’s not wrong. I don’t know this region yet, and ‘possessed’ is vague enough to mean anything from grief-hallucinations to something that shouldn’t have a beak. If you’re between contracts and this sounds interesting, I’ll take the backup. If it sounds like a waste of your time, no hard feelings.” My whiskers twitch. “But either way, mrow, I’d rather know what I’m walking into before I knock on Aldous’ door.”

She takes it. Reads it like she’s checking for loopholes. Her eyes track across the text with the kind of precision that says she’s survived by catching the details other people miss. No commentary, no reaction visible on her face. Just information intake.

Bertram puffs his pipe, watching us. Taking his time. Then he gestures with the pipe stem, adding to his earlier introduction.

“To contribute to this meeting of warriors,” he says, voice carrying that folksy charm he wears like armor, “let me add some information that may or may not improve the quality of your trade: I know Aldous to be an honest tradesman. He’s been talking uneasily about those chickens for a good while now. Weeks, really.”

Bertram pauses, letting smoke curl. “He mentions that one of them looks… like he knows what he’s looking at. And he’s corrupted some of his other chickens too. Corrupted—that’s the word Aldous used.”

Mrow. That word lands differently than “possessed.” Corrupted implies spread. Deliberate influence. Not just one problem bird, but infection. Behavior changing, patterns shifting. That’s either the most elaborate case of anthropomorphization I’ve ever encountered, or there’s something at Kiln Lane that’s wearing chickens like masks and teaching the others to do the same.

My tail swishes once. Not performance—genuine unease, threaded with that dangerous curiosity that gets people like me into trouble.

Bertram continues.

“Could be, though, that Aldous really hated his mother-in-law and she happened to have some hen-like qualities. Never had a mother-in-law myself. Anna was orphaned young.”

Threadscar is still reading, unmoved by Bertram’s commentary. Filing it somewhere, probably, but not letting it interrupt her process. She doesn’t get pulled off-task by color or charm. Data first, texture later.

Bertram shifts his attention to me, lowering his pipe for a moment.

“I’m curious, miss cat. Do you waltz into battle with that instrument case at your back? That’s the tool of your trade, isn’t it?” His eyes crinkle with genuine interest. “Aren’t you worried that some counterattack may destroy your means to get money off taverns? I have a hard time picturing you putting down the case and shoving it back before you wield those sharp weapons of yours.”

Threadscar finishes reading, then hands the notice back to me. Her eyes find mine, holding my mismatched gaze without hesitation.

“I’ll go with you. If it’s just chickens, we’ll handle it fast and split the pay. If it’s something else, you’ll want someone who’s cleared pastoral weird before. We leave now, assess the site, execute the contract, done.”

The instrument case rides heavy on my back. Fair question. Most people don’t think past the weapons—they see the blades and assume that’s the whole story. But the lute-viol isn’t just a tool. It’s the only thing I actually care about without complication, without performance, without—

No. I’m not explaining that vulnerability to a tanner I met twenty minutes ago, no matter how earnest his pipe-smoke charm is.

Whiskers twitch. I offer him a slight smile.

“You’re not wrong to worry, Bertram. But I’ve been carrying her into fights for years now, and she’s survived everything I have.” I tap the leather with one clawed finger—the reinforcement shows in the thickness, the way the case holds its shape even when I move. Custom work, expensive, worth it. “The case is reinforced. Not just decorative. And honestly? Leaving her behind would be worse. I don’t perform well when I’m wondering if someone’s rifling through my things.” My tail swishes once. “This way, she stays with me. Always.”

I turn my mismatched eyes to Threadscar. She made her decision clean and professional. Just read the posting, assessed, committed. I want to see how she works when things get complicated.

“Right. You’re in. Good.” I nod toward the path that leads toward the old millrace. “We leave now, assess the site at 12 Kiln Lane, and see what ‘demonic poultry’ actually looks like before we decide how to handle it.” I glance back at Bertram. “Thanks for the backup—and the context about Aldous. ‘Corrupted chickens’ is delightfully vague. Let’s go see what that means, mrow.”

Bertram taps ashes off his pipe, eyebrows lifting.

“‘Bertram, thanks for the backup,’ as in stay behind while we head off to battle?” He says it lightly, but there’s genuine curiosity underneath. “I’m asking in case you wouldn’t mind an old tanner witnessing something intriguing in this lovely morning. If things get nasty, maybe I could knock some poultry unconscious with a well-aimed throw of my pipe.”

Threadscar’s expression doesn’t shift, but she takes a breath before she speaks. Running the calculation: civilian, noncombatant, knows Aldous personally, decent accuracy with small objects maybe. Liability in real combat. Potential asset for client context.

When she answers, her voice is controlled but final.

“You can come if you stay behind us, don’t touch anything that moves, and leave the moment I tell you to. No argument, no delay.” She looks at him flatly, then glances at the pipe in his hand. “If something goes wrong, you’re not my priority—keeping the threat contained is.”

She shifts her gaze back to me. Mission focus. “We move now. North road, Kiln Lane.”

My tail swishes once without permission. Right. Follow her lead. She knows the region. I don’t. Let her set the pace, watch how she navigates, learn the terrain through her rhythm.

But something else threads through my thoughts, something dangerous I need to strangle before it takes root. If this job turns into actual danger—if there’s something at 12 Kiln Lane with teeth where beaks shouldn’t have them—I’ll get to see how Threadscar works under pressure. Whether she freezes or gets clearer when the violence starts. Everyone tells a story when the stakes climb. I want hers.

I adjust the strap of my instrument case across my back, settling the familiar weight, then glance at Bertram. He’s still watching us, pipe smoke curling upward, expecting… something. Dismissal? Another round of banter?

My whiskers twitch. Quick smile.

“Thanks for the backup and the context. We’ll handle it.”

I turn toward Threadscar, fall into step beside her. My tail swishes with anticipation I’m not entirely proud of. “Let’s see what’s waiting for us, mrow.”

Behind us, Bertram’s voice carries confusion.

“I’m… receiving conflicting information.” A pause. The sound of him adjusting his grip on the pipe. “But that’s okay, I’ll follow from a safe distance. Maybe I could get Aldous to blabber something important about these demonic chickens of his.”

THE END


Some of the “short stories” of this fantasy cycle will read more like simple scenes. I’m okay with that. I’m gearing toward making them self-contained. You could check out any in whatever order you prefer, then seek possible other shorts leading to them, or from them. That fits how I’ve felt when rereading my Re:Zero fanfiction from years ago.