Perfect in the Ashes (Short Story)

Aldous’ kitchen sits in warm, dim light. Rough plaster walls, heavy timber beams, stone floor with salt worked into the cracks. Plain table against the left wall, two clay jugs on top. Tall cabinet on the far wall—open shelf with glass bottles.

We file in. Still wearing the chicken fight.

Bertram’s temple is stained with dried blood—chicken peck and self-inflicted pipe strike both. Aldous has tongues of dried blood down his arm. Vespera walks like her ass is on fire. Rill’s work tunic shows a bloom of blood at the chest.

Bertram plods to a stool, one hand over his temple like that’ll help. Sits down heavy.

“I don’t know about you folks, but I’ve had enough of chickens for a lifetime. I don’t even want to eat one for revenge.”

Vespera settles onto another stool with a careful wince, trying to keep weight off the wounded cheek.

“Alright, everyone survived the Great Chicken Apocalypse, but we’re all leaking in various places. Bertram, your temple looks like you lost a fight with your own pipe—which, to be fair, you did. Aldous, that arm needs cleaning. And Rill…” Her ears flick toward the girl. “…that’s a lot of blood soaking through. We should probably handle these wounds before they decide to get interesting in the bad way, meow.”

Can’t treat what’s got chicken shit in it.

“Need to clean these wounds.” I look at Aldous. “You keep vinegar in that cabinet?”

I cross to the cabinet, pull down a stoppered bottle from the shelf.

“Right,” Rill says. “Let’s get this done.”

She strips her work tunic off smooth, no hesitation. The chest wounds are visible now—punctures where the beaks found the soft spots, red and raw.

Aldous reaches for one of the clay jugs on the table, lifts it.

“There’s cider here if anyone wants it. Not much, but it’s clean.”

Bertram reaches for the other jug—the mead. Brings it to his nose. Sniff test. His eyes narrow when he lowers it. Pain flash.

“I’m glad you don’t mind if we help ourselves to your alcohol, friend.” He looks down at the salt worked into the floor cracks, even under the table. “And I must say, I owe you my apologies. I thought you were just eccentric. No harm in it. Gods know men like us who live alone for a long time get that way. But what made those chickens move… wasn’t whatever passes for mind in poultry.”

Vespera winces getting off her stool, approaches the wash basin.

“Melissa’s got the vinegar, but we need to rinse first—blood and gods-know-what needs to come off before disinfectant touches it.” She looks at Rill. “Come here. That chest wound took the worst of it, and you’re not doing anyone favors by pretending it’s fine. Let me clean it before Melissa works her vinegar magic.”

Rill crosses to the basin. Vespera works the cloth, methodical, gets the blood and chicken-shit off. The wounds look cleaner. Raw, but clean.

I move to Bertram with the vinegar jar. Head wounds bleed dramatic but they’re usually shallow. He’s coherent—all good signs.

“This is going to sting. Don’t jerk your head back.”

I tip the jar, let the vinegar soak into the wound. His fist goes white against the table edge. He bites his lip hard enough I can see the pressure, breathing through his nose to keep the expletives down.

I work it clean, watch for deeper damage signs. Pupils look normal. No confusion beyond the pain response. Shallow cut, like I thought.

Rill’s trying to treat her own chest wound now that Vespera rinsed it. Hands steady—adrenaline or stubbornness, hard to tell with her. She may have watched enough patchwork to know the theory. Clean, close, cover. Practice is different than theory. Her hands fumble the angle. Can’t see what she’s doing properly, can’t apply even pressure. The wound edges don’t meet right.

Aldous strips off his quilted jerkin. The bantam got his arm during extraction—shallow, but from a possessed bird. He’s standing there like he forgot he had his own wound until everyone else started getting treated.

Bertram takes a long pull from the mead jug, lowers it slow.

“Maybe I shouldn’t want to know, Aldous, but…” He looks at the potter. “You said whatever got into your chickens came from buried pottery. An ‘entity,’ you called it. What damnable thing did we just fight that found itself in our town?”

Vespera leans forward, ears swiveling toward Aldous.

“You’ve been hosting while bleeding, Aldous. Very hospitable, but let me take a look at that arm while you explain.” She gestures toward his wounded limb. “Sleeve needs to come up.”

Aldous is already moving to the basin. Rolls up the blood-stained sleeve on his left arm.

I move to Rill with the vinegar jar.

“Your turn. This’ll hurt worse than the rinse.”

She doesn’t blink. Just waits.

I tip the jar. Vinegar hits the punctures.

Her jaw locks hard. Fists clench. Breathing goes shallow and controlled, knuckles white against the burn. But she doesn’t jerk back, doesn’t make a sound. Just holds there while the vinegar works through raw tissue.

First serious wound she’s taken. From something that wanted to kill her. She’s not moving. Good.

Aldous starts rinsing his wound at the basin, water over the shallow bite.

“The entity came from something I buried. Eight years ago—piece of pottery from a failed firing. I thought burial would contain it. I was wrong.” His voice stays steady despite the sting. “The shard must have strengthened over time, reached out to the nearest living thing. By the time I dug it up and destroyed it properly, the corruption had already transferred into the hens. Living bodies anchor entities better than ceramic.”

He strips off his work shirt for better access to the wound.

“What you fought was something that shouldn’t exist—a contamination that moved from dead material into living hosts. That’s why extraction was necessary instead of slaughter. The birds weren’t the threat. They were just occupied.”

Bertram sets the mead jug back on the table. Then he looks at Aldous—long, grave stare.

“From a failed firing… eight years ago?” His voice drops. “You can’t mention ‘eight years ago’ and expect me not to know what that implies, my friend.” He rubs his temple where the wound is. Winces. “Did this entity have something to do with that sweet, studious apprentice of yours? What was her name…” Squints like recall’s harder with the head wound. “Mara, wasn’t it? First time you’ve referred to that year. Ever since.”

Vespera’s ears snap forward.

“Aldous, let me take a look at that arm while you tell us about Mara.” Her tone’s careful. “That kind of connection deserves the full story, meow.”

Bertram glances at her.

“I can see the bloodied hole in your breeches over your shapely ass right where that demon buried its beak, miss. Maybe you should let yourself be helped.”

Aldous’ arm needs disinfectant. Rinsed, exposed, accessible. Then closure. The wound’s not trivial—bantam peck, deeper than it looks. Blood loss makes people stupid. Infection risk is real. Vinegar will burn but he’s kept talking through worse today.

“Aldous. Hold still. Your turn.”

I move to him. Tip the vinegar over the wound, let it soak deep.

His jaw locks. Teeth grind—I can see the muscle flex. Fists clench white, breathing sharp through his nose. He holds still.

When I finish, he reaches for linen strips from the cabinet. Starts wrapping the wound himself. Hands steady despite the burn-ache.

“Yes. The entity came from Mara’s death.” First wrap secured. “Eight years ago I tried a ritual from a grimoire fragment I’d bought. Thought I was being careful, thought I understood the variables. I was wrong.” Another wrap. “The firing went catastrophically wrong and she died in the kiln fire. What came out of that kiln, other than burned shards, was my first functional containment vessel, sitting perfect in the ashes while she bled out on my workshop floor.”

He ties off the bandage. Small knot.

“So yes, Bertram—what you just helped me extract from those chickens has everything to do with my apprentice. Most of what I know about craft-based containment, I learned from the night she died.”

Bertram looks down at his lap. Lifts the clay jug to his lips, takes a longer gulp. Wipes his mouth with the back of his hand.

“That poor girl.” The edges of his eyes wrinkle. “Maybe I should say that… these things are not to be played around with. Whatever ‘entities’ exist out there that can be brought over through mysterious grimoires. But I guess… it happens. Despite our best intentions, life takes away the ones we care about.” He pauses. “Such a bright smile she had, that one.”

Vespera shifts her weight, ears flicking back.

“Right. Guess it’s my turn.”

She reaches back, works the torn breeches down over her ass. The wound’s exposed now—puncture, red, angry.

Bertram, seated behind her, makes a contemplative sound.

“Oh my. I can’t say I’ve seen many cat-folk butts in my long life, but yours is quite lovely, miss.”

Although Vespera’s tail twitches, she doesn’t turn around.

Last one needing disinfectant. Ass wounds are awkward but not complicated—muscle tissue, decent blood supply, low infection risk if treated properly. Vinegar will sting worse on tender flesh.

I cross to her with the jar.

“Vespera. This is going to burn.”

I tip it over the wound. Her spine goes rigid. Full-body shiver, tail jerking stiff. She sucks air through her teeth, claws flexing against the table edge. Holds still.

Rill’s trying to close her chest wound again. Hands working the angle, trying to bring the edges together. Can’t see what she’s doing. Fumbles the pressure. Won’t hold.

Aldous approaches her, methodical.

“Your wound’s been prepped correctly—rinsed and disinfected. Let me try to close it properly before infection sets in.” His voice stays level. “My medicine skill isn’t excellent, but the rooster got you helping with my problem. I owe you at least the attempt.”

Rill nods. He kneels beside her. Examines the punctures over her heart—copper-backed rooster hit the same spot twice. He reaches for linen strips, works the edges together carefully.

He tries to seat the cloth, then tries again. It slips. He pulls back, jaw tight, strips loose in his hands.

Bertram straightens. Sets the mead jug down on the table—solid thunk. Reaches behind his apron, extracts his pipe. He examines it like he’s checking for damage from the temple strike. Takes a long look at Rill.

“Kid, you did good. You went with us into that ambush. Kept holding tight to those chickens despite the bloom of blood in your chest. Despite the fact that you weren’t strong enough to prevent those feathered devils from escaping your grip. You’ve got grit is what I mean.”

He pauses. The pipe stays unlit in his fingers.

“Still… don’t know if that’s a good thing. There are worse things out there than possessed chickens, if you’re still willing to put your life on the line. Threadscar didn’t get her nickname from mopping floors, I’m guessing.”

Vespera shifts her weight, reaches down for the pooled breeches at her feet.

“Right, well. Can’t have a serious conversation about dead apprentices and entity corruption while my ass is hanging out. Not the aesthetic I was going for.”

She picks them up. Starts working them back over her hips, careful around the treated wound.

Rill’s chest wound is prepped—rinsed, disinfected, exposed. Both Aldous and Rill tried to close it already. Both failed. My turn. Rill’s young. Healthy tissue, good blood supply. Should respond well.

“Stay still. I’m closing this properly.”

I kneel and examine the punctures—rooster hit the same spot twice, over the heart. Worst wound of the group. Edges clean from the vinegar, good blood supply, no compromise visible.

I press the edges together—firm, even—and hold them while I seat the linen strip. Tension right, coverage right. I secure it and test the hold.

The bleeding’s checked, but nobody relaxes.

Aldous moves toward one of the empty wooden stools. Sits down careful, mindful of the arm wound.

“You all came here because I posted at the Registry about possessed chickens, and you stayed through an extraction that turned into a small battle.” His voice stays level. “I owe you more than cider. If anyone needs rest before heading back to town, the space is yours.”

Bertram produces a match, strikes his pipe. Flame catches. He lights the tobacco and takes a slow draw.

Smoke curls up. He’s watching Vespera work the vinegar-treated wound through the tear in her breeches.

“As for you, miss cat, I’m picturing a young life whole with fresh taverns in which to play, adventures to partake in.” Another puff. “Don’t know what brought you to our little nowhere-town, but I hope we didn’t make too bad of an impression on you. Possessed poultry and all.”

Vespera glances back toward the treated area.

“Melissa already handled the vinegar part—which hurt like absolute hell, by the way—so the wound’s disinfected. Let me see first if I can close this rooster wound properly.”

My hands are done. Now I watch.

Bertram’s managing his own pain—mead first, now pipe. Self-administered. Vespera’s struggling to handle her own closure attempt. Rill’s quiet, processing the first real wound she’s taken.

They’re talking about Mara again. Heavy conversation. Not my terrain. I patch bodies. I don’t patch guilt.

Bertram’s good at the social space. He reads people the way I read blood. I’ll watch for delayed shock. Infection signs. Anyone who destabilizes. That’s what I’m trained for.

The rest of it—the sharing, the bonding over tragedy—that’s their work.

THE END

Post-mortem for That Feathered Bastard

Read first the short story this post-mortem is about: That Feathered Bastard.

Through this cycle of fantasy stories, I’m exercising in tandem my two main passions in life: building systems and creating narratives. Every upcoming scenario, which turns into a short story, requires me to program new systems into my Living Narrative Engine, which is a browser-based platform for playing through immersive sims, RPGs and the likes. Long gone are the scenarios that solely required me to figure out how to move an actor from a location to another, or to pick up an item, or to read a book. Programming the systems so I could play through the chicken coop ambush involved about five days of constant work on the codebase. I’ve forgotten all that was necessary to add, but off the top of my head:

  • A completely new system for non-deterministic actions. Previously, all actions succeeded, given that the code has a very robust system for action discoverability: unless the context for the action is right, no actor can execute them to begin with. I needed a way for an actor to see “I can hit this bird, but my chances are 55%. I may not want to do this.” Once you have non-deterministic actions in a scenario, it becomes unpredictable, with the actors constantly having to maneuver a changing state, which reveals their character more.
  • I implemented numerous non-deterministic actions:
    • Striking targets with blunt weapons, swinging at targets with slashing weapons, thrusting piercing weapons at targets. None of those ended up taking part of this scenario, because the actors considered that keeping the birds alive was a priority, as Aldous intended.
    • Warding-related non-deterministic actions: drawing salt boundaries around corrupted targets (which Aldous said originally he was going to do, but the situation turned chaotic way too fast), and extracting spiritual corruption through an anchor, which Aldous did twice in the short.
    • Beak attacks, only available to entities whose body graphs have beak parts (so not only chickens, but griffins, krakens, etc.). This got plenty of use.
    • Throwing items at targets. Bertram relied on this one in a fury. I got clever with the code; the damage caused by a thrown weapon, when the damage type is not specified, is logarithmically determined by the item’s weight. So a pipe produces 1 unit of blunt damage, and throwing Vespera’s instrument case at birds (which I did plenty during testing) would cause significant damage. Fun fact: throwing an item could have produced a fumble (96-100 result on a 1-100 throw), and that would have hit a bystander. Humorous when throwing a pipe, not so much an axe.
    • Restraining targets, as well as the chance for restrained targets to free themselves. Both of these got plenty of use.
    • A corrupting gaze. It was attempted thrice, if I remember correctly, once by the main vector of corruption and the other by that creepy one with the crooked neck. If it had succeeded, it would have corrupted the human target, and Aldous would have had to extract it out of them as well. That could have been interesting, but I doubt it would have happened in the middle of chickens flying all over.
  • Implementing actions that cause damage meant that I needed to implement two new systems: health and damage. Both would rely on the extensive anatomy system, which produces anatomy graphs out of recipes. What I mean about that is that we have recipes for roosters, hens, cat-girls, men, women. You specify in the recipe if you want strong legs, long hair, firm ass cheeks, and you end up with a literal graph of connected body parts. Noses, hands, vaginas exist as their own entities in this system. They can individually suffer damage. I could have gone insane with this, as Dwarf Fortress does, simulating even individual finger segments and non-vital internal organs. I may do something similar some day if I don’t have anything better to do.
    • Health system: individual body parts have their own health levels. They can suffer different tiers of damage. They can bleed, be fractured, poisoned, burned, etc. At an overall health level of 10%, actors enter a dying state. Suffering critical damage on a vital organ can kill creatures outright. During testing there were situations in which a head was destroyed, but the brain was still functioning well enough, so no death.
    • Damage system: weapons declare their own damage types and the status effects that could be applied. Vespera’s theatrical rapier can pierce but also slash, with specific amounts of damage. Rill’s practice stick only does low blunt damage, but can fracture.

Having a proper health and damage system, their initial versions anyway, revealed something troubling: simple non-armored combat with slashing weapons can slice off limbs and random body parts with realistic ease. Whenever I get to scenes involving more serious stakes than a bunch of chickens, stories are going to be terrifyingly unpredictable. Oh, and when body parts are dismembered, a corresponding body part entity gets spawned at the location. That means that any actor can pick up a detached limb and throw it at someone.

Why go through all this trouble, other than the fact that I enjoy doing it and that it distracts me from the ocean of despair that surrounds me and that I can only ignore when I’m absorbed in a passion of mine? Well, over the many years of producing stories, what ended up boring me was that I went into a scene knowing all that was going to happen. Of course, I didn’t know the specifics of every paragraph, and most of the joy went into the execution of those sentences. But often I found myself looking up at the sequences of scenes to come, and it was like erecting a building that you already knew how it was going to end up looking. You start to wonder why even bother, when you can see it clearly in your mind.

And I’m not talking about that “plotter vs. pantser” dichotomy. Pantsing means you don’t know where you’re going, and all pantser stories, as far as I recall, devolve into messes that can’t be tied down neatly by the end. And of course they’re not going to go back and revise them to the necessary extent of making something coherent out of them. As much as I respect Cormac McCarthy, one of his best if not the best written novel of his, Suttree, is that kind of mess, which turns the whole thing into an episodic affair. An extremely vivid one that left many compelling, some harrowing, images in my brain, but still.

I needed the structure, with chance for deviation, but I also needed to be constantly surprised by the execution of a scene. I wanted to go into it with a plan, only for the plan to fail to survive the contact with the enemy. That’s where my Living Narrative Engine comes in. Now, when I experience a scene, I don’t know what the conversations are going to entail. I didn’t even come up with Aldous myself: Copperplate brought him up in the first scene when making up the details of the chicken contract. It was like that whole “Lalo didn’t send you” from Breaking Bad, which ended up producing a whole series. From that mention of Aldous, after an iterative process of making the guy interesting for myself, he ended up becoming a potter-exorcist I can respect.

I went into that chicken coop not knowing anything about what was going to happen other than the plan the characters themselves had. Would they overpower the chickens and extract the corruption out of them methodically with little resistance? Would any of the extraction attempts succeed? Would any actor fly into a rage, wield their weapons and start chopping off chicken limbs while Aldous complained? Would any of the characters suffer a nasty wound like, let’s say, a beak to the eye? I didn’t know, and that made the process of producing this scene thrilling.

Also, Vespera constantly failing at everything she tried, including two rare fumbles that sent her to the straw, was pure chance. It made for a more compelling scene from her POV; at one point I considered making Aldous the POV, as he had very intriguing internal processes.

Well, the scene wasn’t all thrilling. You see, after the natural ending when that feathered bastard pecked Vespera’s ass, the scene originally extended for damn near three-fourths of the original length. People constantly losing chickens, the rooster pecking at anyone in sight, Melissa getting frustrated with others failing to hold down the chickens, Rill doing her best to re-capture the chickens that kept wrenching free from her hold. Aldous even failed bad at two extractions and had to pick up the vessel again. It was a battle of attrition, which realistically would have been in real life. I ended up quitting, because I got the point: after a long, grueling, undignified struggle, the chickens are saved, the entity is contained in the vessel, and the actors exit back to the warm morning with their heads down, not willing to speak for a good while about what they endured.

Did the scene work? I’m not sure. It turned out chaotic, with its biggest flaw maybe the repetition of attempting to catch chickens only for them to evade capture. There were more instances of this in the original draft, which I cut out. I could say that the scene was meant to feel chaotic and frustrating, and while that’s true, that’s also the excuse of those that say “You thought my story was bad? Ah, but it was meant to be bad, so I succeeded!” Through producing that scene, editing it, and rereading it, I did get the feeling of being there in that chaotic situation, trying to realistically accomplish a difficult task when the targets of the task didn’t want it completed, so if any reader has felt like that, I guess that’s a success.

I have no idea what anyone reading this short story must have felt or thought about it, but it’s there now, and I’ll soon move out to envision the next scenario.

Anyway, here are some portraits for the characters involved:

Aldous, the potter-exorcist

Kink-necked black pullet

Slate-blue bantam

White-faced buff hen

Large speckled hen

Copper-backed rooster

That Feathered Bastard (Short Story)

Plank walls stained deep brown, low ceiling beamed with simple timbers, two stubby roost bars mounted like a ladder on the left wall. Centered at the back sits a narrow shelf unit divided into three nesting cubbies. The floor’s covered in flattened straw and wood shavings, uneven underfoot, with two shallow bowls set directly on it. Morning light struggles through the wire-mesh opening. Corners stay shadowed; wood grain shows deep and dark. Burnt clay coats my throat with every breath.

We’re all inside now—Bertram, Aldous, “Threadscar” Melissa, Rill, and me, crowded into this glorified chicken prison. Five birds occupy the gloom: a black pullet with a crooked neck making tiny ceramic clicks from her beak, dust clinging to her pinfeathers like kiln sweepings. A copper-backed rooster with an impressive tail immediately positions himself between us and the other chickens, broad chest out like he’s got a chance. A buff hen with a startlingly pale face pecks the same exact spot in the litter, obsessive and drooping. A tiny slate-blue bantam circles the back corner.

And at the center: the speckled hen. Large, holding unnaturally still, staring straight ahead despite five humans invading her space.

The coop door scrapes shut, but the latch doesn’t catch. A finger-width gap of light. Bertram glances back at it, then scans the interior, jaw tight.

“This chicken coop of yours is way gloomier than it has any right to be,” he says.

Aldous moves closer, containment vessel cradled like glass.

“The gloom’s not aesthetic, Bertram. It’s symptomatic. The burnt-clay smell, the dim light, the way the roosting bars look wrong even though nothing’s physically changed—that’s all bleed-through from what’s anchored in the flock. Vespera, we’re starting with the speckled hen. I need you to position her exactly one handspan from the vessel’s opening when I give the word.”

The black pullet recenters its crooked neck with a sharp twitch. Click, click, click from the beak.

Melissa shifts beside me, moving into position without crowding my space. Support stance—sparring distance. Close enough to intervene.

The buff hen moves slowly across the litter, drooping like she’s sick, letting out soft clucks with a dry rasp underneath.

I move toward the speckled hen, keeping my movements fluid and deliberate. That clean focus I get before violence kicks in—except this time it’s aggressive chicken handling for occult pottery.

“I’ll hold her steady when you’re ready, Aldous,” I say, closing the distance smoothly. “Just tell me when to position her.”

The speckled hen holds that unnatural stillness, staring ahead while a milky film slides across her eyes—a second lid, slow and wrong.

Then, she jerks sideways, whole body yanked like an invisible wire pulled her. Her head swivels with mechanical precision, scanning. Seeking a target.

The hen’s eyes lock onto Melissa, and I catch the detail I missed before: concentric rings in the iris, like growth rings in cut wood. The gaze holds. Something passes between the hen and the veteran. Pressure drop before a storm.

Melissa doesn’t flinch. Her jaw sets, eyes narrowing, and whatever spiritual rot the hen’s pushing at her hits resistance. The veteran stands her ground.

The copper-backed rooster explodes into motion. Plants himself beside the speckled hen. His beak opens. Burnt clay rolls out on his breath—I taste it.

Then he lunges at Rill. The rooster jumps, surprisingly high for something that size, and drives his beak straight into Rill’s torso. Right over her heart. The impact lands wet and precise.

Rill staggers back. Her face registers the pain in a tight grimace, but her eyes stay locked on the rooster. Combat-ready despite the blood starting to seep through her linen tunic.

The black pullet’s making excited clicks now, rapid-fire ceramic taps that echo off the coop walls.

The slate-blue bantam explodes from the back corner, tiny legs churning through litter. She launches herself at Melissa, but the veteran sidesteps clean. The bantam’s beak snaps shut on empty air.

The buff hen, who’s been pecking obsessively at the same spot this whole time, suddenly lifts her head. Looks around like she’s just waking up. Then something clicks behind those pale eyes and she snaps alert.

She charges Bertram. The buff hen lunges with more speed than her drooping posture suggested possible, beak aimed at his face. Bertram throws his hands up, stumbling back—the hen overshoots, loses her balance completely, and hits the ground in a tumble of dusty feathers.

Bertram’s got his pipe out now, pulled from under his apron, gripped like a club.

“This was an ambush!” He edges closer to the fallen bird, keeping the pipe raised. “I guess the saying is true—no plan survives contact with the enemy!”

He drops down, gets his hands on the buff hen before she can right herself, and pins her. She thrashes but he’s got weight and leverage.

Aldous moves immediately. Not rushed—methodical. He crosses to Bertram and the restrained hen with the containment vessel still cradled carefully, his eyes already assessing angles and positioning.

“Bertram, keep holding her. I’m going to help her upright, and then we’re doing the extraction immediately while you’ve got her restrained. This is the best chance we’ll get.”

He sets the vessel down carefully, then gets his hands under the buff hen’s body. They wrestle the buff hen upright, Bertram maintaining his grip while Aldous adjusts her position with almost ritualistic precision.

Melissa lunges forward, going for the copper-backed rooster—the biggest active threat now that Bertram has the buff restrained. But the coop erupts into chaos of wings and movement. The speckled hen jerks sideways exactly as Melissa commits, the rooster pivots, and suddenly they’ve traded positions in that split-second scramble.

Melissa’s hands close around the speckled hen. She pins the wings tight against the bird’s body with both hands, adjusting her grip with practiced efficiency.

“Got her instead.” Melissa’s voice cuts through the noise, steady. “Aldous, proceed with your extraction. I’ll hold this one.”

The speckled hen thrashes, and that wrongness radiating from her intensifies. I can feel it like heat off sun-baked stone.

The rooster’s loose. He’s already drawn blood. Melissa’s got the primary anchor, Bertram’s locked down the buff—I need to handle this copper-backed bastard.

I move toward him, smooth and deliberate. I go in like I would in a clinch—hands sure, wings pinned, no room for him to spin. Mrow, let’s see if restraining a possessed chicken gives me the same edge as actual combat.

The rooster sees me coming. His head snaps toward me, tailfeathers flaring, and he sidesteps with surprising speed. I adjust my angle, reach for him, but he evades. Clean pivot, low to the ground, and he’s out of range before my hands close on feathers.

Rill, blood seeping through her tunic where the rooster pierced her, lunges forward. She’s going for him with both hands extended, trying to pin his wings the way Melissa demonstrated with the speckled hen.

The copper-backed rooster twists away from her too, wings beating hard. Rill’s hands grasp at empty air, and the rooster plants himself three feet back, chest out, guarding the space between us and Melissa’s captive.

The speckled hen’s thrashing intensifies. Melissa’s got solid grip, wings pinned tight, but the hen twists with unnatural strength, and the veteran’s hands slip just enough. The hen wrenches free, tumbling to the litter in an explosion of dust and burnt-clay stench.

The copper-backed rooster sees it. His head snaps toward the escaped hen, and then he’s airborne, launching himself straight at Melissa with focused rage. He drives his beak into her torso, right over the ribs. The impact makes a dull thud against her leather cuirass. Melissa doesn’t even flinch.

Movement from the shadows. The slate-blue bantam rushes out, tiny and fast, making a beeline for Bertram. She launches herself at him, beak aimed for exposed skin, but Bertram shifts his weight without losing his grip on the buff hen. The bantam’s strike goes wide, her beak snapping shut on empty air.

The buff hen thrashes harder, clucking with that raspy edge, losing feathers as she strains against Bertram’s hold. He pins her tighter. She can’t break free.

The tanner keeps his eyes narrowed, head angled to the side like he’s expecting another strike.

“Aldous,” he says, steady despite the bantam circling for another pass, “I would appreciate if you extracted whatever you need to extract out of this one, my friend.”

Aldous positions the vessel one handspan from the buff hen’s head. Hands steady despite the burnt-clay choke.

“Bertram, she’s going to thrash when the extraction engages. Don’t let go, don’t adjust your grip. The gradient forms along geometric lines and any movement breaks the pattern.” His eyes sweep the coop without moving his head. “Eyes away from the opening. I’m starting now.”

He shifts the vessel’s opening closer to the hen’s face. The buff hen starts shuddering immediately—not normal thrashing but something deeper, tremors running through her entire body. A prolonged screech escapes her throat, high and wrong.

The struggle lasts seconds but feels stretched. The hen convulses, Bertram holds firm, Aldous keeps the vessel positioned with mathematical precision—and then it’s done. The buff hen goes limp in Bertram’s grip, the wrongness bleeding out of her. Whatever corruption was anchored in that bird, it’s in the vessel now.

Melissa crosses the distance to the speckled hen in three strides. She gets her hands around the bird before she can scramble away—pins the wings against the body with both hands.

The hen thrashes, making garbled sounds that don’t belong in any chicken’s throat, but the Melissa’s grip holds.

The copper-backed rooster is still the biggest threat. I’m free to handle him.

I lunge forward, hands extended to grab him before he can attack anyone else. The rooster pivots. I reach for him, but my boot catches something in the litter, uneven wood shavings or straw, and my ankle rolls. I’m going down fast, hands grasping at empty air as the ground rushes up.

I hit the floor hard. Dust and burnt clay smell explode around me. The impact knocks the breath halfway out of my lungs.

The rooster, three feet away, broad chest puffed and tailfeathers flared, clucks territorial. His head swivels, sizing up opponents.

To my right, Rill lunges forward, going for the rooster with both hands extended. She’s trying to pin his wings against his body the way Melissa showed us. The rooster twists away from her. He’s out of range before her hands close on feathers. Rill doesn’t hesitate. She goes after him again.

The rooster launches himself at her. He flies straight for her chest—same heart region where her tunic’s already bloodstained. His beak drives into her flesh with unnatural accuracy, piercing through the linen again. I hear the wet impact even from the ground.

Rill staggers but doesn’t go down. Her jaw sets tight against the pain.

The kink-necked black pullet is suddenly right there, five feet from my face. Her crooked neck cants hard to the left, and she locks eyes with me.

Click, click, click. Sharp ceramic sounds from her beak, rapid-fire and wrong.

Pressure blooms behind my eyes—cold, invasive. I brace, and it slides off like rain on stone. The pullet backs away, clicks slowing.

From the back corner—the slate-blue bantam rushes out. She launches herself at Aldous, beak aimed for exposed skin. Aldous sidesteps without looking at her directly. The bantam lands in the dust.

The buff hen shakes her head in Bertram’s grip, confused, trying weakly to free herself. The extraction pulled the wrongness out, left her just a regular chicken trying to escape a human’s hold. Bertram struggles to scramble to his feet.

“Everyone still alive?” He glances around the coop. “What feathered demon are we handling next?”

He spots me on the ground, and his eyebrows go up. He rushes over, reaches down, grabs me by the front of my shirt even though that hand is still holding his pipe. The buff hen squawks indignantly under his arm.

“Floor ain’t made of catnip as far as I know, miss. Get up.”

He hauls me to my feet with more force than finesse. I find my balance, dust and wood shavings clinging to my clothes.

Aldous crosses to Melissa and the speckled hen, vessel cradled carefully, eyes already calculating angles.

He positions the containment vessel exactly one handspan from the hen’s head, where those growth-ring eyes show whatever corruption runs deepest. His hands stay steady despite the chaos still churning around us.

“Melissa, hold her firm—this is the primary vector.” His voice cuts through the burnt-clay stench without rising in volume. “The extraction will fight harder than the buff hen’s did. Don’t adjust your grip no matter how she thrashes. Eyes away. I’m extracting now.”

The speckled hen’s body goes rigid in Melissa’s grip. Then she screeches—garbled, wrong, a sound that would require vocal cords no chicken should possess. The screech scrapes against the inside of my skull like metal on glass.

Her body spasms. Not the panicked thrashing of a restrained bird—something stronger than her frame should allow. Wings strain with unnatural force. The veteran’s grip holds, tension cording through her scarred forearms.

The struggle stretches. The hen convulses, that screech rising and falling in waves that make my teeth ache. Aldous keeps the vessel positioned steady as a fixture.

Then it’s done. The wrongness bleeds out of the hen like heat dissipating into cold air. She goes limp in Melissa’s grip. Just a bird now. The burnt-clay smell doesn’t fade but the pressure it carried, that invasive spiritual rot, collapses. Melissa releases her; the hen settles onto the straw-covered floor, docile.

Melissa straightens, turns toward the copper-backed rooster who’s still loose and aggressive, chest puffed and tailfeathers flared.

I lunge for him again, movements sharp and controlled, aiming to pin his wings before he can strike. But the rooster jumps, and I’m grasping at empty air as he lands three feet away. My hands close on nothing.

The speckled hen, clean now, picks her way through the scattered bodies and debris. She avoids Rill, sidesteps Aldous’ boots, and heads straight for the coop’s entrance.

The copper-backed rooster’s head swivels, tracking movement across the coop. His eyes settle on me. That barrel chest puffs wider, hackles flaring rust-red in the dim light, and I can see the exact moment he chooses his target.

He charges. Talons churning through litter, wings half-spread for balance. I sidestep. He adjusts mid-charge, but I pivot. His beak snaps on empty air. Momentum carries him past me in a flurry of copper feathers and burnt-clay stench.

The kink-necked black pullet locks eyes with Melissa. Click, click, click. That spiritual pressure builds again. Melissa’s jaw sets, eyes narrowing. The pressure shatters. The pullet backs away.

The slate-blue bantam explodes from the shadows. Tiny legs pump through the litter as she launches herself at Bertram with surprising height. Her beak drives straight into his head—I hear the impact piercing skin.

Bertram’s hands fly to his skull, still gripping that pipe. He swings it up reflexively and cracks himself in the temple with his own weapon.

“Agh! You feathered cunt!” He releases the buff hen—she drops from under his arm, flapping indignantly to the floor—and presses both hands to his bleeding scalp. “I felt the vibration right through my gray matter!”

The buff hen shakes herself, confused and free, then waddles away.

Aldous moves. That same methodical precision he showed during the extractions, but faster now—crossing the distance to the copper-backed rooster. Not waiting for someone else to handle it.

“Hold still,” he says, reaching for the rooster with both hands angled to pin wings tight against body. “I’m not giving anyone an excuse to kill you when extraction is still possible!”

The rooster twists, wings snapping, and Aldous’ hands close on empty air. The bird plants himself three feet back, chest out, eyeing Aldous with focused aggression.

“Third time’s the charm, you feathered bastard,” I say, closing the distance fast. “Hold still so Aldous can fix you!”

I lunge at the rooster. He sidesteps—my boot catches the litter and I’m down again, dust and burnt clay exploding around me.

Rill’s shifting her attention away from the rooster. Her eyes lock onto the kink-necked black pullet instead, the one who tried to corrupt both me and Melissa with that ceramic-click gaze. She’s done chasing the copper-backed demon.

She lunges at the black pullet with both hands angled to pin its wings tight against its twisted body. The pullet’s neck cants hard to the left, beak opening for another click—but Rill’s already got her. Hands close around the bird, wings pressed flush to her sides before she can cast that corrupting gaze again.

Near the coop entrance, the large speckled hen settles into a corner. She watches the chaos with what looks like concern, head tilting like she can’t figure out why everyone’s so worked up.

The copper-backed rooster jumps, hits the wall with both talons, rebounds off the planks with surprising force, then swoops down on Aldous. Wings spread wide for the dive, beak aimed straight for his chest. The rooster pecks hard—I hear the impact against Aldous’ quilted jerkin, the dull thud of beak hitting padded fabric. The jerkin holds.

The black pullet in Rill’s grip thrashes harder, neck twitching violently, beak clicking against Rill’s hands. She’s trying to free herself with unnatural strength for something that size.

The pullet wrenches free from Rill’s hold, tumbling to the litter in an explosion of dust and that burnt-clay stench. Her crooked neck recenters with a sharp twitch—click, click—and she backs away fast, putting distance between herself and Rill’s hands.

The slate-blue bantam rushes out again from the shadows, tiny legs churning. She launches herself at Aldous, who’s still recovering from the rooster’s chest strike. The bantam’s beak drives into his exposed left arm with surgical precision. I hear the wet sound of piercing flesh.

Aldous grimaces but doesn’t cry out. Blood wells up where the bantam’s beak punctured skin.

The white-faced buff hen spots the coop door. It’s cracked open, light from the yard spilling through the gap. She clucks indignantly, ruffles her pale feathers, then waddles straight for freedom. Pushes through the opening and disappears into Aldous’ yard, leaving the coop behind.

Bertram’s got one hand pressed to his bleeding head where the bantam struck earlier. His eyes sweep the coop floor, searching. Then he spots the slate-blue bantam circling near Aldous’ feet, and his expression tightens.

He lifts his pipe-hand, the carved wood gripped tight despite the blood running down his temple.

“You accursed bunch of misbehaving poultry!”

He throws the pipe hard. It hits the slate-blue bantam square in her torso, enough force to send her tumbling through the litter. She rolls once, then scrambles upright, shaking herself with a chirp.

Aldous is approaching me, quick but controlled despite the blood sliding down his arm. He extends a hand down.

“Up—now. Rooster’s still active. I need your hands functional, not eating straw.”

I grab his hand and he hauls me to my feet. Pulled up again. Mortifying.

Melissa’s already moving, eyes locked on the kink-necked black pullet who’s been circling and clicking since she broke free from Rill’s grip. The veteran’s hands are angled low to pin the pullet’s glossy-black wings tight against her twisted body before she can cast another corrupting gaze.

She’s got her; the pullet thrashes, clicks muffled. But Melissa holds firm.

We’re bleeding for every inch, and I’m still dead weight. Rill’s chest wound seeps through her tunic. Bertram’s holding his head. Aldous’ arm drips.

The rooster’s still loose, barrel chest puffed and guarding his position like he owns this coop. And maybe he does.

The slate-blue bantam is tiny, wounded from Bertram’s thrown pipe. Better odds than the rooster. Smaller target, less dangerous, already hurting. I need to actually succeed at something.

The burnt clay smell coating my nostrils, the straw compressed under my boots, the chaos of wings and bodies and blood. This is what I’m good at. Violence with purpose. The bantam. Pin her tiny wings.

Mrow, fourth time’s the charm.

I move toward the slate-blue bantam, hands angled to grab her before she can dart back into the shadows or attack someone else.

The bantam sees me coming. She jumps—tiny legs pump hard—and twists mid-air. My hands close on empty air where she was a split-second ago. She lands three feet away, shakes her wounded body, and circles toward the shadows.

Movement beside me—Rill lunges at the bantam with both hands extended, going for the same target I just whiffed on. Her chest wound’s still bleeding but her eyes are locked on that tiny slate-blue body with focused determination.

The bantam jumps again. Rill’s hands grasp at feathers. She’s got contact, fingers closing around one wing, but the bantam thrashes hard and Rill’s footing shifts wrong in the litter. She’s going down, hands losing grip as her knees hit the straw-covered floor. The bantam wrenches free and darts away in a blur of slate-blue feathers.

Near the coop entrance, the large speckled hen takes a final look at the chaos. Then she turns and waddles straight through the cracked door, following the white-faced buff hen out into the yard. Two regular chickens escaping the violence.

I’m tracking the bantam’s movement as she circles back toward the shadows, when something massive and copper-backed fills my peripheral vision.

The rooster lunges at me. Lower. He drives his beak straight into my right ass cheek.

Pain explodes sharp and piercing. I feel the beak punch through fabric, through skin, driving deep enough to make everything clench involuntarily.

“Fuck!”

The rooster pulls back, beak dripping, and plants himself three feet away. Chest puffed.

My ass is on fire.

THE END


Check out this video I generated about this short. I hadn’t laughed that hard in a good while.

Salt Lines (Short Story)

We reach 12 Kiln Lane after mid-morning. The house sits alone at the path’s end—low, old, thatch sagging. Stone lifts pale plaster, patched and hairline-cracked. No ornament. Just a heavy door set deep, dark-paned windows, terracotta jars crowding the step. The place is sealed—simple, sturdy, watchful.

A man kneels before it, hunched over a pottery jar, drawing careful marks on the clay. Must be Aldous. Slim, pale under clay dust. Short dirty-blonde hair, sleep-hollowed hazel eyes. Stained work clothes, reinforced knees, scarred hands rougher than the jar. The smell of kiln smoke and wet clay drifts over even from here.

Bertram steps forward, pipe in hand.

“Aldous, my good man! I’m glad to say that I can finally lift your spirits about the chicken problem.” He gestures at me. “You see, this exotic out-of-towner, Vespera’s the name, decided to take on your request to deal with your misbehaving poultry. I also got our local warrior Threadscar to help. Oh, and there’s this stray teenager we picked up along the way. So fret not, Aldous, about your poultry situation! This posse of killers will make short work of it all. Then we could all head to town and drink ourselves stupid in celebration.”

The moment Bertram says posse of killers and make short work, something tightens in Aldous’ expression. Worry.

He stands, brushes clay dust off his trousers with deliberate care.

“Bertram, I appreciate you bringing help. Truly. But this isn’t a culling. It’s an extraction.” He gestures toward the back of the property. “The infected birds are quarantined in the coop. Locked. It stays that way until we have a plan that doesn’t start with knives. Come to the yard—I’ll show you the setup and explain what needs to happen.”

He turns and walks toward the yard without waiting for acknowledgment. Melissa follows immediately. She moves like she trusts her own eyes. Bertram ambles after them, curious but unhurried.

I’m still standing at the front of the house like I missed the cue.

“Right behind you, Aldous,” I call, following with easy, prowling steps. “Let’s see what’s got you so spooked about your poultry, meow. I’m very interested in hearing about this ‘extraction’ you have in mind.”

The yard opens up behind the house—a wide stretch of grass marked with geometric patterns in thick salt lines. Twelve chickens peck and cluck like nothing’s wrong. On the far edge sits the coop: simple wooden frame, wire mesh opening into darkness that smells sharp and acrid. Burnt clay.

I catch movement—Rill, hurrying to catch up. She doesn’t want to be left behind.

Bertram wanders in, pipe still in hand, surveying the setup with mild curiosity. Aldous doesn’t acknowledge him. He walks straight toward me instead—close, closer than conversational distance—and drops his voice low.

“You took the contract, so you get the explanation first.” He gestures toward the wire mesh coop. “Those five birds in there are infected with something that came from buried ceramic. Not folklore. Not temperament. An actual entity that’s anchored biologically now. I have a containment vessel that can trap it if we extract properly, but the process will provoke violent resistance from the host. I need someone who can restrain a flailing chicken without panicking, without improvising cruelty, and without deciding that killing is ‘simpler.'” His hand moves to the leather thong around his neck. “The key to that coop stays around my neck until I’m standing there with the vessel, the geometry is stable, and everyone understands this is a procedure with rules. Can you work under those terms?”

He isn’t testing my strength. He’s testing my restraint.

My eyes—one ice-blue, one amber, both steady—meet his.

“I can work under those terms. Restraint. No shortcuts. You keep the key.” I flick an ear; the silver hoops catch light. “I’ve held plenty of things that didn’t want to be held, Aldous. Show me the geometry. Explain the procedure. I’ll follow your lead on this—it’s your vessel, your birds, your entity. I’m here to make sure it goes into the container instead of into someone’s throat.”

Melissa edges in to listen; Rill hovers behind her, intent.

Bertram wanders over to where Aldous and I stand. A few free-roaming chickens trail after him, pecking casually at his boots.

“Aldous.” His eyes narrow as he rubs his forehead slowly. He tilts his pipe to drop ash onto the grass, then slides it behind his apron. His gaze moves to the precise geometric patterns drawn in salt. “All these years I’ve known you, I’ve supported you on your artistic projects, but… this is a bit too much, don’t you think?”

The chickens keep pecking. One investigates Bertram’s heel with stubborn curiosity.

“That request at the Registry said…” Bertram continues. “How did you word it again? That the chickens were possessed by the spirit of your mother-in-law? I’ve never even known you to be married, but besides, you also said you wanted the chickens gone.” He gestures toward the coop. “What the hell is this now about birds getting infected with something that came from buried ceramic? What’s this ‘entity’ you speak of that lives in pottery? Are you sure you haven’t gone off the deep end, my friend?”

Aldous turns from me to face Bertram directly. His voice stays measured.

“The posting said ‘mother-in-law’ because I needed help fast without advertising a ward breach at the Registry where anyone could overhear. You know how gossip travels in Mudbrook.” He gestures toward the coop. “As for ‘gone’—smell that? Burnt clay. From chickens. That’s not normal, Bertram. You work with organic materials daily; you know what decay smells like versus what corruption smells like. This is the latter. I didn’t invent the geometric patterns for decoration—they’re containment boundaries that have kept twelve birds safe out here while five infected ones stay locked inside.” His eyes meet Bertram’s. “You’ve known me long enough to know I don’t do things without reason. I’m asking for procedural help, not validation. Vespera’s agreed to the terms. If you’re here to assist, I’ll explain the full extraction process. If you’re here to diagnose my mental state, you can wait by the fence.”

Bertram shifts his weight.

“You sound quite convinced, I admit, but… I mean, you misrepresented your request to Copperplate at the Registry. If he catches wind of this, he’ll spend a whole afternoon with his quill to the books.”

I let them have it. Bertram’s doubt. Aldous’ control. If the potter’s delusional, he’s functionally delusional.

Bertram nods, but his eyes stay worried.

“Sure, I know you to be a master craftsman at your particular trade. I value all the pots you sold me. They’re sturdy, and those drawings you make on them are quite nice.” He pauses. “It’s just… you’ve never been the same since the kiln explosion. Even you should be able to admit that.”

Bertram glances toward Melissa and Rill. “Anyway, you think there’s some ‘entity’ thing inside your chickens, then sure, let’s deal with it. So… you want the muscle here to help you contain your possessed chickens in that vessel? I mean, I guess you could squeeze a chicken into it if you pressed hard enough, but it will hardly take five. And they wouldn’t survive either.”

Aldous pulls the containment vessel from his satchel—glazed ceramic, intricate patterns catching the morning light. He holds it out toward the tanner.

“The vessel isn’t for the chickens, Bertram. It’s for what’s inside them.” His voice stays calm, precise. “Look at the glaze composition—cobalt oxide with salt-fired stoneware, fired at cone ten for structural integrity. The geometry etched into the surface creates a spiritual anchor. When we perform the extraction properly, the entity transfers from the biological host into the ceramic matrix.”

Aldous extends the vessel closer. “The chickens survive. The threat gets contained. That’s the difference between my work and what you’re imagining. This is craft, not butchery. Feel the weight of it if you don’t believe me.”

Bertram takes it. His hands turn it over slowly, examining the glaze patterns, the etched geometry, testing the weight.

“I’ve never known a better potter than you, Aldous. I recognize great craftsmanship. But when I spend hours making saddles, belts, boots… I don’t expect them to catch ‘entities.’ Whatever an ‘entity’ may mean in this occasion.”

He passes the vessel to me. Cool ceramic settles into my feline hands—heavier than expected, dense with that structural integrity Aldous mentioned. Bertram holds Aldous’ gaze through the potter’s glasses.

“You posted the request, and your chickens are in trouble. You’re in charge here. If you believe we should sing a chant or something while holding your chickens, I’m nobody to argue.”

Aldous doesn’t rise to it. He turns his full attention to me instead, steps closer so he’s addressing me directly rather than the whole group.

“Look at the etching along the rim—that’s the anchor geometry. When we extract, the entity will resist leaving the biological host. The patterns create a spiritual gradient, a pressure differential that pulls it toward the ceramic matrix instead of dispersing or jumping to another living thing.”

He points to specific glaze marks without touching the vessel.

“The extraction happens in stages. First, we isolate the primary vector—the large speckled hen. I’ll position the vessel near her head while you restrain her wings and body. The geometry does the heavy work, but she’ll thrash violently when it starts. Your job is to keep her contained without breaking bones or letting her escape the salt boundary I’ll draw around us. Once the entity transfers into the vessel, I seal it immediately. The other four birds should stabilize once the primary anchor is severed.”

His hazel eyes meet mine—ice-blue and amber both steady.

“Questions before we go to the coop?” the potter adds.

I turn the vessel in my hands, studying the etched geometry along the rim. I trace the glaze beside the etching, careful not to cross it.

“Where exactly do my hands go on her so I’m not blocking the anchor when she thrashes?” I meet Aldous’ eyes. “The other four—are they linked to her, or just infected? And timing—do you start the extraction the moment I have her secured, or should I watch for a signal?”

Behind me, Melissa stands positioned where she can hear clearly. Observing the procedural briefing. Calculating failure points and emergency responses without interrupting. The teenage girl is closer to Melissa than to us, absorbing every word with quiet intensity.

Aldous doesn’t pause. He pulls the leather thong over his head—key catching morning light—and moves toward the coop door.

“Proximity matters. The vessel needs to be within a handspan of her head for the gradient to engage properly. Your hands go on her wings first, folded tight against her body, then secure her legs so she can’t kick or claw when the thrashing starts. I position the vessel near her beak, angled so the anchor geometry faces her directly.”

He fits the key into the padlock.

“The networked effect—it’s more like removing the source infection. The speckled hen is the primary anchor. The other four birds are secondary hosts, tethered to her. Once we sever the primary connection, the entity loses its strongest foothold and the symptoms should resolve in the others within hours.”

Click. The lock opens.

Behind me, Bertram’s voice drops low, directed at Melissa.

“I’m guessing you’ve dealt with weirdness before. Gods know what you’ve had to kill through your mercenary work.” Brief pause. “But doesn’t this feel… This feels off to you too, right?”

Aldous lifts the padlock free. The burnt-clay smell punches out.

“Timing: I start the extraction the moment you have her secured and I’ve drawn the salt boundary around us.” He looks at me. “No signal to watch for—you’ll know when it starts because she’ll fight like she’s being burned alive. Keep her contained. Don’t let go. Don’t break the salt line. The geometry does the rest.”

“Feels off, yeah.” Melissa’s response comes flat. “But Aldous just opened the door. I’m going in.”

She moves past and steps through the coop entrance into darkness.

THE END

Portraits of my fantasy cycle characters

I know that some of you fuckers have read the first three short stories of my ongoing fantasy cycle (namely, The Municipal Aid Registry, Fine Print & Featherbones, and The Girl From the North Road). More are coming, as I’m having a lot of fun with it.

Anyway, I thought that other people may want to picture what the characters look like.

Vespera Nightwhisper

(yes, she’s a furry)


Registrar Copperplate


“Threadscar” Melissa


Rill

The Girl From the North Road (Short Story)

Three people. A middle-aged man, probably a local, looks like a tanner from the stains on his hands. Some kind of feline woman, exotic, dangerous-looking in a way that makes my spine straighten. And Melissa. “Threadscar” Melissa. Right here.

The tanner watches me approach. I can feel his eyes tracking me, probably taking in the sweat, the stick, the way my grip tightens when I get within speaking distance of Melissa.

“Who’s this kid?” he says. “I don’t recall seeing her in town. A girl friend of yours, Threadscar?”

The words hang there. Girl friend. Like I’m here for tea and gossip.

Melissa’s voice comes flat.

“She’s the girl from the north road. Watches me train. Not a friend. She follows.”

The words hit clean. Not harsh, just… factual. She isn’t telling me to leave, but she isn’t claiming me either. She follows. Like I’m a stray that keeps showing up at her door.

Movement to my left. The feline approaches with casual grace, tail swishing behind her. Her eyes are different colors, and they flick between me and Melissa like she’s cataloging something.

“Well well, meow. A girl who follows a warrior. What’s your name, kitten? And what’s with the stick?”

Great. Now I’m being patronized by someone who looks like she walked out of a story I couldn’t afford to hear the end of. But the question’s direct enough, so I answer it the same way.

“Rill. My name’s Rill. The stick’s a broom handle—wrapped so I don’t splinter my hands to hell. It’s what I’ve got, so it’s what I use.”

The tanner taps ash off his pipe, amusement pulling at the corners of his mouth.

“Do you make a habit of sweeping the outskirts of town with a headless broom handle?” His gaze shifts to Melissa. “You have a curious admirer, Threadscar.”

Threadscar. The name clicks into place.

She doesn’t step in. Doesn’t tell them I’m wasting time. Just stands there, expression flat, like she’s watching something unfold that she hasn’t decided matters yet.

The feline woman moves closer. Her hand reaches out before I can decide whether to pull back, and she pats me on the head—light, almost playful. A gesture you’d give a stray that showed up on your doorstep.

“You’ve got guts, I’ll give you that,” she says. “Most kids your age would’ve stayed home with a broom that still had bristles.” Her mismatched eyes study me. “Mrow, so what are you hoping to learn from our friend here? How to turn household objects into weapons, or something more… mmh… specific?”

I want to shove her hand off. Want to snarl. But that would prove I’m exactly what she thinks I am—a kid who can’t take a light touch without losing my shit. So I don’t.

She asked what I’m hoping to learn. That’s real. That’s a question with weight.

“Something specific. I’ve been copying from a distance for six months—watching Melissa train, trying to figure out what the hell I’m doing wrong. But I don’t know the basics. Stance, guard, footwork, the stuff you need before anything else makes sense. I want someone to teach me that. Not wave me off or tell me I’m too young or that I should go home and help my family. I want real instruction.” I lift the wrapped broom handle slightly. “The kind that turns this into something that works.”

The tanner exhales slowly, shaking his head.

“Can’t help but admire your determination, kid, but that stick looks like it’d break the moment you whacked a wolf’s head.” He glances at Threadscar, who’s been silent, just watching. “Local guard’ll give you training. Threadscar’s not the sociable type.”

Like I’m here begging for scraps.

The feline moves before I can respond. She slings an arm casually around Melissa’s shoulders, pulling her close with the kind of ease that says they know each other—or at least that the feline woman doesn’t give a damn if they don’t. Her tail curls lazily behind her.

“Months of watching from a distance with a headless broom, mrow?” Her mismatched eyes lock onto me, studying. “That’s not importuning, Bertram—that’s commitment. Most people give up after a week when nobody hands them what they want. You’ve been grinding alone for half a year.” She tilts her head, and I feel like she’s reading lines I didn’t know I’d written. “So here’s my question, kitten—what made you start? What happened six months ago that made you pick up that stick and decide you needed to learn how to hurt things?”

I meet the feline woman’s eyes.

“Six months ago, I saw her.” I nod toward Melissa without looking away from the exotic animal-person. “I was on a supply run to Mudbrook—dawn, cold, nobody around—and I saw her training by herself. No audience. No performance. No wasted motion. And she had scars—real ones, the kind that say ‘I have done things and survived them.’ I looked at her and I thought: that’s what freedom looks like. Not hoping someone notices you. Not waiting for permission. Just capability so undeniable that the world has to make room.”

I pause. Breathe. Don’t flinch.

“I went home that day and realized I didn’t have that. I was just… tasks. Endless tasks. Fifth priority for food, first priority for ‘Rill, do this.’ I could see my whole future: marry local, help run the waystation, disappear into the wallpaper. So I wrapped a broom handle in cloth because I didn’t have anything else, and I started showing up where she trains. Copying. Guessing. Probably doing it all wrong. But at least I was doing something. At least I wasn’t standing still.”

Bertram puffs on his pipe, something like appreciation in the slow exhale.

“Your folks run the waystation from the north road?” His voice comes careful. “You may be ditching a stable life for the opportunity to die bloody and broken in a ditch somewhere. That’s assuming nobody stole your dignity first. This world is more cruel than you’d think at your age… and it takes from you whatever it pleases, whenever it pleases.”

Melissa’s been still this whole time—watching, flat expression, giving nothing. But now she moves—shrugs off the feline woman’s arm and pulls me close against her side. Solid and real. My pulse kicks up.

Something flickers across that exotic woman’s face, too fast to catch. Then she steps back, tail swishing as she creates space.

“Mmh. I think you two have something to discuss without me hanging off your shoulder, meow.” Her mismatched eyes flick between us. “I’ll be right here. Watching. Learning. You know. Bard things.”

I step out from under Melissa’s arm and drop to my knees.

Hard ground. The broom handle rests across my thighs. Back straight, gaze level.

Bertram’s pipe lowers slowly.

“This kid seems to be made of stern stuff,” he says. His gaze shifts to Threadscar. “Too bad about her slim frame and the broom handle—but if you’d consider a disciple at any point, you could do much worse than this dedicated admirer.” He pauses. “That said, we all think we can take anything with the right attitude… until you get a mace to the face.”

Melissa’s expression stays flat. The silence stretches—that feline woman watching, the millrace rushing steady.

I stand. Not backing off—just refusing to stay collapsed at her feet like I’ve already given up on being her equal someday. I knelt to show respect. I stand to show I mean to become something worth teaching.

That silence—it’s doing something. Either making a decision or unmaking one.

Bertram’s eyebrows pull together. His gaze shifts from the feline woman to Melissa, to me, then back.

“Has… anything been resolved? I feel like something important has passed over my head.”

The feline woman’s eyes flick to him, then settle back on Melissa and me. Her tail curls lazily.

“Mmh, Bertram…” A slight smirk touches her mouth. “I think something important just happened. But whether it’s been resolved?” She glances at Melissa. “Not my story to tell.”

Standing here empty-handed feels incomplete. I extend the wrapped broom handle toward Melissa, holding it out with both hands.

“This is what I’ve had,” I say. “Six months of guessing with this thing. If you’re willing to teach me—actually teach me—then I want to start with real fundamentals. Not copying advanced forms I don’t understand. Not pretending I know what I’m doing. Just… the basics. Stance. Guard. Footwork. The stuff that makes everything else possible.”

I keep the broom handle extended. Voice steady. No begging.

“Take it. Look at it. See what I’ve been trying to learn from. And if you think I’m worth teaching, then show me how to do it right.”

Bertram lights his pipe, the flame briefly illuminating his face.

“This kid’s got heart,” he says around the stem, “but a poor sense of timing.” He exhales smoke. “We weren’t in the vicinity just for a stroll. Our fluffy cat-folk bard here—” He nods toward the feline woman. “—had taken a request to deal with some demonic poultry, and Threadscar, as our local veteran, had decided to act as backup. I’m just along for the ride.”

Demonic poultry.

Melissa takes the wrapped broom handle from my hands. Her grip shifts it through small, controlled motions—testing weight distribution, checking the balance point, examining how the cloth sits, whether the wrapping will hold or slip under pressure. Like she’s reading something I didn’t know I’d written.

“Six months with this.” Melissa’s voice comes flat. “The wrapping’s competent. You understood the problem—splinters, grip failure—and solved it functionally. Weight’s forward-heavy. That’s the handle design, not your mistake. Balance point’s here.”

She taps a spot roughly two-thirds down the shaft.

“You’ve been training with a weapon that fights you on every swing. That builds bad habits fast, but it also means you’re strong enough to compensate without knowing you’re doing it.”

She flexes the handle slightly, testing for structural integrity.

“It’ll snap if you block anything metal with commitment. You know that already or you wouldn’t be here asking for real instruction.”

First time anyone’s acknowledged it as real. My throat tightens. I don’t let it show.

Melissa turns the wrapped handle over one more time, flexes it slightly, then stops. Her gaze shifts from the broom handle to me, flat and assessing. Then she extends her longsword toward me, hilt-first, blade angled safely to the side.

“Here.” Her voice stays flat. “Hold this. Feel the difference. Weight, balance, how it sits in your hand. That’s what you’ve been trying to learn with a stick that fights you.”

I stare at the hilt. Battle-scarred leather wrapping, crossguard showing wear at the edges, the kind of weapon that’s seen actual use. She’s handing it to me.

“If you’re serious about real instruction,” Melissa continues, “you need to understand what you’re aiming for.” Her eyes lock onto mine. “Don’t swing it. Don’t test it. Just hold it and tell me what you notice.”

I take the longsword. Both hands wrap around the hilt. The weight settles—balanced. Centered. My hands are shaking.

I look up to meet Melissa’s flat gaze.

“It doesn’t fight me. The balance is clean. Centered. The broom handle pulls forward every swing—I have to compensate just to keep it under control. This?” I flex my grip slightly. “This feels like it’s waiting for instruction instead of dragging me around. The weight’s real, but distributed so I can use it instead of wrestle it.”

Bertram’s voice comes out more serious than usual.

“The tool of a trade few are prepared for, kid.” He taps his pipe, gaze steady on the longsword. “You’re holding in your hand metal that’s drunk the blood of many.”

Melissa extends her hand. I give the longsword back hilt-first, controlled, the way she handed it to me. She takes it with the same efficiency, then reaches for the wrapped broom handle still resting against her side.

“You’ve felt the difference now.” She extends the broom handle toward me, matter-of-fact. “This is yours.”

I take it. My work. Six months wrapped in cloth.

“You want real instruction. Stance, guard, footwork. Fine. But I don’t teach in a vacuum.” Her gaze shifts briefly to Bertram, then back to me. “We’ve got a job. Possessed chickens, north road. Vespera’s contract. I’m backup.”

A pause. She continues.

“Come along. Watch. See how movement works when stakes are real. You stay back. Don’t interfere. You observe—but this time you see the whole picture, not just me alone in a field. After the job, if you still want formal training, we’ll start with basics. That’s the offer. Decide if you’re coming.”

The feline woman—Vespera—adjusts the case slung across her back, tail swishing decisively. She starts walking without waiting for an answer.

“Well then. Melissa made her offer, Rill’s got her decision to make, and we’ve got possessed poultry waiting for us at 12 Kiln Lane. Meow, I don’t know about the rest of you, but I’d rather not keep a vengeful mother-in-law’s malevolent chicken waiting too long.” She throws a look back over her shoulder, mismatched eyes sharp. “Coming, or are we going to stand around the millrace discussing pedagogical philosophy until the damn birds organize a coup?”

“I’m coming.”

THE END

Fine Print & Featherbones (Short Story)

I step out of the Municipal Aid Registry—converted barn, old hay, bureaucratic optimism—into bright morning sun. Pleasant warmth for Mudbrook-on-the-Bend. My instrument case rides familiar weight against my back, dual blades settled at my hips.

Two people are approaching down the street. I recognize Bertram from earlier, and beside him—

Mrow. Interesting.

The woman beside him looks carved from scar tissue and sword practice. Longsword at her back, carried with enough casual competence to be part of her body. Threadscar, if Bertram’s earlier mention was accurate.

“Hey, what did I tell you,” Bertram says, addressing his companion but pitching it loud enough for me to hear. “A cat folk in the flesh. Isn’t she the darnest thing. Look at those whiskers.” He gestures in my direction like I’m a particularly fascinating market oddity. “Anyway, she’s got herself a mess with Aldous’ devilish chickens.”

My tail swishes once. Performing has its uses.

Threadscar’s gaze tracks over me—methodical, not curious. Weapons, instrument case, stance. Reading me like a contract with fine print. No wasted movement, no hurry. Just measuring.

When she finally speaks, her voice is controlled.

“You’re the one who took the chicken job.”

They have closed the distance now. Combat scars catch the light on her skin, small tells in how she holds herself. Someone who’s survived things that kill most people.

I smooth my whiskers briefly. Should I feel annoyed? I didn’t ask for help. But mostly I’m interested. That kind of survival leaves stories, and I collect those. Tactically speaking, if the “possessed poultry” turns out to be something wearing feathers ironically, having someone competent with a blade isn’t the worst idea.

And if things do get interesting, if there’s actual danger instead of just aggressive birds—

I shut down that thread before it can finish. Professional courtesy first.

“Mrow, that’s me. Vespera Nightwhisper, at your service.” I gesture vaguely toward the Registry behind me. “Seventeen birds, one allegedly possessed by a vengeful mother-in-law. Could be demonic poultry, could be grief and roosters. Either way, should be…” My heterochromatic eyes—amber and ice-blue—fix on her with genuine curiosity. “Educational.”

I tilt my head slightly, ears swiveling forward. “Bertram mentioned you. ‘Threadscar,’ right? He thought I might need backup.” Whiskers twitch. “What do you think? Do I look like I need saving from poultry, or are you just bored enough to see where this goes?”

Bertram produces a pipe from somewhere under his apron, tamping tobacco with practiced fingers. He lights it with a match, the narrow end settling at the corner of his mouth as smoke curls up. His eyes move between us like he’s watching theater.

“A way with words on this one, huh? That’s a bard for you, I guess.”

My attention is on Threadscar, because she’s the one who matters here.

She meets my mismatched eyes without blinking. No flinch, no fascination. Her voice comes out flat, professional.

“You don’t look like you need saving. You look like you haven’t worked this region before and don’t know what ‘possessed’ means out here yet. Could be theater. Could be something that bites back harder than you’re expecting.”

Her gaze flicks to my weapons—brief, cataloging—then back to my face. Filing information. Like she’s building a dossier in real-time.

“I’m not bored,” Threadscar adds. “I’m between contracts and Bertram thought the job might be more than one person should handle alone. If you want backup, I’ll assess the situation and act accordingly. If you don’t, I’ll find other work. Your call.”

Your call. No posturing, no pretense of saving the exotic newcomer. Just capability offered without strings. I respect that. More than respect it—I like it. This is someone who thinks in terms of practical outcomes, not spectacle. Someone who’s survived by being useful, not by being loud.

I pull the posted notice from my belt pouch and extend it toward her.

“Here. Read it yourself and decide if it’s worth your time.” My heterochromatic eyes fix on her, genuine curiosity sharpening the usual performance. “Bertram’s not wrong. I don’t know this region yet, and ‘possessed’ is vague enough to mean anything from grief-hallucinations to something that shouldn’t have a beak. If you’re between contracts and this sounds interesting, I’ll take the backup. If it sounds like a waste of your time, no hard feelings.” My whiskers twitch. “But either way, mrow, I’d rather know what I’m walking into before I knock on Aldous’ door.”

She takes it. Reads it like she’s checking for loopholes. Her eyes track across the text with the kind of precision that says she’s survived by catching the details other people miss. No commentary, no reaction visible on her face. Just information intake.

Bertram puffs his pipe, watching us. Taking his time. Then he gestures with the pipe stem, adding to his earlier introduction.

“To contribute to this meeting of warriors,” he says, voice carrying that folksy charm he wears like armor, “let me add some information that may or may not improve the quality of your trade: I know Aldous to be an honest tradesman. He’s been talking uneasily about those chickens for a good while now. Weeks, really.”

Bertram pauses, letting smoke curl. “He mentions that one of them looks… like he knows what he’s looking at. And he’s corrupted some of his other chickens too. Corrupted—that’s the word Aldous used.”

Mrow. That word lands differently than “possessed.” Corrupted implies spread. Deliberate influence. Not just one problem bird, but infection. Behavior changing, patterns shifting. That’s either the most elaborate case of anthropomorphization I’ve ever encountered, or there’s something at Kiln Lane that’s wearing chickens like masks and teaching the others to do the same.

My tail swishes once. Not performance—genuine unease, threaded with that dangerous curiosity that gets people like me into trouble.

Bertram continues.

“Could be, though, that Aldous really hated his mother-in-law and she happened to have some hen-like qualities. Never had a mother-in-law myself. Anna was orphaned young.”

Threadscar is still reading, unmoved by Bertram’s commentary. Filing it somewhere, probably, but not letting it interrupt her process. She doesn’t get pulled off-task by color or charm. Data first, texture later.

Bertram shifts his attention to me, lowering his pipe for a moment.

“I’m curious, miss cat. Do you waltz into battle with that instrument case at your back? That’s the tool of your trade, isn’t it?” His eyes crinkle with genuine interest. “Aren’t you worried that some counterattack may destroy your means to get money off taverns? I have a hard time picturing you putting down the case and shoving it back before you wield those sharp weapons of yours.”

Threadscar finishes reading, then hands the notice back to me. Her eyes find mine, holding my mismatched gaze without hesitation.

“I’ll go with you. If it’s just chickens, we’ll handle it fast and split the pay. If it’s something else, you’ll want someone who’s cleared pastoral weird before. We leave now, assess the site, execute the contract, done.”

The instrument case rides heavy on my back. Fair question. Most people don’t think past the weapons—they see the blades and assume that’s the whole story. But the lute-viol isn’t just a tool. It’s the only thing I actually care about without complication, without performance, without—

No. I’m not explaining that vulnerability to a tanner I met twenty minutes ago, no matter how earnest his pipe-smoke charm is.

Whiskers twitch. I offer him a slight smile.

“You’re not wrong to worry, Bertram. But I’ve been carrying her into fights for years now, and she’s survived everything I have.” I tap the leather with one clawed finger—the reinforcement shows in the thickness, the way the case holds its shape even when I move. Custom work, expensive, worth it. “The case is reinforced. Not just decorative. And honestly? Leaving her behind would be worse. I don’t perform well when I’m wondering if someone’s rifling through my things.” My tail swishes once. “This way, she stays with me. Always.”

I turn my mismatched eyes to Threadscar. She made her decision clean and professional. Just read the posting, assessed, committed. I want to see how she works when things get complicated.

“Right. You’re in. Good.” I nod toward the path that leads toward the old millrace. “We leave now, assess the site at 12 Kiln Lane, and see what ‘demonic poultry’ actually looks like before we decide how to handle it.” I glance back at Bertram. “Thanks for the backup—and the context about Aldous. ‘Corrupted chickens’ is delightfully vague. Let’s go see what that means, mrow.”

Bertram taps ashes off his pipe, eyebrows lifting.

“‘Bertram, thanks for the backup,’ as in stay behind while we head off to battle?” He says it lightly, but there’s genuine curiosity underneath. “I’m asking in case you wouldn’t mind an old tanner witnessing something intriguing in this lovely morning. If things get nasty, maybe I could knock some poultry unconscious with a well-aimed throw of my pipe.”

Threadscar’s expression doesn’t shift, but she takes a breath before she speaks. Running the calculation: civilian, noncombatant, knows Aldous personally, decent accuracy with small objects maybe. Liability in real combat. Potential asset for client context.

When she answers, her voice is controlled but final.

“You can come if you stay behind us, don’t touch anything that moves, and leave the moment I tell you to. No argument, no delay.” She looks at him flatly, then glances at the pipe in his hand. “If something goes wrong, you’re not my priority—keeping the threat contained is.”

She shifts her gaze back to me. Mission focus. “We move now. North road, Kiln Lane.”

My tail swishes once without permission. Right. Follow her lead. She knows the region. I don’t. Let her set the pace, watch how she navigates, learn the terrain through her rhythm.

But something else threads through my thoughts, something dangerous I need to strangle before it takes root. If this job turns into actual danger—if there’s something at 12 Kiln Lane with teeth where beaks shouldn’t have them—I’ll get to see how Threadscar works under pressure. Whether she freezes or gets clearer when the violence starts. Everyone tells a story when the stakes climb. I want hers.

I adjust the strap of my instrument case across my back, settling the familiar weight, then glance at Bertram. He’s still watching us, pipe smoke curling upward, expecting… something. Dismissal? Another round of banter?

My whiskers twitch. Quick smile.

“Thanks for the backup and the context. We’ll handle it.”

I turn toward Threadscar, fall into step beside her. My tail swishes with anticipation I’m not entirely proud of. “Let’s see what’s waiting for us, mrow.”

Behind us, Bertram’s voice carries confusion.

“I’m… receiving conflicting information.” A pause. The sound of him adjusting his grip on the pipe. “But that’s okay, I’ll follow from a safe distance. Maybe I could get Aldous to blabber something important about these demonic chickens of his.”

THE END


Some of the “short stories” of this fantasy cycle will read more like simple scenes. I’m okay with that. I’m gearing toward making them self-contained. You could check out any in whatever order you prefer, then seek possible other shorts leading to them, or from them. That fits how I’ve felt when rereading my Re:Zero fanfiction from years ago.